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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

*edited (finally)*

They won't be as long as they usually are Jaz, sorry *hugs* and from now they might not be cus of uni πŸ˜” But meh what matters is that I'm here! *hugs* *sigh*...yes what matters is that you are here...university take the fun out of everything...not fair *pouting*...but thank u...for taking the time 😳😳

Thank god everyone knew about the rishta before hand, I would def not wanna see a repeat of what happened before...but aww Veera was trying to leave Heer alone for her own benefit? Don't I know how that is *sighs* but yay for having a heart to heart now 😊 ya...i wasnt doing to cause that drama all over again...just imagine...tauba ...nope...drama will come up in other forms...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya (apparently this is now my favorite line...so be prepared to see it a few more times πŸ˜†πŸ˜†)

Manmeet? 😲 Why do I not sense goodness coming from this? *frowns* Awwww poor Veera, swearing off love because of what happened? πŸ˜” That's sad... well...can you blame the poor girl...after seeing that happened to her sister...hell...id probably do the same thing *sigh*

I loved the heart to heart Jaz! that honestly was really touching to read between both the sisters! 😳 I'm glad Veera understood their relationship so well...I loved how the three bhabhi's came in😳 And aww Kulraj started crying? πŸ˜” Bad Maya and Meher for blaming her pregnancy hormones 😳 i always wish i had a sister i could talk to like that...sadly...ive got one younger...very annoying...little brother...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...but i do have awesome bhabi's....i've been lucky...they are like my sisters...i can tell most of them anything...love them to pieces 😳😳😳...

The way you described Veera's outfit, sounded gorgeous! 😳 And awww Heer came as moral support, I loved how they were all spying on those two 😳 And *giggles* the boys came as well? πŸ˜› That's cute! πŸ˜› lmao....spying is what i do...ask Guli...im her kabab mein hadi and jiju is still in india πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...im like the saali from hell πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...what funny is...abhi tak shaadi nahin hui uski...they are only engaged...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Ohhh the debate competition thng sounds so cute, giving them time together away from everyone! *sighs* And awww he cried in Love Story *grins* He's soooo adorable! 😳 And ohh Laksh! πŸ˜› (That makes me think of Pulkit Samrat from Kyunki! πŸ˜›) Cute! πŸ˜ƒ ha ha...you know what...Laksh is the same on from kyunki πŸ˜†πŸ˜† it just popped into my head so i used it πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

omg!!! Laksh to bilkul fatoo nikla! lmao! πŸ˜† Poor guy! πŸ˜› *shakes head* Itna bhi koi darta hain? and they're not even in the same city! πŸ˜† now they arent in the same city...but imagine when they get home...Maan brother coming to kick his ass cuz he hit on their sister 🀣

That was sooo ishq vishq style when he self-declared himself as her bf! 😳 *grins* I loved it! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ The entire flashback was just sooo cute Jaz! Premeer are adorable! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³ Cute teens! πŸ˜›omg...ishq vishq is an awesome movie....so cute...i love shahid and amrita...they are so cool!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ glad that you liked the flash back 😳

And I love the way you brought Heer outta the flashback! πŸ˜› Very cool! πŸ˜ƒ And aww maybe Manmeet's not bad? *erm* hmm...you know...i forget what i write sometime...how did i bring her out...gotta look it up πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...and yes...manmeet is not bad...he is all good...trust me πŸ˜›

But I'm sooo glad veera's happy, Manmeet better stay good! *narrows eyes* haila...narrowing eyes...main toh daar gayi *body shaking* πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

Off to the next update! πŸ˜ƒ

Love you, me too!! πŸ€—
Meera😳



Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I get to edit my comments for two parts now! πŸ˜ƒ Be super proud that this is getting updated before Gari and Guli! πŸ˜› I'm super proud of myself! 😳 πŸ˜› yes...yay for you!! Guli can be lazy when it comes down to it...and yet she is always after me...*sigh*...

*edited*

Veera was crying over her clothes...*shakes head* Some things don't change na? πŸ˜› πŸ˜† I loved that the kids came to tell Heer, that's cute! 😳 I loved the way you wrote about all the bhabhi's being kinda fed up with Veera's tantrum, and go Heer for thinking up a proper solution to the whole thing! πŸ˜† Awwww *hugs for Heer* Course she's kinda jealous, they were sooo horrible 7 years ago with her, and now they're all crazy happy and poor Prem had to suffer the entire time, but I still have faith in you! πŸ˜³πŸ˜› (follow through! πŸ˜‰) Veera is your typical girl...id freak too if i was in her place...vaise bhi...any excuse to go shopping...kyun? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...still have faith in me....thanks...lets see if i can break it πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...i have my reasons...you will see 😈

Awww you described the whole day out with the girls so cutely, it must've been so much fun! πŸ˜› I love that no matter what Heer stays Prem's widow 😳 *sighs* Pyar ho to aisa! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ Awww you made her sound so gorgeous! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³ OMG!!! Manmeet's feelings when he saw Veera, had me grinning (that almost never happens btw πŸ˜›) i did that with one of my friends actually...we went to store after store...after store...after store (you get the idea)...to find her perfect dress, shoes and earrings for her first date...tauba...never been so annoyed with shopping that that week...*sigh*...but it paid off...she got her dream date and dream man...3yrs and still going strong 😳😳😳

Can I just say I love Prem? cus I do...oops! Skipped too ahead didn;t? 😳 I was uhem kinda looking for Prem...but I'll go back...*ahem* Loved hte part with Maya helping Heer out with a scenario to get out of the house, and then Heer herself ruining it! πŸ˜† But yay for Prem! πŸ˜ƒ He wants her to wear a saree? *swoons* He's adorable! 😳 Awww I loved how you described her getting ready, it was really realistic! πŸ˜› you love Prem...NO! not possible...i thought you hated him πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...im being sarcastic...just fyi πŸ˜†...Heer was pretty dense in that scene...a complete blond moment πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

He booked the entire place for them? 😲 Prem...is a total sweetheart, and awww I love what he's wearing! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ orchids? 😲 I love orchids *sighs* I want Prem *swoons* Awww the necklace is purty! πŸ˜³πŸ˜› And aww I love that song! 😳 And haye! Prem ! 😳 "tumhe khone ka darr" How romantic! 😳 Not a huge surprise but still πŸ˜› Prem is a keeper! i want him...or someone like him...*sigh*...where are all the good men?! they are either taken or gay...wtf is up with that 😑😑...humara kya hoga yaar? soocho...kya karein?

Shaadi? 😲 But I love what Heer said to him! πŸ˜† So true πŸ˜› This was honestly the second cutest flashback ever! 😳 the first one was when htey were kids! *giggles* that kid fb was pretty cute wasnt it...id love to see them as kids on the show..😍

I am in shock at the way Heer head on said everything about her life, I'm sooo proud of her! *hugs* But aww the engagement sounded adorable! 😳heer has more confidence than she did back then...well..maybe not confidence...she has more anger and hate in her...it has to come out...πŸ˜‰

PREET!!!!!!! 😲 I swear....if you even TRY to make it it Preet-Heer...I will cry! I've done that way too much lately Jaz, don't make me cry! πŸ˜” (don't you love how intense I get? πŸ˜›) But I'm still serious about it! *frowns* omg....i thought you were gonna say somethign like you were gonna kill me...but only cry...chal...its ok...go for it...buckets chahiyeh...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...love you gudiya!!!



JAZ
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ok...i wont comment,.....
just one request!
Please let Prem be alive!!
and let Premeer meet once...pls!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update jaz.
Very emotional.
Awesome update.
Plz update the next part too
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Posted: 16 years ago

