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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Basically....you understood? 😳 *angel smile*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Aw, this was sad :( I thought they'd find out the truth, and there'd be a happy ending!

Anyways, beautifully written, Shabo :D Thanks for another part!

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

@ Meera: Can't wait to see what you think; and you are all emotional about it cuz it's about YOU! If it was Heer, you would be doing an evil laugh in the corner. :)

@Sanya: I thought of giving it a happy ending but then changed my mind. Thanks a lot! :D

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

^ How bout you write an alternative ending? 🤣

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

I would not Shabo! 😳 I'm not THAT evil! 😛

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Did you actually have another ending in mind? 😛

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

I can write an alternative ending...OMG! Did I just offer? *rubs eyes* Anyways, apart from that, I like the way Shabo ended. It was just...too complete.