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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
it was a very cute part !! I wish they showed sthg like this in the show instead of ending up the best character !!
it was amazing !! loll suhaag raat 😳, glad u closed curtains at the right time 😉😆
update soon !!

ooops, I think I've forgotten to comment on the previous part, it was great as usually !! n thnx for the invite, I rhad so much fun with Preet during the wedding 😳😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: riyaasehgall

hey liked it realy..............<br>but y dnt u pm me????????<br>m angry about dt.....<br>



Hey sorry about that. I will next time for sure 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tadashi

oooh! frisky part!!! I loved it! i wish they would have revealed the story this way in the show too! Hehe....is gungun going to be getting another sibling soon?



I wished that too. another sibling..hmm..good idea
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnime

it was a very cute part !! I wish they showed sthg like this in the show instead of ending up the best character !!<br>it was amazing !! loll suhaag raat 😳, glad u closed curtains at the right time 😉😆<br>update soon !!<br><br>ooops, I think I've forgotten to comment on the previous part, it was great as usually !! n thnx for the invite, I rhad so much fun with Preet during the wedding 😳😆<br><br><br>



I will update after dec 8. I will be done with exams 😃 thanks a lot for liking it. i forgot to invite myself 😆 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I hope we get to see Meet more and i dont want Preet to die.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 update!
can't wait for Ash's truth to be out!
plz cont. soon...
n pm me whn u update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 8

The sun was shining at preet, disturbing his sleep. he yelled which woke up meher who was in his arms. she looked at him thinking what happened now.
meher(looking at preet): preet kya hua?
preet(angry and irritated. looking towards the window): meher mujhe koi soonay nahi daita. chand to mujhe tung kerta hi hai (indicating his bauji) aur ab yeh suraj bhi. dekho tum...(as he turned to look at meher he forgot what he was saying. the sun shining on meher's face made her look like an angle. she was looking different today he thought. there was a glow on her face)
meher: preet kyun itna ghussa ho rahay ho. relax.tum meri side par soo jao. yahan suraj nahi......preet....preet....main tumse baat ker rahi hun preet.tum theek ho na?
preet (he was so lost while looking at meher he didnt realize she was still talking): uh haan meher bolo?
meher: preet maine kaha tum meri side par soo jao yahan suraj nahi aa raha.
as she was about to get up, preet layed half of his body on top of her.
meher(trying to push him away): preet yeh kya ker rahay ho tum? hato na
preet: abhi tumne hi to kaha tumhari side par soo jaon.to main soo raha hun (he rested his head between meher's neck and shoulder. he fit perfectly. smiling to himself he tried to sleep but he knew meher was not that nice and would not let him sleep)
meher: preet utho na.mera matlab yeh nahi tha.waisay bhi kaafi time ho gaya hai.aj kaafi dair ho gayi hai waisay hi.aur sab ka nashta mujhe banana hai aj kyun ke heer didi ki shaadi hui aur nayi dulhan se kaam nahi kerwatay.
preet(still sleeping on meher): to theek hai tum bhi kaam nahi karogi.
meher:main kyun nahi kaam karungi? (confused)
preet: uff meher.tum bhool gayi kya? kal hamari shaadi hui thi.aur suhaag raat bhi.yaad nahi kya? (meher blushes) to tum bhi to nayi dulhan ho.to tum kaise kaam karogi.
meher: preet agar main kaam nahi karungi to sab ko nashta kaun daiga
preet got up and said: main hun na!!
meher: tummmm
preet: yes meher! aj main tumhare liye nashta banaunga!
meher: nashta tum? (launghing) tum sahi se shirt nahi pehen sakte aur tum nashta banaogay?
preet: main shirt sahi se pehen sakta hun! bas mujhe buttons pasand nahi.they are so hard. anyways.ab tum jaldi jaldi tayyar ho aur main tumhare liye garma garam nashta lata hun. you just wait and watch what I can do.
meher: ok preet. dekhte hai kya kerte ho tum.
saying this meher went towards the closet to take out a dress to wear. preet went upto her and hugged her from behind. pulling out a red shalwar kameez ,which he gifted her on karwa chaut, he said: yeh wala pehno.
meher turned red as preet started to get romantic again. she freed herself from him and told him to make breakfast as she gets ready. preet went towards the kitchen. since he had stayed away from home by himself, he learned how make a decent breakfast. he made some tea and toasted some breads. as he was waiting for the tea, someone grabbed him from behind. he smiled as he thought its meher but then he realized that meher would hardly do this in their bedroom then she would never do in the kitchen. also he knew meher's touch and this was not meher. it was ashlesha. preet was shocked to what she was doing. he totally forgot about her.
ashlesha: goodmorning preet
preet: go..goodmorning ash (trying not show how uncomfortable he was feeling that someone other than meher was touching him)
ashlesha: tum subah subah kitchen main kya ker rahay ho? pata hai maine tumhe kitna miss kia
preet moved away from ash and said: woh..woh main nashta lainay aya tha apne liye. meher to daigi nahi ab mujhe!
ash: oh preet.waise main keh daiti ke tum mujhse keh daitay laikin kya hai na mujhe nashta banana nahi ata
preet(felt happy that she didnt know): no problem ash.maine bana lia hai nashta.
ash: to chalo hum room main saath breakfast kerte hai
preet: nahi! (ash looked at him in suprise) woh abhi ghar walon ko nahi bataya kuch to abhi tum apne room main jao aur main apne room main.
ash went to her room. as she disappeared preet ran as fast as he could to his room leaving everything behind. as he entered the room he saw meher and he hugged her so tightly. it was like as if a small child saw a ghost and meher was a fairy who took away all his fear.
meher: preet kya hua? tum itna daray hue kyun ho?
preet: meher woh..woh...woh ash
meher: ash? kya hua ash ko?
preet: main nashta bana raha tha aur...(he told her the whole incident)
meher (tried not to laugh): so Mr. Preet Juneja aik larki se darr gaya? aj suraj kahan se nikla hai?
preet (he broke the hug and looked at meher with a serious face): meher tumhare ilawa mujhe koi aur larki touch karay mujhe acha nahi lagta.i love you so much.please never go away from me. (saying this he took meher in a very passionate kiss which lasted for a few minutes) you look very beautiful Mrs. Preet Juneja.
meher blushed which made preet very happy as he loved to see his wife all shy. gungun, sitting on the bed, called preet: papa!!
preet looked at her and smiled. he thought meher must have brought their daughter in the room. although he got to spend a lot of time with meher, he missed his daughter. he went to her and gave her a tight hug and kissed her cheeks. gungun kissed his cheeks too. they both sat on the bed and started to play with each other. meher went towards the dresser to wear some jewellary. as she finished, she went towards the bed.
meher: gungun chalo beta main appko breakfast kerwa daiti hun.
preet picked up gungun and made her sit on his lap and said: meri princess ko abhi bhook lagi hai kya? (gungun shook her head in a no) meher isay abhi bhook nahi lag rahi. thori dair baad khila daina. yahan betho na thori dair please (pointing towards the empty space on the bed in front of him)
meher (she put her hands on her waist): preet tumhe kya ho gaya? aj kal kuch ziada hi romantic nahi ho rahay? kitne kaam hai aur tum....(preet took her hand and made her sit on the bed)
preet: meher itne din tumse durr bhi to raha hun.
meher looked at him and saw the love in his eyes. she could not say no to her husband. he always does this she thought. but she couldnt resist. as they were engrossed in each other. they heard a knock on the door.meher got up but preet had her hand in his hand. she tried to free herself but preet wouldnt let her.
meher: preet choro! (they heard kuldi through the door) preet kuldi aayi hain. choro(looking helplessly at him but preet kept his smile and didnt let her go. after a few minutes he let her go but as she was leaving he caught hold of her dupatta but meher didnt realize this as she was too worried about getting to the door)
kuldi: aray meher kab se knock ker rahi hun.itni dair kahan laga di?
meher: woh di woh...
kuldi: ohhhh ab main samjhi. (giving her a smirk) tu yahan tera dupatta wahan (pointing towards preet)
meher searched for the dupatta on her neck but found it around preets neck as she turned around. preet was listening to the conversation but he pretended to be too busy with playing with his daughter as he didnt want to face his sister who would leave no chance to getting revenge by teasing. feeling very embarrased as kuldi caught their romance meher said: nahi di aisi koi baat nahi bas woh...
kuldi: haan haan ur ker dupatta wahan chala gaya. acha chal tu jaldi se neeche aa.nashta banana hai aur heer ko bhi to jagana hai.pata nahi aj sab late uth rahay hai.shaadi kisi aur ki hui aur dupatta kisi aur ka ur raha hai (winking at meher she left the room)
meher was feeling very shy but as soon as she turned around she saw a laughing preet. she gave him an angry glare which made him stop laughing.he knew meher doesnt like romance in front of others. she went towards him to take her dupatta back.
meher: tumhe sharam nahi aati!! kuldi ke samne aisi harkatain!!
preet: kaisi harkatain? mian biwi hai hum to phir kaisi sharam!!
meher: choro.ab chalo neeche. nashta nahi kerna kya.
preet: tum angry young woman ki tarah jab mujhe daanti ho na to bauhat cute lagti ho (pulled her cheeks)
preet picked up gungun and followed meher. he knew meher was angry at him but he loved to tease her like this. her anger made his day.
the whole family was sitting having breakfast. preet and meher knew they had to tell them about ash now. preet looked at meher and then at ash who gave him a smile. as preet was about to speak he saw harman bhai and bauji getting up.
preet: app dono kahan jaa rahay ho? woh mujhe app sab logon se baat kerni thi kuch.
bauji: preet abhi nahi.aj bauhat zaroori meeting hai kuch property ke silsilay main aur harman aur mujhe jana hai urgently.
preet: laikin bauji....(before he could say anything bauji and harman bhai already left)
preet wanted all the family members, specially bauji, to be present when he reveals the truth. he decided to wait till the evening until bauji and harman bhai came back. he felt meher's hand holding his hand under the table. meher could feel his frustration but she assured him by this jesture that everything would be okay and they can tell when they come back. it was amazing how he could feel what she wanted to say without her saying it. now they had to wait for the evening.
here is another part. I was going to reveal ash's truth in this part but decided to do it next time. i hope you like it and if you wanted me to reveal her truth in this part then i am sorry i didnt. enjoy😊oh i liked that dupatta scene between heer and prem so used it here. he he. sorry for any mistakes
Edited by unknown18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
nice and cute update
update the next part asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏 ....it was amazing yr...keep up d gud work!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
nice part............ya lovd the dupatta scene..
nd preet running frm ashh.....gr8
update soon...
nd thnx for the pmmmmm

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