New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 27

Originally posted by: *Guli*

I am here!!!!😳 I know you missed me!!!!!! because... of course jaani... i miss you 2!!!!😳😳 Ur like my next door neighbor and we hardly see each other!!!😭 wat an outrage this is!!!!😭 OMG...you're telling me 😡...it sucks...but but but...when we do have time together...he he...its just mauja hi mauja ..😆 btw...are you getting ready for the bridal shower...he he...come up with more questions...you better get ready...you are gonna die all red...😉😉😉..kehte hai naa...sharam se maar jaoge! 😛😛

Anyways no more getting all emotional now.... we always doing that!!😆 nothing new for us.... but still.... wat can you do!!!😉... awww what a cute update!!!! and haila 2 flashbacks!!!!👏👏 so proud!!👏👏👏 deserves 2 thumbs up!!👍🏼👍🏼.... in case you didnt notice...every update (almost) has two flashbacks 😆😆...shows how much attention you are putting 😛

aww Prem was called a mouse!!! man😆😆😆.. i can so imagine us in that picture!! DJ would come and see me..... and if u were in Maya's place.... oh man!!! DJ would be a goner!!! and i mean big time!!!!!!... but then he would think wisely and smartly of how to come in if he knew that you were around! 😆😉 aww.... thats cute how Maya likes him!!! and Prem is such a sweet heart.... actually we all like him as well!!!👏⭐️ he's a keeper!!!! but then "someone" just had to kill him off in this story..!!!😡 wont mention who.....😡 helll ya...if Jiju came to see you...woh bhi choroon ki tarha...oh hell no! 😛...i call your brothers or mine for you...😃😃😃...besharmi ki bhi haad hoti hai...😡😡😡...im telling you...im the prefect SAALI

Aww..... Heer told her brothers.... but they so deserved it!!!😡 i swear..... they are saying sorry?! man sorry wont even cut it... like totally not.... they didnt do a little thing... they done a huge thing and damage is already done and you cant go and fix it!!!!........ what heer told them was true!!!! way to go!👏 jaani...you know all about the brothers...😉😉 unn bhaiyoon ko toh main dekhlungi 😛😛😛

Aww... 2nd flashback was hella cute as well!!! i so liked it..... but the way he sneaks up in the bedroom.. let me tell u.... man... i might get a few ideas 😉.. hmm maybe i should leave my window open as well in india... hmm.......... thanks for the great ideas babe!!!!!... ur one of a kind!!!!😆 ..... oye! 😲😲😲...DONT YOU DARE!!! leave windows open in india...baath karti hai! i've got my spy going with you...trust me...Payu is already trained...she will be FULLY trained in the are of KMD-ism b4 u leave! speaking of which...i need to talk to payu 😉😉

and omg.... during that 1st FB... i soooo couldnt help... but this line....

Originally posted by jnawaz

"Prem Jhuneja!" Heer yelled as she grabbed more pillows. "I'll kill you!"

omg😆 the whole i'll kill you.... man i couldnt help it.. but reminded me of that skeleton... Akhmed or however you spell his name!!!!.... 😆😆.... the only part that was missing the "SILENCE" 😆 omg...dont talk about akhmed 😭😭😭...haila...reminds me of my RR's and our 470 class...that was so much fun! now classes without them suck! just not the same...oh and babe...SILENCE!!! 😛

awww i so loved this update.....👏 cant wait for the next part!! plz cont soon!!!!! and i mean soon... now like a year!!! u've been getting lazy these days... not good!!!!😆.. he he...my middle name is lazy...*keep that in mind for bridal shower*...😉😉😉...update will be posted as soon as YOU are ready 😛

luv u babe!!!!❤️🤗 ME TOO! 😳

P.S. As you can tell this is long again!!! which means that I wrote this at work!!!!!!😆 finished all my work like a good little girl now have 3 hours to kill now!!!.... time needs to go fast now!!!!.... hopefully it will!!!!!😕 lmao...omg...i found something i need to show you...i loved it...i think you will like it too...remind me to send you the link when u are online or something 😃

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😳

Originally posted by: anu142

Ok...i wont comment,.....

just one request!

Please let Prem be alive!!

and let Premeer meet once...pls!!

Originally posted by: nuptalie

great update jaz.
Very emotional.
Awesome update.
Plz update the next part too

Originally posted by: maha_k

edited😊

😭for heer's pain.plz dear disclose something about premmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

😡for mann brothers dheet kahin k.

