My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 14

ur story became interesting,desperately waiting 4 other part plz update soon.Atlast prem n his little princess met.

wwwwaaaaaaiiiiiiitttttttttiiiiiiinnnnnnnggggggggg.... That was such good chapter. My heart kept skipping beats... Cant wait for you next update...

PART17

Prem heard the most loving word: "papa" in his life, he was over his knees n he held out his arms signaling his daughter for a hug.

Gaya3 let Additi go n she ran towards her father. Both were extremely happy, Prem just could'nt wait n Additi at her fastest speed rushed towards him. Finally they were lost in a never ending hug filled with equal amount of love from both of them.

Prem considered himself the luckiest n the most happiest person.

This was the moment when Prem met Additi knowing the fact that Additi is his n Heer's daughter.

Both of them just could'nt let it go but finally hug came to an end, Prem then carefully examined her daughter's cute face, she had a wide smile, her father for whom she always prayed to god to meet him was infront of her eyes. Prem lovingly kissed Additi on her forehead n Additi kissed him on cheeks n also wiped his tears, when those small hands touched Prem's face he felt complete n simply loved her tender touch. Prem then took Additi in his arms, stood up n went up to his family.

Additi was sitting in his lap n he was looking at her with love

Additi: kya huwa papa?

Prem: kuch nahin, dekh raha hoon ke meri additi kitni pyari hai

Additi: mama bhi yahi kehti hai ke main bohot pyari hoon!

Lalit: chalo ab apne dadu ke paas aao, he took additi in his lap n said: " mujhe batao ke mujhe bauji kyun kaha?

Additi: mama ne mujhse kaha tha ke main jab aapse miloon to aapke pair choo kar aapko bauji kahoon.

Lalit laughs n says: to aap ne mama se poocha nahin ke main aisa kyun kahoon, woh to mere dadu hain

Additi: poocha tha na, mama ne kaha ke aisa kehne se aapko mama ki yaad aajayegi.

Lalit thought that Heer was right.

Meher says: Aap to bohot sweet ho, kya aap har baar apni mama ka kehna maanti ho?

Additi: uffo! aap log kitne sawaal karte ho!

They all laugh, Prem feels very good that Additi is making everyone happy, it is enjoyable to be with her.

Preet: bilkul sahi beta, aapki yeh chachi mujhse bhi aise hi sawaal karti hain.

Meher: preet tum bhi na bachon ki tarhaan...she then remembered her kids n said: arre preet jaake bachon ko to lekar aao.

Preet: un shetaano ko? taake woh apni masti se is ghar ka poora interior hi badal dein, woh waheen theek hain.

Gaya3: preet meher sahi keh rahi hai, additi ko bhi unki company milegi.

Additi smiles: haan haan plz

Preet then kisses Additi n leaves to get his kids.

Additi: dadu main inhein kya kahoon, yeh meri masi bhi hain, aur chachi bhi.

Lalit thinks for an answer

Meher: acha additi ek baat batao, aapko papa zyada ache lagte hain ya mama?

Additi: abhi to papa! he smiles n moves his hand over her face.

Meher: aapko jis waqt jo zyada acha lagta ho, aap mujhe usi rishte se kehna: chachi ya masi.

Additi: okay.

Finally Preet arrives with his kids n also Kulraj's kids.

Additi meets all, Preet tells her their names, Additi smiles at Avi n he tells his father that they've met before in mall.

Lalit tells kids: acha additi aap apne friends ke saath garden mein khelo, humein aapke papa se kuch baat karni hai.

All kids leave, the lounge is peaceful, it was the time to tell Prem the truth.

Prem stands, he moves his hand over his hair n thinks abt Heer

Prem: heer kahan hai, main additi mein aisa kho gaya ke...heer kahan hai?

Lalit: beta heer kisi kaam se bahar gai hai, tu beth teri maa tujhe sab bataegi.

They all settle down, Gaya3 sits near Prem, ready to tell him the truth.

Gaya3: prem, veera ki maut ek hadsa thi is mein nihaal ka koi dosh nahin yeh tu jaanta hai, lekin beta tu heer ke dard ke baare mein kuch nahin jaanta. Prem looked serious n listened.

Gaya3 continued: heer ne hum sab se zyada saha hai, after a pause she said beta, nihaal is duniya mein nahin raha!

Prem gets shocked, gaya3: jis raat heer ne ghar chora, usi raat nihaal ne khud ko jala kar apni zindagi khatam kardi.

Gaya3 cried while saying: hum ne veera ki laash to dekhi thi, magar heer ko apne bhai ka chehra dekhna naseeb nahin huwa kyunki woh poori tarhaan jal kar khaak hogaya tha.

Prem stood up n he could'nt believe his ears, he couldnt even imagine how much pain Heer beared n that also without him.

Lalit: heer nihaal ke shraat aur pindaan ke liye ludhiana gai hai.

Prem: kitna kuch heer ne saha, jab maine dard saha to heer mere saath thi lekin woh...woh to bilkul akeli thi koi nahin tha uske saath. Galti meri hai, kaash maine use roka hota.

He remembered how he wanted to but still could'nt stop her from leaving him.

Lalit: beta jo hogaya woh bhool jaao

Gaya3: khud ko dosh dene se kya hoga?

Prem: haan maa, guzra waqt wapas nahin aayega, main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar sakta

Gaya3: prem, heer ke bina tu bhi kaun sa zinda tha, tum dono ek doosre ke bina adhoore ho. Aur tu yeh kyun bhool raha hai ke agar heer ne nihaal ki maut ka dard saha hai to use additi ke roop mein khushi bhi to mili hai. Heer ko hausla dene ke liye tu nahin tha lekin tera ansh to tha.

At this Additi comes running to him n he takes her in his arms n lovingly hugs her. Additi took Prem out of his guilt but still he missed n thought abt Heer.

Precap: Some cute Prem Additi scenes. A bond of love n care between father n daughter will be described in next update.

that was soo very cute!!..fianly the father and daughter met!!!!