|Estranged|One Glance-p5/AltEnding-p10 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

SHABZ!! firstly, yay, u continued it...and hayyeee Meera! *hugs tightly* tht buddhu prem is sho stupid, me shall smack him nxt time. Pagal ne meri bhabhi jaan ki kya halat kardi aur khud ki bhi...*mumbles*
This was so sad. I loved it!...Amazing and outstanding as always! 😉Yups I did, and Prem is stupid isn't he? *ducks* Thanks a bunch sadistic queen. :)
-Rinki

Ooh no more parts...well am sure u'll come up with other tragic ideas to makes us "Tragic Lovers" Happy Shappy. 😉😆I got another tragic one coming, specially for our dear own mod. :)

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

You are ALL evil...except Radz and Bhav who were feeling for the pain! 😳 I for one did not laugh during it...and now...I think I have a lump in my throat but it's all gone once I read your comments! *shakes head*Will edit this late at night...might end up crying again1 😳*shakes head* Meera, it is fiction, you realize that?

*edited*

You'll be thrilled to know....I did cry the second time...maybe cus I'm just feeling all like I usually do...(full of random emotions) ME? THRILLED? Out of someone else's pain? *jaw opens*

Anyways...the way you flowed from what I was feeling to how he felt was just perfect Shabz, the emotions were just so heartbreaking....Like as if I could see it happening and just wanted to jump in and stop it...(weird I know! 😆)aha BT style is getting to you is it not? 😆

The pain that he could see reflected in her eyes...I loved how you described that! 😳 And the way you wrote about me always dreaming about her wedding and it being exactly like it was the only thing different was the most important thing the guy! 😳 Oh and I loved the way you said how he felt when the sindoor part was happening and during the pheres..Aww thanks a bunch Meeru! 🤗

The bracelet part had to be the most special part of this one shot...having something like that as the last memory from the person who love the most, and seriously the irony made me smile in hurt though 😳 This part was my least fave but if you say so. :)

The end tore my heart...literally!😳 The way you described me seeing a movement and leaning further in the hug just to see--i can almost imagine the shock in her eyes😭 And then he smiled before turning to leave and the way you said she felt the pain of how she felt when he left and the line you wrote about her knowing he took her heart with him!😳 That was literally perfect!😳😳😳Out of both parts, the last of the 2nd had to be the part I am most proud of! :) Thanks Meera!

Thanks again Shabo, for writing this absolutely amazing one shot for me! 😳😃 It really did mean a lot to me! 😳You are welcome and thank YOU for the awesome idea! :)

Love you loads,

Meera😊

Originally posted by: noneeM

S! You're brilliant at this! Totally Impressive stuff! I love tragedy! Esp, when you write it!!!!!
xoxo:-Nonee

P.S. Awww, but poor Me! and Prem......

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Shabo, why were you gonna kill me? And hai...I feel soo proud to read that convo between you and Meera...how you guys are fighting over the writing...haha

Originally posted by: missindia26

Another awesome part Shabo 👏

Loved how you switched between both of them, describing their emotions so vividly 😛

But so heartbreaking 😭

All through I was just waiting for someone to scream "Ek minute, rukhjao" etc 😲

But it was still fantastic 🤗

Love TJ