😊for flashback.fb was too cuteeee and sweettttttttt specially mehndi wala.maya is really nice bhabi na

and again preet mehra😕

but again a amazinggg and lovely update.👏

update soon 😊

Originally posted by: angel82

my spot

Edit :

Oh Jaz 😭 ........Heer's outburst was soooooo heart wrenching .....each and every dialogue of her's to her brothers was soo emotional and it made me cry.....beautifully written ....you have brought out agony very well ...... thank you luv 😳...ill admit..i really enjoyed writing that part...the brothers had this thrashing LONG over due...it was about time!! im glad that you enjoyed it 😳😳

loved the veera-heer scene....love their bonding...

absolutely love Maya here.... loved her scenes with heer and prem ....loved the lines you wrote how she and maya remembered the chuha incident....

Oh my , the flashbacks were awesome.....damn cute and romantic...reading them, i wish i too had a lover like prem....*cautiously glancing over to chk if hubby's around , lol* haila yaar...you already have a hubby...soocho ke humara kya haal hai...naa hubby naa bf...kuch nahin hai...my prem better pop of soon...im tired of waiting 😆

So Rishad says he didnt purposely stab prem....but like heer asked why didnt they save him?

is that why you said in some post that rishad isnt all that bad ? the brothers...well...they did what they did...no way around it...stay tuned...trust me...stay tuned 😉

Preet Mehta did not make his entry 😃 Good ....he better dont....let just his name do the rounds for others to contemplate.... lol...i should keep mentioning his name here and there...never introduce his character 😆😆😆...woh toh phir iss ff ka gol gol chakar kaata rehga...😆😆😆

We want Prem's entry ! let Prem enter and wipe out Heer's tears ....Heer deserves happiness , she deserves her PREM .... i agree...she deserves happines...but Prem...he is dead naa? 😛

eagerly waiting for your next updates...when can we expect ? soon...very soon...working on it now 😳😳😳

😆

luv

Angie

Originally posted by: Nitty2910

loved the update... enjoyed it as always.. wondering who is this Preet???

waiting for the next update and your PM..

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

nice update
mehandi flashback was nice

Originally posted by: aati1429

nice flasfbacks!!! i hope this preet has some link with prem....

loved thepart

Originally posted by: yasu09

another awesomeeeeeeeee update...............
can't wait to c what happens next....................
so plz update soonnnnnnnnnnnn...................
I rely hope this preet is prem in disguise........................
and rely wana c premeer get 2gther soonnnnnnnn..............

Originally posted by: stunninstar

meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

Originally posted by: fungrl

Hi Jazzzzzz...............I kinda like adding ZZZZZZZZZ's to your name how cool, anyhoo happy belated Eid mubark, I hope you were successful in collecting Eids b/c people is US of A are Knajoos Makkhi choos, I mean when I was a kid in Pakistan 1000 rupees were norm, here I am batting Zero dollars, sucks big time.🤢hi yaar...i had an ok Eid...ended up working...stupid khadoos boss wouldnt give me the day off....and i needed the hours cuz school fees are due...😕😕😕...but it as nice when i got home in the evening 😳😳😳...as for the kanjoos people...you said it! kuch nahin mila...ulta dena pada...for my little nieces/nephews...i have SOOO many 😆😆😆

Back to the story, if I call you a jallad again; it is not b/c I don't love you, its just that I think you are a masochist....keeping Prem away from Heer......me want Prem. Dude you are such a brilliant, wonderful, rocking writer-- resurrecting Prem back from the dead would be like "your daneen hath ka khel" please please please.....don't make me grovel lmao...Jaz the Jallad...has a nice ring to it...nahin? 😆😆...you can call me JJ for short 😉😉😉...resurrecting Prem...hmm...nah...thats just weird...he's gonna be like a zombie roaming around amritsar 😆

OK, so absolutely loved the bonding b/w the sisters.....sorta made me wish I had a sis.....the imagery was superb.............so poignant...........Heer was mind blowing in expressing her desire for Veera's happiness, on the other hand Veera surprised me with her maturity...good going Veera i know...i want a sis too! but lucky for me...i've to tons of cousins and bhabis who fill the void...😃😃😃...yes...this Veera is very mature...not the whining, annoying little twit from the show..i hated her! 🤢

