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Posted: 15 years ago
great.
Loved it.
Hope prem gets to know that he has kids with heer.
It will be nice to see prem tries to get them back to his life or the otehr way around😃
Update soon plz😳
Edited by nuptalie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
that was amazing sheeba...👏 awww...chahat is adorable...cant wait for the next part...update soon and thanks for the PM...😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

There u see inside the temple a broken and sad Prem kneeling down.............his eyes closed............tears flowing down his cheeks...............he sobs---Zindagii mein pehlii baar bahot akelaa mehsoos kar rahaa hoon............apnii Heer...........apni Chahat ko abb paaney kii koi umeed nahiin hai...........aaj apney pyaar apnii chahat ka phir se lautney kaa jo mera intezaar tha woh bhi khatam ho gaya...............SAB KUCH KHATAM HO GAYA............Sab kuch..............

Standing behind Prem u see Chahat...........the little girl looks at prem crying and she walks upto him.............coming right next to where he knelt and with her hands she wipes off the tears flowing down Prem's cheek asking him sweetly---Aap ro kyun rahey ho?..............

Prem looks at Chahat..........he stares at her innocent face..........

Chahat asks Prem again---Aap ro kyun rahey ho?...........

Prem says wiping away is tears---nahiin beta……kuch nahiin..bas aisey hii………..

Chahat replies---jab kabhi Chahat rotii hai naa……….to Chahat kii mummy ussey usskii favourite chocolate dekey chup karaa letii hain………..(She takes out a chocolate from her pocket and says giving it to Prem)……….Yeh leejiye……….ronaa burii baat hai……….Keep smiling always!..............

Prem is all smiles as he finds himself in complete awe of chahat's innocence………..

He says---Achcha theek hai………..lekin yeh toh bataaiyee kii chahat yahaan akeley kya kar rahii hai aur aapkii mummy kahaan hai?..............

Chahat says---Chahat yahaa apnii maaci aur bhaiyaa ke saath apni mummy se milney aayi hai……….aur humaari car kharaab ho gayii…………maaci ussey theek karaa rahii hain…………Shubh bhaiyaa viedeo game khel rahey hain aur Chahat bore ho rahii thi isliye un sab ko binaa baataiye………..yahaa aa gayi!..............

Prem picks up chahat in his arms and says moving towards the exit to go down…………..

There manav who was busy looking for Chahat everywhere with Shubh and Archu...........is surprised to see Prem come down with a little gil in his arms ...............

Archu runs upto them and before she says anything Prem stops her saying--- Sh........she is asleep (he whispers).............

The five of them make their way to the car and as Prem makes Chahat sit in the front seat making sure she doesn't get up............he comes out to talk to Archana after making Shubh sit behind.............

Archana says---Thank u for everything............

Prem asks her---Aapko kahaan chodnaa hai?..............

Just then Prems phone rings and he picks it up...........It was Heer.............who was sobbing---Prem............Baujii kii tabiyat kharaab ho gayi hai............unhein..........harman aur Kirran jeeju unhein hospital ley kar gaye hain tum............tum jaldii se aa jaao..............

Prem stood stunned and saying a quick Ok he keeps the phone down and telling Archahan that his father was ill isliye they had to go to their place first they all get into the car..............

Prem puts the seat belt around Chahat who was fast asleep..............(Prem papa cares!)............and starts the car.............there behind a tired Archana with Shubh in her lap...........who was already asleep leans on Manav's shoulders her eyes feeling heavy she too dozes off..............while manav stares at her beautiful face in complete awe of the innocence on her face...............

Its late in the night by the time Prem reaches the Juneja house............evryone gets down and the two kids walk to the entrance............Chahat with Prem and Shubh with Archana.............

They all enter the hall where heer comes down with Preet.............what she sees shell shocked her completely!............Standing next to Premholding his hand was Little Chahat.............

Heer then sees Archana and Shubh too................

Preet looked at the five of them stunned...............Kisna theme fast version plays in the background ...............

There Chahat leaves Prem's hand and runs upto Heer crying--mummy!...........I missed u.............Heer takes her in her arms..............consoling her as Shubh too walks to stand next to Heer saying after kissing her on her cheek--Missed u mom!..............

Prem watched all this SHOCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The world seemed to move round............everything seemed to swirl as the realisation dawned onto Prem...........his Heer was a mother of two kids............his kids............his son Shubh..........and his daughter chahat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem din't know what to say after what happened next............The kids called Preet their CHACHU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem stood there confused...........shocked............stunned............wondering whether all that was happening was a dream............

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Di
How are u?
Nice,Awesome update as always
love it
thankz for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....................
I luv this prem....even when he didnt know they were his kids, he was so caring..now that he knows they r his ...god knows how much he will pamper them!!
Chahaat is such a sweetie pie!!
OMG!! How will Prem confront Heer now?? will he b mad at her for hiding his kids for so long??
this is getting interesting by the moment!!
Please continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Truely awesome !
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wat an awesome update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz frnd update the next part asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey update i just read three to four updates just in one go they were really really nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay..........he finally knows......................
can't wait to see premeer unite.......................
fnx 4 da pm...........

Yaz

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