New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 26

-Luv Pari

alritteeyy!!!! well for starterss...i loved the enddingg!! not because u mentioned preet...(no wayy!!!) but because u mentioned him at the end instead of thruout the chapter :D so luckily we had more of prem than preet this timee!! (btw where is preet in kis desh!!! i miss him soo mucchchch...and in a way i do want u to write about him so we have some preet magic back in action :D)

kk moving on....flashbackss!!! if i was ever stranded in a desert without food and water, i'd be able to live with premeer's flashbackss in this ff !!!!! it's soo...hmm...(kk again, didn't check the thesaurus😔) but it was very LOVELYY!!! they're soo cuteee!!! bohaut bada chuhaaa...and prem-maya's bonding was waayy to cutteee and funnyy!!!!!!! i love how it was a natural thing for heer to leave her window open..and how he wud just come in to see her and then leavee!!!!!! if only someone did tht for mee😍 ....**back in reality** the window in my room isn't exactly "climb-able" nor is there a balcony!! gosshh...gotta send these housing architects to indiaa!!!!!!

oo and i lovedd the mehndi fb!!! how prem smiled at heer's reaction to mehndi, and seems to like mehndi...howww chwweeeeettt!!!!!!

and kk i need to get to this before i forgett: i LOVED HEER'S CONFRONTATION BEYOND EVERYTHING ELSE YOU WROTE ABOUTT!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏 (btw..the applause is for u, not for heer :)) her dialogues wer verryy well scriptedd!! i love how heer can be so straight up yet kind! like the time with the biji lady...she wasn't trying to sound sarcastic or give a "taana" or something, she was just telling the story of her life! and once again, she was just having a natural convo with her mom and brothers! she told her mother straight up why she doesn't wanna be a part of raksha bandhan without any hesitation! then again..what's there to hesitate about..like u said..there's nothing to hide about her past, which is what made her who she is today!!! :D and the way she told off her brothers..if only i was there in person...i wud've added a bunch of physical fighting, but i think heer handled the situation pretty well too 😆 im sure that was a tight slap in their faces!! like okay i understand tht it was a "mistake" if u put it that way! but why was rishab there with a chaku in the first placee!!! cudn't his words have been threatening enuf, that he felt the need to bring a knife??? and i loved heer for counter-questioning (did that word sound right..😕) them!! why wudn't they give him a chance to survivee!!! on a personal note, i love my brother to death and beyond, and to read about these sorry excuses of brothers makes me feel quite sad for heer :( im glad she gave them an explanation as to why rakhsha bandhan is a worthless occasion for her..i'm hoping it knocks some sense into them.......and then they decide to contact some secret agents, and revive prem from the jungle! and then prem will be alive again, and all the deshians will not chase u to timbaktoo with belans and cricket bats 😃

hmm....kk so now im kinda getting the impression tht heer's brothers were scared of prem..like deep,deep, deep, and waayy morre deep down..LOL! i mean im sure the "status" factor was also there, but i think they were also afraid of losing their position in heer's life! i think all brothers in general are protective/ possessive like that...if one guy come's into their sister's life, things begin to change between the siblings......so mayb heer's brothers were insecure....

but backing away from a deep analysis..heer's brothers are the murderers of prem..heer's prem...OUR PREM! so they were probably just jealous of his good looks :DDD

newayyss...i think im editing this post on a differ ff 😕 so im gonna copy and paste it to tanhaii and then hit the bed for school 2moro

so u better update soon darling...and keep me posted

keep writing magnificently (have i used tht one yet??)

lots of loveeee

ur Sammy Bacha 😉

Do you have anything against me. Everytime you make me cry whenever I read your ss. You started with a tragic note itself.

Veera is such a good sister. She is sorry that she is happy but heer is not. "Aapni zindagi ke bees (20) saal mein maine aapni saari kushiyaan ji li hai…Prem ke saath", awesome dialogue. You brought smile to my face with meher telling them to be lazy bones when they had 1 million things to do. Thank god at time when I was on verge of crying again, meher saved me.

Bechare prem ka taang toot gaya uska😉. I loved that dialogue when prem said "haath toh lagake dekhe"—too good. I was laughing like anything when maya looked at prem "ki bahut bada chuha tha" aur prem vahan ladoo kahane aaya tha ya heer se milne🤣.

The scene where heer confronted her brothers was most tragic. These guys have guts to even stand in front of her and say all these. They would never be ashamed of what they did to her. Would never realize what they have taken away from her. Can't they see and feel her pain. What kind of brothers are these. Totally cheap.

Somewhere when kulraj was explaining was children about the duties of a brother, i was thinking that heer brother enver kept those promises they made to heer. She must have bottled all those feelings of hatred for her brothers within her for some many years and now its good that its out in open. Her brothers deserve much more than this.

The mehndi scene was so cute. Ok tell me is it mere a coincidence that prem and preet both names start with 'p'-the letter on heer's hands. Plz don't let this happen. Let it be just for prem. Do end the mystery with preet in next update plz. Waiting eagerly for one.

I have to say this jaz, you have a great talent, you writing really moves us, has a great effect on us, makes us cry every time we read, no matter how hard we try no to. I guess next time too I should be ready to be emotional while reading your ss and crying on every painful scene where you depict heer's misery. Plz, plz, plz and plz get prem back. I promise I will even give lots of chocolates, especially my favorite Dairy Milk which I don't like to share with anybody. But for heer and prem sake I am ready to do even that. Along with it loads of flowers to make your day. Plz jaz mann jao naa. 🤗. Plz sweety.

Sia

how was you Eid? Mine was awesome. Family get togethers and lots of yummy food. Lol

The update was as usual fantastic especially the part where Heer and her brothers had the argument. I'm on Heer's side. Her brothers killed her husband. If they think just by apologising everything will be alright, they are so wrong. Heer should never forgive them for life.

Looks like her family is trying to fix her rishtaa with Preet Mehta. I can't wait to see Heer's reaction when she finds out about this. Continue soon.

Nadia