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Posted: 15 years ago

There in the Juneja house everyone was worried as Prem had not returned home………….Ashlesha walks upto Heer gathereing all courage she says---heer………….main prem ko maaf kar chukii hoon aur meri zindagii mein Manav ke alawaa koi nahiin hai……….aur ………

Heer interrupts saying---main jaantii hoon Ashlesha Prem ne mujhey sab kuch bataaya tha………….aur maafii toh mujhey maangnii chahhiye kii mainney aisaa kuch soch liyaa………….lekin pataa nahiin yeh prem kahaan chalaa gayaa?

Ashlesha calls up manav at last thinking he might know where Prem was…………..

Manav says---Haan ash bolo kya hua?

U can see Manav is standing on the empty lane under the temple at night and there's no one in vicinity............manav says---Haan Ashlesha Prem bhaiyaa mere saath hain.......hum donon Ambala gaye hain............thodii derr mein waapsii ke liye nikleige............theek hai.............lekin tum yeh sab kyn pooch rahii ho.............

Ashlesha tells Heer prem wa with manav listening to which evryone else is relieved too and go on with their works while Ash tells Manav evrything about Prem and his family but not the truth about herself being their relative and later she requests evryone in juneja house to not tell manav anything and that she was ready to stay at juneja house too..................

There some distance away from where Manav stood talking to Ash............all smiles and laughing............stood a car which had brokes down.............u see the driver making up the tyre while a girl dressed ina pair of blue jeans and a strapless pink top stood instructing him---Arrey bhaiyaa jii jaldii karo naa..............It was ARCHANA!.............

The driver says---Kar rahaa hoon lekin abhi time lagegaa aur tyre ke alawaa bhi kuch kharaabii hai.............thodaa time toh lagegaa...........

Archu gives a nasty expression and goes in to see the kids in the car telling them---- Chahat main dekhtii hoon aggar koi aas paas mil jaaye.............lekin tab tak tum donon yaheen rehnaa kaheen jaana matt............theek hai?!..............

Chahat nods her head while Archu calls out to Shubh who was busy playing his video game----OYE TECH SAVY...........merii baat sunn rahaa hai naa?

Shibh nods his head without listening and without looking up from his game............

Archu goes back to the driver to ask him to speed up standing on his head to make him work fast............there Chaht tells Shubh--Bhaiyaa let me play too............

Shubh replies---No I have to win this level this time!

Chahat looks around and sees the temple at the to of the cliff and fascinated by it she quietly gets down of the car.............without Shubh noticing her and Archu not seeing her as she was busy eating the driver's head................Chahat makes her way up the staicase of the temple.................

After a while Archu walks upto the car and is shell shocked to see Chahat missing.............

she asks Shubh---Chahat kahaan hai?

He says pointing to his next seat---yeh rahii...........

Archu who was at her wits end snatches the video game from him shouts---Nahiin hai...........she is gone..........aur tuu apnii game mein lagaa rahaa?!.............SUBH HOW COULD U BE SOOOOOOOOOO CARELESS!?.............

U see Archu and Shubh walking away from their car hand in hand to where manav stood talking to Ash...............

Archu says---Suniye?.............

Manav doesn't listen he was saying----Achcha baby.........matlab u don't miss me?............

Archu looks at Shubh smiling and she turns to glare at manav after he doesn't listen even after Archu calls out to him twice.............

Archana says--- Hello mister..........can't u see...........can't u hear...........i have been calling out to u for ages...........

manav looks at Archu............uppar se neechey tak and then at Shubh.............he tells Ash he would talk to her later and keeps the phone down................

Archu then says---ek akelii ladkii...........itnii raat ko.............iss khaali sadak par aapse madad maang rahii hai aur aaap hain kii iss phone se chipkey hain!

Manav says looking at Archu and then at Shubh and then at Archu again---Yeh...........yeh aapkaa betaa hai............

Shubh giggles..............

Archu replies angrily---jii NAHIIN............yeh meri didi kaa betaa hai.............aur aapko issey kya?............Main aapse mada maangeney aayi hoon aappko apnaa bio data deney nahiin...........waise bhi Chahat nahiin mil rahii aur aap hain kii............

Manav asks Archu to tell him everything and Chahat kyun nahiin mil rahii too..............

There u see inside the temple a broken and sad Prem kneeling down.............his eyes closed............tears flowing down his cheeks...............he sobs---Zindagii mein pehlii baar bahot akelaa mehsoos kar rahaa hoon............apnii Heer...........apni Chahat ko abb paaney kii koi umeed nahiin hai...........aaj apney pyaar apnii chahat ka phir se lautney kaa jo mera intezaar tha woh bhi khatam ho gaya...............SAB KUCH KHATAM HO GAYA............Sab kuch..............

Standing behind Prem u see Chahat...........the little girl looks at prem crying and she walks upto him.............coming right next to where he knelt and with her hands she wipes off the tears flowing down Prem's cheek asking him sweetly---Aap ro kyun rahey ho?..............

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx nisha..............Glad u liked this one too dear............next part asap.............hope u enjoy that one too dear...............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ash!! positive!!
Archu!! ha ha...that was funny LOL!!
and Mr Tech savvy!!! ROFL!!!
Chahaat!! awwww sweety!! will meet her Papa first!!
and wipe his tears away!awwwww
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Posted: 15 years ago
NIce update waiting for prem to know the truth of his kids update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx amu............Glad u liked this one too dear...........yaa Archu' part was funny naa.............Glad u mentioned it dear.............Hope u like Prem Chahat meet too...............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx srikrithi .........Glad u enjoyed this one too dear............Next part asap............Hope u enjoy that one too..............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the pm dear...... awsome part....... chahat meet with his papa in temple...
so sweet....😃 plz update asap....
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Posted: 15 years ago
wat an excellent update
beautiful update
plzzzzz add me in ur pm list
update the next part asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update
continue asap
yeah!!! chahat is meet prem!!!!!!!!
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kaash this can only be played out on screen! I loved it... Cannot wait for the next part. Thanks for the PM!

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