edited😊

😭for heer's pain.plz dear disclose something about premmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
😑for mann brothers dheet kahin k.
😊for flashback.fb was too cuteeee and sweettttttttt specially mehndi wala.maya is really nice bhabi na
and again preet mehraπŸ˜•
but again a amazinggg and lovely update.πŸ‘
update soon 😊
Edited by maha_k - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
my spot
Edit :
Oh Jaz 😭 ........Heer's outburst was soooooo heart wrenching .....each and every dialogue of her's to her brothers was soo emotional and it made me cry.....beautifully written ....you have brought out agony very well ......
loved the veera-heer scene....love their bonding...
absolutely love Maya here.... loved her scenes with heer and prem ....loved the lines you wrote how she and maya remembered the chuha incident....
Oh my , the flashbacks were awesome.....damn cute and romantic...reading them, i wish i too had a lover like prem....*cautiously glancing over to chk if hubby's around , lol*
So Rishad says he didnt purposely stab prem....but like heer asked why didnt they save him?
is that why you said in some post that rishad isnt all that bad ?
Preet Mehta did not make his entry πŸ˜ƒ Good ....he better dont....let just his name do the rounds for others to contemplate....
We want Prem's entry ! let Prem enter and wipe out Heer's tears ....Heer deserves happiness , she deserves her PREM ....
eagerly waiting for your next updates...when can we expect ?
πŸ˜†
luv
Angie
Edited by angel82 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved the update... enjoyed it as always.. wondering who is this Preet???
waiting for the next update and your PM..
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice update
mehandi flashback was nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice flasfbacks!!! i hope this preet has some link with prem....

loved thepart
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Posted: 16 years ago
another awesomeeeeeeeee update...............
can't wait to c what happens next....................
so plz update soonnnnnnnnnnnn...................
I rely hope this preet is prem in disguise........................
and rely wana c premeer get 2gther soonnnnnnnn..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Jazzzzzz...............I kinda like adding ZZZZZZZZZ's to your name how cool, anyhoo happy belated Eid mubark, I hope you were successful in collecting Eids b/c people is US of A are Knajoos Makkhi choos, I mean when I was a kid in Pakistan 1000 rupees were norm, here I am batting Zero dollars, sucks big time.🀒
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Back to the story, if I call you a jallad again; it is not b/c I don't love you, its just that I think you are a masochist....keeping Prem away from Heer......me want Prem. Dude you are such a brilliant, wonderful, rocking writer-- resurrecting Prem back from the dead would be like "your daneen hath ka khel" please please please.....don't make me grovel

OK, so absolutely loved the bonding b/w the sisters.....sorta made me wish I had a sis.....the imagery was superb.............so poignant...........Heer was mind blowing in expressing her desire for Veera's happiness, on the other hand Veera surprised me with her maturity...good going Veera

Did I ever tell you that EKTA should sooo hire you.....all of Ekta's -ve characters are the best people in your story.....Maya Bhabhi is so cool and so in tune with Heer.....I want a Maya Bahabi so she can tease me with my Prem.....oh wait I need to get Prem first.......PREM PREM PREM .........kahaanh hoo......... oh I forgot some sangdil, no wait pathar dil killed him off 😭😭😭....me want Prem....bring me Prem....on a serious note-- Prem like the one in your story just don't exist in real life.....why can't fiction be reality....why why.........me sad now ,,,,,,,,oh well, on the bright side if I don't have Prem, neither does Heer....HAHAHA

well crazy talk aside Heer's confrontation with Zalim Jallad Maann (henceforth will be called JZ Maan---get it Jay Z like the singerπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†) actually made me cry and not just lame crying bouts but actually depressing cry, so much is the power of your story.....I felt so bad for Heer............<please give her Prem back>

by the way writing wise I wish I could fill this page with πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ but than I don't want your head to blow upπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† and explode b/c me am friend of yours....or am I????

Coming back to Heer..... what is wrong with the girl.....not liking Mehndi....I look for reasons to put Mehndi on.....of course I crack up when my non desi guys friends in school show a keen desire to put Heena on.....seriously demag kharab hai in chokros ka....but I love how at least once like a bride Heer had P for Prem on her hands.....mind it Jazz P for Prem not Preet .....did I tell you I want Prem back

I think enough of my bhondi bakwas...........I think I am also a masochist for loving actually crazy loving your sad story...this story aside, you could so be Jhumpa Lahiri or perhaps even better b/c your writing flows like a symphony and I am a fan, so if you ever become a best seller author me get first dibs on your books...comprende

By the way I just want to apologize if any of my blabber hurts your feelings it is all pure me humor .....love your writing....BUT ME WANT PREM....ME WANT PREM.....its like fighting with SP ME WANT PREM

and for JZ Maan men I can;t think for a sazza today so me will have to think of something gruesome

adios


Edited by fungrl - 16 years ago

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