Shilpa's one shot!! special NOTE on pg 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -fsn-

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hi shilpa how r u & how was urs paper?
its really nice.........awesome part...........wait 4 the next.

luv
Fatima


thnx....d paper was good
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

Awe such a cute par yaar exam kaisa tha??


thnx a lott....exam was great...u guys are very very caring n friendly....thnx a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzz asap waitinggggggggggg


sorry yaar....this last part is taking time...i'll pm u when i update....will do it asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Guys before d re-union I jus thot of putting sum cute ph scenes coz only then reunion will fit well'.hope u'll enjoy

RECAP-ph eyelock gets interrupted n h walks out of d room, embarrassed.

ashlesha- heer tum?? tum prem ke kamre mein kya rahi thi??

h-main woh.....woh kapde

a-bas heer, bas karo ye apni jhooti bahanebaazi.

h-ashlesha mujhe toh maa ne kapde lene bheja tha aur achanak wahan prem aa gaya...mujhe toh pata bhi nahin tha ki...

a- haan heer....tumhein toh kabhi kuch pata nahin hota hai....bina pata hue hi tum saari chalein chal deti ho

h-tum galat samajh rahi ho...

a-nahin heer main tumhare shatir dimaag ko achchi tarah samajhti hun....meri khushi toh tumse bardaasht hi nahi hoti....pichli baar bhi tum mandap se mere prem ko mujhse cheen kar le gayi aur iss baar toh tumne had hi kar di....kabhi toofan ke bahane usse cliff par bula leti ho toh kabhi kapdon ke bahane uske kamre tak aa jati ho....tum uska peecha chod kyun nahi deti

h-main prem ka peecha kar rahin hun??

a-haan heer....par iss baar prem sirf mera aur mere bete ka ho kar rahega'aur toh aur jab tumse akele prem ko phaansa nahin gaya toh tumne apni beti bula liya yahan prem ko emotionally blackmail karne

p-comes there

p-bas ashlesha....kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum

a-main bakwaas nahin kar rahi hun prem....ye heer jitni bholi dikhti hai usse kahin zyada chalaak haio....dikhti kuch hai aur hai kuch aur

p-bas ashlesha main heer ke khilaaf aur ek shabd bhi nahin sununga

h-gives a thank you cum sorry look to prem n leaves

a-leaves in frustration

SCENE CHANGE

Heer is busy wid wedding preparation'.giving directions regarding d decorations

Prem is passing by'.he starts luking at heer lovingly while she is working wid full concentration

h-making mehendi paste from one hand and trying to put her hair back with the other'.her lat is constantly irritating her

p-standing there n smiling looking at her

just then sum ladies cum there for mehendi n see heer's hand

one lady-waah heer tumhari mehendi ka rang toh bahut gehra hai'.iska matlab janti ho?? Matlab tumhara pati tumse bahut pyaar karta

another lady- waise heer'.chahat ke papa hai kahan aaj kal??

Another-haan heer tumne kabhi milwaya nahin unse

Another- batao na heer'..

Heer- hum ab saath nahin rehte

Heer leaves from there in embarrassment n d smile on prem's face vanishes

SCENE 3

Heer is putting sum decorations when one red dupatta flies off'.h goes running after it'.she bumps into prem n d dupatta falls over both of them in complete kasautii style

There is loooon staring session'.jus then h sees ash passing by'.h is trying hard to put away d dupatta feeling uncomfortable

p-ruko heer'.main nikalta hun

h-prem woh main dupatta lene ke chaakkar mein galati se tumse takra gayi'I'm sorry

p- nahin heer iss baar galati meri hai'.mujhe dekh kar chalna chahiye tha- luks into her eyes n says it in total premish way

prem is about to leave

h-prem!

p-haan heer

h-prem aaj tumhari zindagi ki ek nayi shuruaat hai''main chahti hun kit um khush raho'.mere saath chat hai toh aaj se tumhare saath tumhari patni aur beta, tumhara pura parivaar hoga'.tum akele nahin rahoge 'main tumhare liye bahut khush hun

p-doesn't reply but his eyes say it all'.yeh sab khoot hai'.main aaj ke baad kabhi khush nahi rahunga aur yeh baat hum dono jaante hain'.phir tum kyun apne aap ko jhooti tasalli de rahi ho heer'.he leaves from there in anger

CUT TO MANDAP

Pandit- chanting his mantras

Lot of awkwardness b/w ph as its end of their love'.they jus cant take it'.both r crying from within'.ek doosre se nazrein bhi nahin mila paa rahe

Pan-ab vadhu ko balaiye

Ash cums in bridal dress surrounded by lotta girls, gives heer a complete vampish look n sits there on the mandap beside prem

P thoughts-mujhe bahut dukh hai heer kit um ab bhi iss shaadi ko rok nahi paa rahi ho'.shayad tumhare liye mujhe maaf kar paana namumkin hai

Pan-ab var aur vadhu pheron ke liye khade ho jaaein

Wid every phera ph are dying a death

Its d sixth phera going when a loud voice stops it

RUUKK JAAOOO!!! YEH SHAADI NAHIN HO SAKTI'

Guys can u guess who said it??

Edited by Shilpa.Agarwal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

okay....thnx a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@sweta....who do u think d person shud be??
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
HEY......
you cant end it at such interesting moment please send the next part sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
awesome part as usual do update soon can't take the suspense

Kamal
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
wow... awesome update...
cant wait for the next part...
plz update soon coz i cant take the suspense...
i am unable to guess who stopped the pheras...
regards,
Suhana.

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