Did I ever tell you that EKTA should sooo hire you.....all of Ekta's -ve characters are the best people in your story.....Maya Bhabhi is so cool and so in tune with Heer.....I want a Maya Bahabi so she can tease me with my Prem.....oh wait I need to get Prem first.......PREM PREM PREM .........kahaanh hoo......... oh I forgot some sangdil, no wait pathar dil killed him off 😭😭😭....me want Prem....bring me Prem....on a serious note-- Prem like the one in your story just don't exist in real life.....why can't fiction be reality....why why.........me sad now ,,,,,,,,oh well, on the bright side if I don't have Prem, neither does Heer....HAHAHA

well crazy talk aside Heer's confrontation with Zalim Jallad Maann (henceforth will be called JZ Maan---get it Jay Z like the singer😆😆😆) actually made me cry and not just lame crying bouts but actually depressing cry, so much is the power of your story.....I felt so bad for Heer............<please give her Prem back> he he...i have a knack for turning the negative ones positive and turning the positive ones negative...that makes the story more fun and interesting 😃😃😃...hmm...i should do one where Prem is a serial killer..talk about negative! 😉😉😉....haila...im waiting for my Prem too...im waiting...waiting...waiting...and then...MORE waiting 🥱...speaking of Jay Z...i like his new track with Kanye (the idiot) and Rihana 😃😃😃

by the way writing wise I wish I could fill this page with 👏👏👏 but than I don't want your head to blow up😆😆😆 and explode b/c me am friend of yours....or am I???? i think as long as prem is dead...you will follow the saying...keep your friends close and enemies closer 😆

Coming back to Heer..... what is wrong with the girl.....not liking Mehndi....I look for reasons to put Mehndi on.....of course I crack up when my non desi guys friends in school show a keen desire to put Heena on.....seriously demag kharab hai in chokros ka....but I love how at least once like a bride Heer had P for Prem on her hands.....mind it Jazz P for Prem not Preet .....did I tell you I want Prem back i love mehndi too...i want to put it on all the time...but the smell...i could do with out...its hilarious when im out and about with my hands done...and people come up to me and they are like OMG...what happened to your hand...im like...NOTHING! 😆😆😆...P for Prem...ok...thanks for the english lesson 😆😆...a for ashlesha...b is for balraj...so on and so forth...😆😆😆

I think enough of my bhondi bakwas...........I think I am also a masochist for loving actually crazy loving your sad story...this story aside, you could so be Jhumpa Lahiri or perhaps even better b/c your writing flows like a symphony and I am a fan, so if you ever become a best seller author me get first dibs on your books...comprende no idea who Jhumpa Lahiri is...but thanks 😃😃😃...sure...ill send you a personalized book when its published 😛😛😛

By the way I just want to apologize if any of my blabber hurts your feelings it is all pure me humor .....love your writing....BUT ME WANT PREM....ME WANT PREM.....its like fighting with SP ME WANT PREM no no...no hurt feelings...your light heartedness came off...it was all fun i could tells...sometimes when people comment its like they are attacking me and my work...that is what pisses me off 😡

and for JZ Maan men I can;t think for a sazza today so me will have to think of something gruesome kya yaar....if you dont come up with it...how will i incorporate this in the story 😉😉😉...kher...lage raho 😛

adios hasta luego amiga 😃

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome update

continue asap

very emotional scene between heer and her brothers

thanks for the pm

pm me

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

WOW!!!!!!!!!!LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!! AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

Hey

wonderful update, seriously i hv no words to describe the beauty of ur ths SS. Till i hv been a silent reader but used to presses the 'Like' tab but after ur ths update i just could'nt control myself. yaay!!! a silent reader broke their silence...oh happy day!! i love when you guys come out and comment...refreshing...thank you! 🤗

Very beautiful SS, ur concept, characters r just fantablous. Though ur first update made me cry as u killed Prem but as u proceed towards ur updates i ws just left dumbfounded the kind of emotions u pour in ur every update through heer, truly u personifies luv n emotions through Prem-Heer. Sumtyms it do make my heart heavy, ur story is leaving tht much impact on me😊. he he...many were pretty upset with me for killing Prem...lmao...those comments were fun to read...never have i had so many threats against my life 😆😆😆...im glad that you are enjoying my story and that it affects you...i so happy to hear that what i want to portray is actually being portrayed 😳😳😳

The kind of pain tht heer has gone through n will go is really heart melting, her own members took away her lyf frm her, her only luv frm whom he learnt hw to live,luv n stand fr ownself, her support system. yes...her father and brothers need to be hanged for what they did...😡😡..ill see what i can do 😆

