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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

For some reason, this didn't get bumped up to page one. *cheeky grin*

Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Shabzie, they didn't find out the truth. OMG, you love torturing people don't you? God, I felt my heart break.

Love,
Radz

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hellooo? This is me? My friends say they will never leave me alone with their siblings or future kids cuz "I'm so evil." I beg to differ. :)

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Totally with Radz on this one. The tragedy of it (good God, I almost said 'tragicness'!) lay in the fact that she got married to Ajay without anyone ever realising that Prem and Meera love each other, and now both of them - no, all three of them - are gonna be miserable for life.

Thanks a lot, Shabz. *pouts* I kept waiting for a happy ending, but nooooooo...😛

Love,

Bhav (:

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Argh! I just lost what I typed! *glares* Shabo, this shot was SAD but I kept laughing! Haha..imagining Meera and Prem part away like soo🤣...but the thing is that this would never happen with Meera in real. We all know how much she adores/loves Prem/HC. Haha

Now you made HAVE to write the Birthday shot...Pt 2 cus I hoped this was going to be happy, but no! *cry* Pssht...anyway how I can leave Meera with only the sad part of Birthday shot? *wonders*

Anyways, I LOVED it. The emotions of Prem on knowing she was getting married to Ajay and so on...and the ending. I adored the ending...it was just superb! I loved it Shabo, The way she turns back to see him there, and then cries...and hugs him..it reminded me of KKHH...from which part, I do not know!

Okay...I admit I laughed for about the whole....shot? Would that be bad?🤣

*Hugs*

~Shifu

Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
Shabzie, they didn't find out the truth. OMG, you love torturing people don't you? God, I felt my heart break. *picks up pieces of Radzie di's heart* Here. 😆

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: sourpuss
Totally with Radz on this one. The tragedy of it (good God, I almost said 'tragicness'!) lay in the fact that she got married to Ajay without anyone ever realising that Prem and Meera love each other, and now both of them - no, all three of them - are gonna be miserable for life.Oh pish posh. THey got memories don't they? 😆

Thanks a lot, Shabz. *pouts* I kept waiting for a happy ending, but nooooooo...😛 It's me? Do I ever listen? 😆

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: *Shifali*
Argh! I just lost what I typed! *glares* Shabo, this shot was SAD but I kept laughing! Haha..imagining Meera and Prem part away like soo🤣...but the thing is that this would never happen with Meera in real. We all know how much she adores/loves Prem/HC. HahaOH i hate it when that happens! True, she would never "get married" she'd jump at his feet and tell him the truth and force him to break his engangment. *shifts eyes* OK maybe if we got her on a sugar rush she would. 😆

Now you made HAVE to write the Birthday shot...Pt 2 cus I hoped this was going to be happy, but no! *cry* Pssht...anyway how I can leave Meera with only the sad part of Birthday shot? *wonders* Oh you HAVE to write the second part, where you left it off, that was just cruel. 😆

Anyways, I LOVED it. The emotions of Prem on knowing she was getting married to Ajay and so on...and the ending. I adored the ending...it was just superb! I loved it Shabo, The way she turns back to see him there, and then cries...and hugs him..it reminded me of KKHH...from which part, I do not know! She didn't hug him. 😕 Did she? No, she hugged her mother to get a better look. Crap, I probably messed up on the typing there. But thanks Shifali, aha KKHH? Well, Meera will like that! 😆

Okay...I admit I laughed for about the whole....shot? Would that be bad?🤣 No I was too. 🤣 I'm always in a relly good mood when I write tragic. 😛

*Hugs*

~Shifu Thanks Shifz *hugs*

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Get her on another Sugar Rush..!! I order! Now! Haha. I donno who Meera hugged and what not but I just picturized a hug with Premeer..Wild imagination! Haha

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Hmmm Prem/Meera hug? We wanna keep Meera conscious don't we? 😆

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

You are ALL evil...except Radz and Bhav who were feeling for the pain! 😳

I for one did not laugh during it...and now...I think I have a lump in my throat but it's all gone once I read your comments! *shakes head*

Will edit this late at night...might end up crying again1 😳

*edited*

You'll be thrilled to know....I did cry the second time...maybe cus I'm just feeling all like I usually do...(full of random emotions)

Anyways...the way you flowed from what I was feeling to how he felt was just perfect Shabz, the emotions were just so heartbreaking....Like as if I could see it happening and just wanted to jump in and stop it...(weird I know! 😆)

The pain that he could see reflected in her eyes...I loved how you described that! 😳 And the way you wrote about me always dreaming about her wedding and it being exactly like it was the only thing different was the most important thing the guy! 😳 Oh and I loved the way you said how he felt when the sindoor part was happening and during the pheres..

The bracelet part had to be the most special part of this one shot...having something like that as the last memory from the person who love the most, and seriously the irony made me smile in hurt though 😳

The end tore my heart...literally!😳 The way you described me seeing a movement and leaning further in the hug just to see--i can almost imagine the shock in her eyes😭 And then he smiled before turning to leave and the way you said she felt the pain of how she felt when he left and the line you wrote about her knowing he took her heart with him!😳 That was literally perfect!😳

Thanks again Shabo, for writing this absolutely amazing one shot for me! 😳😃 It really did mean a lot to me! 😳

Love you loads,

Meera😊

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago