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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

wow... awesome update...

cant wait for the next part...
plz update soon coz i cant take the suspense...
i am unable to guess who stopped the pheras...
regards,
Suhana.


thnx a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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suspense mein jo maza hai woh aur kahin nahin by god! sry to keep u waitin guys

d wedding stopper messiah is none other than PREET!

preet eners like a hero in complete ekta style....d whole scene of ash exposed....imagine it in a vry dramatic way

pr-bhiayya aap yeh shaadi nahin kar sakte kyonki jis wajah se aap yeh shaadi kar rahe ho wohi ek bahut bada jhooth hai

h-yeh sab tu kya keh raha hai preet

kul di-haan preet please saaf saaf bata na ki tu kya kehna chahta hai

pr-toh saaf saaf baat yeh hai ki iss ashlesha ne humare saath bahut bada dhoka kiya hai.... mujhe toh sharm aati hai yeh soch kar ki kabhi maine iss ladki par bharosa kiya tha....isne toh PB aur heer bhabhi ki zindagi barbaad karneka pura khel rach rakha tha....woh toh achcha hua ki mujhe samay par sach pata chal gaya

gaya3-preet tu yeh kya bakwaas kar raha hai....thik se batayega ki akhir aisa kya hogaya

preet-toh suniye ma....

kal main shaadi ke liye caterers se baat karne ja raha tha jab maine ash ke kamre mein se kuch awazein suni....yeh kisi se phone par baat kar rahi thi....darasal woh bachcha jisko yeh PB ka bata rahi thi woh ek actor hai jise yeh kuch paise de kar uss aadmi se, paise de kar ,contract par layi thi jisse woh phone par baat kar rahi thi. woh bachcha prem bhaiyya ka hai hi nahin aur na hi ash uski maa hai...

h-kya???? par phir uss raat.....

haan bhabhi.....uss raat prem bhaiya farmhouse mein gaye toh thhe par unke aur ashlesha ke beech kuch nahin hua tha....kuch bhi nahin...woh sab kuch ek natak tha....ashlesha ki ek sochi samjhi chaal jismein isne PB aur aapko phasaya....taki aap dono alag ho jayein....aapka pavitra rishta toot jaye....mere raam gunhegaar nahin hain.....balki unhone toh 6 saal tak uss galati ki itni badi saza bhugti joh unhone ki hi nahin

ashlesha ke chehre ka rang hi ud gaya....she had nothing to say in her defence....she had been EXPOSED!! preet called d police n she nd the man on phone was arrested for practising child labour....that man used to kidnap children n exploit them for selfish purposes....n ash became n equal partner in crime by paying to hire the child

heer is shattered by this revelation....d past six painful years of her life have become meaningless....her decissions, her trust, her love, her faith in prem, everything is under a BIG QUESTIONMARK

heer drops to her knees and breaks into tears.....prem comes n picks her up...this is not easy for prem also.... it is an unbearable shock for him....his remorse n regret have all become worthless in one moment of truth

p-utho heer

h-nahin prem....prem yeh sab kya ho gaya humare saath....yeh sab kyun hua......hum dono ne ek doosre se itna pyaar kiya aur kismat ne humare saath aisa khel khela....mujhse bahut badi galati hogayi prem....yeh maine kya kar diya....maine na sirf apni, balki tunhari aur chahat ki zindagi ke bhi 6 saal barbaad kar diye....maine humare rishtey ka bharosa tod diya prem........maine....yeh sab....kyun prem kyun....prem ho sake toh mujhe plzzzz maaf............

p-putting a hand on her mouth....n holding her very tight close to him....shhhhhhh....bas heer....bahut ho gaya tumhara.....bahut sunli hum sabne tumhaari, baatein bahut karli tumne manmaani....ab main bolunga aur tum sirf sunogi: (completely premish style mein)

hum 6 saal tak door rahe par kya isse humara pyaar kum hua?? in 6 saalon mein hum dono mein se koi bhi zindagi mein aage nahin badh paya.....hone ko toh in 6 salon mein kuch bhi ho sakta thha par hum dono aaj bhi ussi mod par khade hain jahan 6 saal pehle the....uparwale ne humari tini kadi pareeksha li par humara pyaar, humara pyar kum nahin hua. aur woh isliye kyunki kahin na kahin, kahin na kahin hum dono yeh jaante thhe ki prem aur heer humesha ek thhe, ek hain aur ek hi rahenge....bhagwaan khud bhi humein alag nahin kar sakte. in 6 saalon maine toh sirf tumhara intezaar kiya hai heer aur jahan tak tumhara sawal hai toh mujhe yakeen hai ki jaise aag mein jal kar hi sona kundan banta hai ussi tarah tumhari nafrat ne, mere liye tumhare pyaar ko aur bhi gehra aur atoot kar diya hai...main ab tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahin jee sakta heer....I LOVE YOU

h-main bhi tumse bahut bahut bahut bahut pyaar karti hun prem (both wrap themselves into each other's arms and share a passionate hug)

h-pulls herselaf back-par prem main...

p-shhhhhhhhhh....kuch mat kaho heer....meri baat abhi khatam nahi hui( kis desh titlle song playing)

prem sits on one knee and stretches hi right hand towards heer

main prem juneja tumse guzarish karta hun ki please meri zindagi mein wapas aa jao heer....pichle 6 salon se main sirf saansein le raha tha.... meri zindagi mein wapas aa ke mujhe phir se jeena sikha do heer....meri berang zindagi mein mein phir se rang bhar do

heer's feelings cannot be described in words ....her tears are saying it all

meher-hum sab aapse bahut pyaar karte hain heer di

preet-yeh ghar aapke bina adhra hai bhabhi

harman-wapas aa jaiye bhabhi

bauji-tere bauji ab tere bina nahin jee sakte heer

kul di-wapas aa ja heer

p-toh batao heer....apni puri zindagi mere saath bitaaogi??? iss adhure prem ko phir se pura karogi??
MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGI??