Ur almost every update is painful n joyous, painful bcoz of heer's pain, the incompleteness in her lyf, absence of her beloved one whom she can never bring back in her lyf again n the culprit r her on brothers n father but she is repentng fr it, her lyf has cursed. Bcoz her brother's stupid ego her prem lost his lyf at an age of mere 20 yrs n tht too on his first wedding night, he promised her to be wth her throughout their lyf but he just could'nt make it to more thn few hours only bcoz of those Maan sons, Yeahh he is thr wth her wth our every breath n even the thought of his presence n his memories gave heer the most happy moments offcourse fr few moments but thn to a reason to cherish memories,their memories- their frndship,luv, argumnts, small cute fights........... i dont know why...but in most of my stories...Heer seems to be the one in pain and stuff...except for Sau Dard...in that one...Prem is my shikar 😛😛😛...memories ...sometimes thats all you have...and you have to make do...trust me...its not easy...😭...it hurts but there isnt anything you can do about that

The kind of Fb u wrote in ur updates till nw r just simply admirable👏 , innocense of teenagers yet the maturity of lovers n happiness & satisfaction fr being luvd by the person u luv is clearly visible in ur each Fb.You potrayed so beautifully the journey of prem-heer frm being strangers to frnds to best of frnds n thn finally to luvrs n thn too officially wedded couples though fr few hours but stll thy felt the feeling of being belonging to the one u always wantd to. i tried to capture Premeers relationship through the fb's because there was no other way...i wanted to show them at every stage of life...that no matter what...they were always together...they were meant to be 😳😳😳... thanks for liking the fb's...😳😳😳

Thn maya's charatcer heer's only pillar left wth her who understands her so well being an outsider ,nt hvng any blood relatons wth her but the one one who luv heer the most offcourse aftr prem n who can read her mind understand her emotions whn her own mother fails to understand her feelings,her situation,her mental state, aftr wht her sons does to her daughter she want heer to tie rakhi on their wrist..................to shw tht hm much she luv thm n is thankful tht thy had tore her lyf into pieces, took her heart out of her body,made her soul to cry,cry n crave fr her luv whch ws her's until only 3 of thm wr aware of ths chapter. Maya is her bestfriend...a sister more than a bhabi...my friends understand me better than my own mother too...so i put that in there too...as for Teji...its not that she doesnt feel or see Heer's pain...its just that...at the end of the day...she is mother to the boys too...and seeing her children hating each other...it kills her too......she is helpless...

Anyways moving to ur Fb n today's update, again u left me speechless, finally today heer cried her heart out, finally she blamed her brothers n showed her disgust n hatred towards thm fr wht thy hd done wth her prem, finally she made her brothers realised tht 7 yrs back she not only lost her husband n brothers but her family too lost her one daughter, whose lyf has bcum a hell just bcoz her ths family.I ashamed😡😡 to read bout the brothers, finding excuses to justify prem's death,prem's murder as if their justifications can bring prem back, colours to heer's lyf. yes...after 7yrs of silence...Heer finally gave them a piece of her mind...for 7yrs it was like they didnt exixt...but now...they know how she REALLY feels about them...

B/w ur strtng ws good, the sisterly feelings the bonding n luv n attachmnt of veera towards heer ws very soothing to read being younger in the family much more intelligent thn elders who knw her sis,her pain, the happiness her sis longd fr whch her so called brothers n parents failed to understood. i always wanted a sister...older or younger...i imagine our relationship to be somethign like that...😳😳...Veera is more important that you all realize...sort of...next update will explain it all 😃😃

Thn best part of update all the prem-heer moments, awesome simply adorable. "CHUHA"😆 perfect name.He ws pataoing maya bhabhi 😆 n maya bhabhi too luvd her sister's-in law luv n as usual save thm frn those eagle eyes n ws distributinng ladoos😃. lol...ya...Prem hai hi aaisa...everyone loves him...you cant resist his charm and cuteness! 😳😳

2nd Fb ws also very very beautiful n cute, prem luvs mehndi but heer hates it "opposite attracts" only can be wrtn. His luv fr her made her mehndi red of reddest well he luvd her tht much n also accepted her as his wife frm his soul,mind😊. But it would hv been much btr if instead of Fb these would hv been present scenes. lol...i was waiting for it...the entire comment you never mentioned Prem being in the present...and here it is 😆😆😆...everyone has the same opinion 😆😆😆...will keep that in mind 😉😉😉

Thn luv the part whn prem used to take out tym frm his busy schedule just to check heer n one night he slept thr only whilst she ws talkng, her talks wr tht much boring🤣 n thn she slept wth him on same bed, awwww it itslef shws her luv n trust on him whch oviously he won. yes! heer was just blabbering on and on...bechara Prem thak ke aaya hai...lol...aur kya karte...he dozed off...😆😆😆...and of course...Heer trusts Prem...she knows him...he would never take advantage of such a situation...😳😳😳...thats why she...and WE...love him 😍

Lastly really want to say tht u potray human emotions in ur SS very elegantly. Ths SS is just one of the best i guess nw bcum the best fr me. Your writing skills r just pulchritudinous, very much impressive👍🏼 thanks yaar...you are so sweet...i really appreciate your kind words 😳😳😳...wow...new word...gotta look that up...its long and hard to pronounce 😆😆😆

Splendid job.........................

