Shilpa's one shot!! special NOTE on pg 18 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
oh nooooo...i had written a loooooooong paret n by mistake it got deleted....omg i'll have to rewrite d whole thing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP:prem leaves with gaya3 n ash

heer is standing there with a feeling of lossing sumthing precious....jus then a car arrives....its sent by prem to make her reach home safely....she gets in

on the way-heer feels thirsty n searches for a water bottle in d seat pockest....a diary catches her eye....its prem's personal diary....sumthing tells her to go through it n she follows her instinct. reading it for heer was a journey through prem's life in d last 6 yrs-pain n wait. for d 1st time she understands his remorse, his penance, his suffering.

h- prem ne mere liye apne pure parivaar se naata tod diya....itna akela ho gaya?? shayad maine uske saath thik nahin kiya....kya main galat hun??

driver-madam???madam?? main aapse itni der se keh rahan hun ki aapka ghar aa gaya....aap kahan khoyi hain??

h-main woh...woh...nahin kuch nahin.....bhaiya aap jaiye thankyou.

heer walks into her house where chahat is waiting. flashbacks of all times post leap when she was unreasonably rude to her. flashbacks of all ph scenes post leap.

c-mama??? maama aap kya soch rahe ho??? mama?? kahin aap phir se prem juneja ki wajah se toh pareshaan nahin ho?? mama woh aapko humesha kyon rulate hain??? bhale hi woh chahat ke liye toto jaise kitne bhi toys layein par agar mama ko woh pasand nahin toh chahat ke liye woh bahut bure hain

heer remembers how both prem n chahat were craving to see n spent time wid each other

h-nahin beta....maine galat socha tha....woh bure nahin hain, bahut ache hain....aur aap chaho tu unse mil sakte ho

c-sach mama??

h-haan beta par abhi nahin....abhi unki shaadi hai(her voice cracks saying this) isliye woh busy hain....aap badme unse mil lena

c-thnx mama....chahat ki mama best mama hain(hugging her mom)

h-aur chahat best se bhi sabse best daughter hai.

cut to Jzoo where gaya3 has called heer to help wid wedding prep.

h is picking up some clothes n p also comes to collect his sherwaani. their hands touch n their eyes meet. they remember the scenes when they had held the glass like this. they r lost in each other's eyes eyes but see nothing except for INCOMPLETENESS

a girl comes-heer madam aapko gaya3 maa'm ne bulaya hain

ph part n feel awkward

h-haan main aati hun

heer leaves but doesnot forget to turn back once

p-heer tum bhale hi chahat ke saath khush ho par tumhara adhurapan tumhari ankhon mein jhalakta hai...tum aaj bhi mujse pyaar karti ho aur main tumse....phir bhi na jane kyun uparwala humein milne se rok raha hai

h-aaj tumhari shaadi hai prem.....humari kahaani ka yehi ant hai....ki tum humesha ke liye kisi aur ke ho jao....phir kyun ab mujhe wo diary mili?? kyun ab main tumhari ore khinchi jaa rahi hun.....mujhe khud ko rokna hoga

NEXT PART:D WEDDING NIGHT


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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nnice part waitinggggggggg for next asap with long part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

it was very nice. good to see heer change a little bit. hoping they'd be together soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
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hi shilpa how r u & how was urs paper?
its really nice.........awesome part...........wait 4 the next.

luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Awe such a cute par yaar exam kaisa tha??
Suhana Ahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
that was really good...
cant wait to read more...
plz continue soon...
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
awesome part
continue asap
please update asap!!!
P.Kamaljit.Sean thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
hey
nice update
do pm me when u update

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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon
Kamal 😃

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