h-haan prem haan.....main bhi ab ek pal bhi tumsedoor nahin reh sakti....prem main wada karti hun ke aaj ke baad kabhi tumhein chodke nahin jaungi ...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...aaj se meri zindagi ka har pal har lamha tumhara hai, sirf tumhara....hum sab phir se ek saath rahenge.....yeh cheh saal atit ke wo panne hain jo ab palat chuke hain.......ab unhein koi yaad nahi karega....prem yeh humare jeevan ki ek nayi shuruaat hai....

p- haan heer (prem takes her in his arms.....they embrace each other....its a feeling that cannot be described in any word of any language of this universe....after so many years each other's touch, their feel is heaven to them....pyaar toh bahut log karte hain par apne pyar ko kho kar phir se paane ka ehsaas chand khushnasib log hi kar paate hain)

CUT TO JUGNI

jugni had neva been so happy before.....she is singing all d happy songs....she is on top of d wrld and so are we....

jugni-aaj jugni ki har tamanna puri ho gayi....aaj milan ki raat hai.....yeh ped, yeh phool, yeh gagan, yeh dharti....yeh sab gawah hain ki aaj do bichde saathi phir se ek ho gaye hain....aaj do sitaron ka zameen par milan hai....aaj jugni ki khushi ka thikana hi nahin kyunki aaj milan ki raat hai

dekhne bas unhe waqt bhi ruk gaya.....

Ho rabba sssssss ho, rabba sss rabba ho rabba

Ishq-Aa-Walla, Kar de Challa, Jisnu lag jaye, Ho jaye Kalla.

Ishq-Aa-Walla, Kar de Challa, Jisnu lag jaye, Ho jaye Kalla.

Ishq masoom hai kuch nahi janta, Ishq masoom hai kuch nahi janta

Jinu lag jaye rab ishq nu manta, Jinu lag jaye rab ishq nu manta

Ishq Ishq rab hai, rab rab hai, Ishq Ishq rab hai.

Ho yaar hi rab hai, yaar ki sonche, Ishq ki gali wich udkar phuche

Ishq da rutba sabse uncha,Khun se apne pyar ko sincha.

Khun se apne pyar ko sincha.

Ishq Ishq rab hai, rab hai, Ishq Ishq rab hai.

Ishq Ishq rab hai, rab hai, Ishq Ishq rab hai.

Kis des me hai mera dil, hai Kis des me hai mera dil

Kis des me hai mera dil



CUT TO PH

chahat comes there....mama??? prem juneja??

h-nahin chahat beta inhen naam se mat bulao....tune apne papa ko pehle hi pehchaan liya beta....chahat ab inhen papa bula sakti hai....aur ab aap aur aapki mamma aapke papa ke saath rahenge

c-sach mamma??? ab toto aur chahat ke friends ki tarah chahat ke bhi papa hain???

p-haan beta....n hugs chahat tight....i love you beta

c-papa(as she said it during speech)

prem n heer get married n take everyone's aashirvaad....heer is the family's jaan.....juneja family is complete again

chahat comes to ph n p picks her up (only three of them in the frame now)

c-mama, papa aap dono chahat ko ek kissi nahin denge??

p-kisses chahat on the forehead very lovingly (choo cute)

h-tries to kiss c, naughty chahat moves back n heer ends up kissing prem on the cheek (picture perfect moment)


AND THEY LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER.......................

Ho rabba sssssss ho, rabba sss rabba ho rabba

Ishq-Aa-Walla, Kar de Challa, Jisnu lag jaye, Ho jaye Kalla.

Ishq-Aa-Walla, Kar de Challa, Jisnu lag jaye, Ho jaye Kalla.

Jab bhi sonchu tujhko sonchu, tujhko pukaru main

Khyalo me tera chehra pyaar se sawaroo main

Tu hi meri zindagi hai, tu hi zindganiya

Khatam na hongi apne pyaar ki kahaniyaa

Ishq Ishq rab hai, rab rab hai, Ishq Ishq rab hai.

Ishq ka zazzba jo na jaane, Rab ko bhi wo na pahchane

Tere dil me rahe mera dil, tere dil me rahe

Kis des me hai mera dil, Kis des me hai mera dil

Kis des me hai mera dil






Edited by Shilpa.Agarwal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Wonderful Shilpa.. i dont the real story which happenes in the serial.. but this is wonderful dear.. keep up the good work...

Edited by preethis - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
😊
Hi shilpa
wow amazing end.its really awesome.u r such a very nice writer.u write all the things v nicely.
hope u write ff on premeer 😃.
luv
fatima
Edited by -fsn- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
Hey awesome ending to an awesome story
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: resham12345

Hey awesome ending to an awesome story


thnx so muc....that's a rely sweet comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shilpa.Agarwal

<br>thnx so muc....that's a rely sweet comment<br>



You deserve it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
edited my comment 😊

luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: -fsn-

😊
Hi shilpa
wow amazing end.its really awesome.u r such a very nice writer.u write all the things v nicely.
hope u write ff on premeer 😃.
luv
fatima


thnx a lot fatima....i'm really glad u liked....inshallah i'll defininitely write a PH ff....ph rock n so does this forum!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hii
it was rocking 👏
the dialogues were fabulous
plz start writing a ff sooon
i'll be waiting

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