Ashlesha
ps: now that you have broken you silence...i expect to see comments...please ☺️

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Fabulous update as usual Jaz...loved it and loved it
Gosh..every time you succeed in making me cry 😭 im evil..i know 😈
very well written...heer's pain i can't bear it more 😭 😭 😭
and those lovely flashbacks were 😍
along with heer..i'm missing Prem too
the confrontation between Heer and her brothers was just mind blowing and the dialogs 👏
I feel very sad for Heer... 😭 heer needed to vent...it was long over due! stupid brothers...the had it coming...they deserved worse 😡😡😡
and here is my request again 😛 😉
i wondering who is Preet?
BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK 😆😆...baas...itna request...haila...you are loosing your edge 😉
waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey,

awesome part as ever...

just loved it...

waiting eagerly for Preet's entry...

and yes also for our hero...

regards,

Suhana.

Originally posted by: coolgal270

Oh still no parda fash on preet mehta?How come ??how? I was waiting for him for soo long!!Me wants to know now *stomping foot*..who is he?The suspense is killing me!😆
ok,enough of drama now...Can i start by saying that u r absolutely marvelous..absolutely!..this particular update of urs evoked so many emotions in me that I m left quite astounded by ur writing skills.👏👏 haila...Preet Mehta se milne itna betab ho...tauba...😲😲😲...thanks...you are too sweet 😳😳

First, the apology said by veera.."i m sorry that I m happy"...Ah! It broke my heart..such an honest admission from veera..really, anybody in this position could feel like that..but what really touched me was that veera understood that it is her marriage approval, the consent of the family for this marriage, that is making heer said...she understood that it is coz she got what she wanted where as heer had to suffer the biggest hurt of her life, that is killing heer so much..really a great bond of sisters u have portrayed here.. thanks...i like the bond that Heer and Veera have given that they are sisters...so i wanted to show it a little more...so far a lot of the bonding has been with Maya...so i thought why not change it up a little 😳😳😳

And can i say that i was really sad as well as happy abt that whole "chuha" episode..such a cute, tiny incident but an effective one..The best part being that it is not just heer who remembers it, but also maya who smiles at the memory...Now I think of it, even she must have been heartbroken over prem's "death"...*rolls eyes! I know he is alive..just waiting for jaz to bring him back*...*bribing to give her gifts if she really brings him back in the next 2-3 updates**.😆😆 lmao...bring Prem back...what does that mean...are you speaking a foreign language...French prehaps 😆...sorry...i dont understand that that phrase means 😉

where was I? ya..so maya clearly wanted heer to marry prem!she accepted him as a part of the family..I loved it when she said "wo chuha tumhaari behen ki jaan hai"..😃Sigh! Such a nice person..why cant we the same maya in our show? i know! if maya was this nice on the show...Harman wouldnt be so depressed alll the time 😆😆😆

Oh!Raksha bandhan..U know Jaz, i was thinking about this the other day..sach mein...I was thinking that what heer must be doing on raksha bandhan?would she be tying rakhi or not?,,,And I am soooo glad to read that she is not..how can those 3 brothers even think that she could still believe in that festival when they took away from her the only thing that she ever wanted. *weeps* ..*the thought of brothers doing such things to their sis completely shatters me..sniff sniff*..also how easily nihall said that 7 yrs ve passed!oh! U moron, those 7 yrs were hell for ur sister..like 700 yrs..u can easily say, its been 7 yrs..big deal but she has to endure the pain for rest of her life😡...*why did they do that with her jaz?*😭ya...definitely NOT tying rakhi on those brothers of hers ...after what they did...no way!! 🤣 i love how you called Nihaal a moron....😆😆 good word...completely fitting...and ya u are right...its not just 7rys for her...its like 7 life times...

Which reminds me of the line spoken by her to veera at the start of this update..how she says she does not regret even one moment spent with prem..And "Prem ne meri zindagi ko zindagi banaya tha."Such a simple but powerful line..Oh god! they both loved each other sooo sooo much...at such tender age, they found eternal love and lost it coz of some psychopathic,egoistic morons who valued their "status" more than their sister/daughter's happiness..*cursing them ferociously, if already not done 100 times before*..I hate these maan brothers!🤢.. aww...look at how much you just love the Maan men...😆😆...😉...he he...but ya...man..why cant someone like Prem happen to me!? im so done waiting...im gonna hunt one down!! 😛

I smiled when manmeet came to meet veera..and a really good analysis on how prem would ve come if it was his and heer;s maariage! ya...He would ve done the same thing and made lots of silly but cute excuses to be with heer **sniff*.*😭 And also I loved how prem used to come to meet heer in the FBs...Through the window! *dreamy muh* so utterly romantic!..*seriously jaz, when are u bringing him back? *pleading muuh*😆 ha ha...now i can picture Prem coming to his wedding festivities especially after last week...tauba...kitna besharam hai woh! 😲😲😲...kahin pe bhi ghus jaata hai...😆😆😆..haila...how cute is Prem...aww...i miss him 😭😭😭

Oh! I made a really long post...sorry ..but couldn't help commenting in detail😆 no no...i LOVE it...keep them long...i love reading them 😃😃😃

Amazing update..will be eeaaagerly waiting for the next one..

PS: and If u dont reveal preet mehta in ur next update, then I will go kafa.*stern muh*.. dhamki hai...😉😉 i dont do well with dhamkis 😛😛😛

😆love,sumi

Originally posted by: *I Heena I*

Hey Jaz (waves) ...how was your Eid and how did ramzan go for you...hope all is well....have to say faboulous update.....i can't bare to see Heer's pain anymore she is missing Prem too much and bechara Prem wonder were he is ..iv got a feeling he is not dead hehe....and who's this Preet Mehta...are they trying to fix her up with someone else....noo they can't do that again ...it will kill her ...and i loved how Heer stood up to her brothers and her dad ...i was waiting for a confrontation ...it was needed...now they know how she feels and how she has been baring the pain for 7 years...hope you make everything alright in the end Jaz ...can't wait till your next udpate xx

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Reserved!

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

wonderful

but who is preet juneja

is he prem

or actually preet

anyways thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

Awesome But very very very emotional

loved it

thankz for pm

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

U r awesome!!!!!!! i loved it!! specailly when Heer gave her brothers nd dad a mind of her own!!.....lolz the chuha part was hilarious specially prem flirting with maya bhabhi just to tease heer!.... nd the premeer mehndi scene tooooo cute!!! loved it!!plzzzzzz update soon!!! im waiting!!!

-Luv Pari

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey jaz
omg...that was just amazing...👏I loved how heer confronted her dad and brothers...but that part made me cry...I feel so bad for heer...😭 plz...make prem come back and make heer happy again...plz...😛 And...as usual...I loved the flashbacks...so cute...the chuha one was hilarious... 😆 cant wait for the next part...thanks for the PM and continue soon. 😃


love
Afreen

Originally posted by: masin

aapii!!! gosh..i wrote this longg thing like the minute i finished reading the part, and then of course, I-F decided to take revenge for some unknown war we had against each other in my previous janam...therefore everything got deleted!!!!!! newayss..i'll try my best to re-write the same thoughts again..but knowing my short-term memory loss issues..i hope u understand 😛 haila...sammy bacha!! 🤗...HAILA..IF does that sometimes...i hate when that happens...i must say...THANK YOU for coming back do it again...if it were me...i'd just stop after explaining what happened to the original comment! 😆

alritteeyy!!!! well for starterss...i loved the enddingg!! not because u mentioned preet...(no wayy!!!) but because u mentioned him at the end instead of thruout the chapter :D so luckily we had more of prem than preet this timee!! (btw where is preet in kis desh!!! i miss him soo mucchchch...and in a way i do want u to write about him so we have some preet magic back in action :D) 🤣...you are too funny...lmao...yes...ill give you that much...more Prem here...and more Preet in SD 😆...apparently you hate Preet in all my FF's...wait...did you read "In Search of Chahat"...did you hate Preet then! 😆😆😆
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kk moving on....flashbackss!!! if i was ever stranded in a desert without food and water, i'd be able to live with premeer's flashbackss in this ff !!!!! it's soo...hmm...(kk again, didn't check the thesaurus😔) but it was very LOVELYY!!! they're soo cuteee!!! bohaut bada chuhaaa...and prem-maya's bonding was waayy to cutteee and funnyy!!!!!!! i love how it was a natural thing for heer to leave her window open..and how he wud just come in to see her and then leavee!!!!!! if only someone did tht for mee😍 ....**back in reality** the window in my room isn't exactly "climb-able" nor is there a balcony!! gosshh...gotta send these housing architects to indiaa!!!!!! lmao...i thought you were gonna say that you could survive on ladoos...cuz i mentioned then after the chuha scene...hmm...i could sure go for some now 😆😆😆...bole toh...im hungry...*sigh*...lunch time...no $$$ 😭😭😭...i totally want some chana batura 😃😃😃...haila...😲...kissi ladke ne teri taraf aankh utha ke bhi dekha...toh main nahin chodungi...i must approve before anyone comes through windows for my sammy bacha!! 😳

oo and i lovedd the mehndi fb!!! how prem smiled at heer's reaction to mehndi, and seems to like mehndi...howww chwweeeeettt!!!!!!

and kk i need to get to this before i forgett: i LOVED HEER'S CONFRONTATION BEYOND EVERYTHING ELSE YOU WROTE ABOUTT!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏 (btw..the applause is for u, not for heer :)) her dialogues wer verryy well scriptedd!! i love how heer can be so straight up yet kind! like the time with the biji lady...she wasn't trying to sound sarcastic or give a "taana" or something, she was just telling the story of her life! and once again, she was just having a natural convo with her mom and brothers! she told her mother straight up why she doesn't wanna be a part of raksha bandhan without any hesitation! then again..what's there to hesitate about..like u said..there's nothing to hide about her past, which is what made her who she is today!!! :D and the way she told off her brothers..if only i was there in person...i wud've added a bunch of physical fighting, but i think heer handled the situation pretty well too 😆 im sure that was a tight slap in their faces!! like okay i understand tht it was a "mistake" if u put it that way! but why was rishab there with a chaku in the first placee!!! cudn't his words have been threatening enuf, that he felt the need to bring a knife??? and i loved heer for counter-questioning (did that word sound right..😕) them!! why wudn't they give him a chance to survivee!!! on a personal note, i love my brother to death and beyond, and to read about these sorry excuses of brothers makes me feel quite sad for heer :( im glad she gave them an explanation as to why rakhsha bandhan is a worthless occasion for her..i'm hoping it knocks some sense into them.......and then they decide to contact some secret agents, and revive prem from the jungle! and then prem will be alive again, and all the deshians will not chase u to timbaktoo with belans and cricket bats 😃 lmao...i LOVED doing the Heer explosion...her telling her brothers...it was so far one of my favorite scenes in the FF 😳😳...they had it long over due! 😡😡😡 samaj te kya hai aapne aapko 🤬...and yeah...raksha bandhan is a beautiful festival...we dont do it,...but i have always wanted to...its so meaningful...and vaise bhi...i have so many brothers...soocho kitne saare gifts milenge 😆😆😆...i have one brother...younger...he's a pain in the ass...but...still...i love him too...and i have like a million and one cousin brothers...love them to pieces too!!! haila...i miss them...most of them are back in Bangladesh 😭😭😭...rula diya naa mujhe 😭😭...katti tere saath 😛😛...j/k...i could never be mad with my sammy bacha! 🤗

hmm....kk so now im kinda getting the impression tht heer's brothers were scared of prem..like deep,deep, deep, and waayy morre deep down..LOL! i mean im sure the "status" factor was also there, but i think they were also afraid of losing their position in heer's life! i think all brothers in general are protective/ possessive like that...if one guy come's into their sister's life, things begin to change between the siblings......so mayb heer's brothers were insecure.... they knew...that Prem could take them all on and kick their butts! no questions...they just caught him off guard...😃...varna...they'd be the dead ones...not our Prem!! 😭😭😭

but backing away from a deep analysis..heer's brothers are the murderers of prem..heer's prem...OUR PREM! so they were probably just jealous of his good looks :DDD of course! no one..>NO ONE..is hotter or cuter or sweeter or more charming...than our PREM!! 😳😳😳

newayyss...i think im editing this post on a differ ff 😕 so im gonna copy and paste it to tanhaii and then hit the bed for school 2moro lmao 😆😆😆 how did that happen?

so u better update soon darling...and keep me posted

keep writing magnificently (have i used tht one yet??) hmm...havent used that one on this comment 😉

lots of loveeee

ur Sammy Bacha 😉

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

hey jaz

how are you good...how are you? 😃

Do you have anything against me. Everytime you make me cry whenever I read your ss. You started with a tragic note itself.i have nothing against you..or anyone else...its just my gift...😆😆😆...what can i say...i feel the need to share 😛

Veera is such a good sister. She is sorry that she is happy but heer is not. "Aapni zindagi ke bees (20) saal mein maine aapni saari kushiyaan ji li hai…Prem ke saath", awesome dialogue. You brought smile to my face with meher telling them to be lazy bones when they had 1 million things to do. Thank god at time when I was on verge of crying again, meher saved me. 😆😆😆...meher was right though...shaadi wala ghaar hai...so much to do and these two are lying on the bed like bums!! 😕😕😕

Bechare prem ka taang toot gaya uska😉. I loved that dialogue when prem said "haath toh lagake dekhe"—too good. I was laughing like anything when maya looked at prem "ki bahut bada chuha tha" aur prem vahan ladoo kahane aaya tha ya heer se milne🤣. he he...like they say...the way to a mans heart..is through his stomach...prem...follows that rule as well 😛😛😛

The scene where heer confronted her brothers was most tragic. These guys have guts to even stand in front of her and say all these. They would never be ashamed of what they did to her. Would never realize what they have taken away from her. Can't they see and feel her pain. What kind of brothers are these. Totally cheap. these brothers are the ones you see in movies and stuff...the ones who only want their share of the property...they want the money...the status...basically...they are a*ses!!! 🤬

Somewhere when kulraj was explaining was children about the duties of a brother, i was thinking that heer brother enver kept those promises they made to heer. She must have bottled all those feelings of hatred for her brothers within her for some many years and now its good that its out in open. Her brothers deserve much more than this.yes...this thrashing was a long time coming! stupid Maan men!! they completely ruined Heer's life...forget being a brother...they couldnt even be decent human beings!!! 😡

The mehndi scene was so cute. Ok tell me is it mere a coincidence that prem and preet both names start with 'p'-the letter on heer's hands. Plz don't let this happen. Let it be just for prem. Do end the mystery with preet in next update plz. Waiting eagerly for one. hmm...its a mere conicidence...i didnt think of P for Prem and Preet...but now that YOU pointed it out...maybe i can do something with that 😆😆😆...hmm...thinking cap on...😉😉😉

I have to say this jaz, you have a great talent, you writing really moves us, has a great effect on us, makes us cry every time we read, no matter how hard we try no to. I guess next time too I should be ready to be emotional while reading your ss and crying on every painful scene where you depict heer's misery. Plz, plz, plz and plz get prem back. I promise I will even give lots of chocolates, especially my favorite Dairy Milk which I don't like to share with anybody. But for heer and prem sake I am ready to do even that. Along with it loads of flowers to make your day. Plz jaz mann jao naa. 🤗. Plz sweety. aww...thanks yaar...you are too sweet...i appriciate your kind words and for you taking the time to comment on my work...i loved reading each and every word!!! 😃😃😃

Sia

Originally posted by: -Payal-

Thanks for the lovely long update...I know you're waiting for my thoughts on this...and I have lots of them...

for now...and until further notice, the flashback scenes were too cute, and more importantly, Heer's rebuttal was great and long overdue so thanks for that...i have a hunch that Preet Mehta is Prem...tho, I shall keep my musings to myself b/c I know how u hate my tendency to jump the gun ;)

THANK YOU!
Love u!
P

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey jaz,
nice flashbacks!!! hope this preet has some link with prem....
very emotional scene between heer and her brothers.
cont.soon

Originally posted by: Garima93

Yo esta aqui! 😎

*Reserved*

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

my spot. I shall come back to it hopefully.

Or if I don't I'll comment on it with the next part.

*edited* you came back!!! 😳😳

I'm shocked I came back to this. Really I am. And I'm not going into detail. I'm listening to music, and am so distracted. [side note: I LOVE the song Ishq Hi Hai Rab from Dil Bole Hadippa. And I love Shahid. 😆] omg...that song is awesome!!! im currently in love with two songs... "Tere Bina Lagta Nahin" from Kaal Kisne Dekha and "Dil Ibadat" from Tum Mile...awesome songs!!! 😳😳😳

Ahh, I'm thrilled with Heer breaking her silence with her brothers. Especially with what she said. She's told them, explicitly, how she feels about the situation and about them, and I think it's good. They should know the havoc they wreaked on their sister's heart and senses. The poor girl's life was ruined because of their one 'mistake'. I think they deserve far worse than they are receiving. i enjoyed having heer blast off her brothers....it was so much fun to write...they had it coming...freaking ullu ke pathos!! 😡😡😡

Who is Preet Mehra? I read Payal Di's comment, and maybe, hopefully? she's right. Preet is Prem? Hey, we can dream right? But I won't speculate, except to say that by the suspense you are building up, Preet's important to the story, so I cannot wait for his entry! no idea who Preet Mehra is...but Preet MEHTA is a new character that will add to the spice of the story...watch for his entry in the next update 😛😛😛...

Hurry up and update Jaz. 😃 trying yaar...trying *sigh* 😆

Love,
Radz