My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 12

PART15

Meher goes towards the room, opens it n enters inside. Juneja family doesnt knows that whats inside the room. For them its a suspense!

Meher in the room

Inside the room Meher sees that on one wall there's a photo frame of Balraj n Teji together with a garland on it. Suddenly she sees that on other wall there's Veera frame with garland on it. The thing which causes Meher to get shocked was Nihaal's photo frame on wall with garland, his picture was beside Veera's picture. Meher screams as it was the only thing that she could do.

Juneja's get even more nervous n tensed totally unaware of what was happening, Preet cant take it anymore as the woman inside is his wife so he went inside.

There Preet sees that Meher was sitting down n crying, Preet saw Nihaal's frame with garland, even he got shocked, he then went near her, hugged her n they both cried.

Juneja family members enters in room, they had the same reaction like Preet. Lalit went near Balraj's picture n said "balraj hum to yahan tere bete se maafi maangne aaye the kyunki bohot saal pehle hum ne us par ilzaam lagaya veera ki maut ka lekin us ne humein mauka hi nahin diya, ab tum hi bataao hum kya karen?"

He then turns to Mitali who was standing there n asked her "nihaal ki maut kaise huwi? yeh sab kaise huwa?

Next scene is when Juneja family is out of the room sitting on sofa n Mitali standing in one corner is telling them abt Nihaal's death.

"Us din aapke ghar se jaane ke baad, heer nihaal se milne aai. Nihaal ne use video cassette di aur phir woh wahan se chali gai, is baat se anjaan ke woh nihaal ko aakhri baar dekh rahi hai"

At this Meher cries!

Nihaal ko yahi dukh tha ke woh veera ko bacha nahin saka, shayad usne socha hoga ke woh dono ek doosre se pyar karte the phir bhi saath jee nahin sake.

Gaya3 feels sad remembering nihaal n veera

Nihaal ne veera ki tarhaan maut ki taraf apne kadam barhaae! Usne poore ghar mein kerosene charka aur maachis se ghar mein aag laga di. Subha ko jab main nihaal ke ghar gai to poora ghar jal chuka tha, iska matlab yahi huwa ke nihaal poori raat us ghar mein jal raha tha aur isi tarhaan uski maut hogai.

Aap sab ne veera ki laash to dekhi thi lekin heer ko nihaal ki laash tak dekhna naseeb nahin huwa. Jab heer nihaal ke ghar aai to uske saamne nihaal ki khaak thi.

Juneja family heard the most unexpected, they stayed still for sometime

Apne bhai ki khaak dekh kar heer heraan reh gai, phir woh bohot dair tak roti rahi, heer ki cheekhe bohot dardnaak thi, aur us dard ko baatne ke liye heer ke saath koi nahin tha, woh akeli thi.

Meher cries a lot n Preet consoles her, Mitali goes near her, sits there n says to Meher: meher mat ro jo hona tha ho chuka, tumne to yeh sach abhi suna hai is liye itni takleef ho rahi hai, tumhare saath to preet hai. Then she got up n continues: "lekin heer, woh to is dard ko 5saalon se jee rahi hai aur uske saath na uska prem na uska pariwaar."

Lalit gets up says: kitna kuch meri bachi ne akele saha, hum sab itne saalon tak is sachaai se anjaan the.

Mitali to lalit: uncle jo ho chuka woh badla nahin ja sakta ab aap yeh aansoon poch de jiye.

Mujhe aap sab ko kuch dikhana hai, chaliye mere saath.

Mitali takes them all upstairs into Heer n Additi's bedroom.

Mitali with others stood outside Heer's bedroom n said: heer ab akeli nahin hai, woh aap sab se door to thi magar uski zindagi mein ek khushi thi. She opens the door, let them in n they see Heer with a cute little girl in a huge frame right above Heer's bed.

Mitali says: yeh hai heer ki pyari si khushi, uska nanha farishta additi!

At first they were shocked but also were very pleased to see such a cute child!

Meher n Kulraj smiled mischieviously at each other. Lalit noticed n said "tum dono ko dekh kar aisa lag raha hai ke tum is bachi se mil chuke ho.

Kulraj says: jee bauji humne additi ko heer aur mitali ke saath mall mein dekha tha.

Lalit: aur mujhe bataya tak nahin.

Kulraj: bauji us waqt ghar ke haalaat aise the, lekin meher ne preet ko sab bataya tha, poochiye preet se

Lalit looks at Preet

Preet: jee bauji, meher ne mujhe heer bhabi ki beti ke baare mein bataya tha.

Lalit: tu to hai hi nalayak!

Mitali: uncle jee, ab hum doosre kamre mein chalein.

They all proceed towards playroom

Additi's playroom had all kinds of toys, bears, Additi's favourite dolls n their houses. They also saw Additi's cute photos of all four years. After seeing the photos they desperately wanted to meet Additi!

Mitali: yeh additi ka favourite kamra hai, is kamre aur bedroom mein additi ne ek rule banaya hai ke mama in dono kamron mein apne office ka kaam nahin kar sakti.

Uncle jee aapko ek aur special cheez dikhaani hai, chaliye.

They all go downstairs n Mitali brings the frame, she gives it to Lalit. It was the picture of Heer, Prem n little Additi.

Lalit had tears in his eyes when Mitali told him that this picture is Heer's dream that has not turned into reality yet. Lalit wished Additi to be with both Heer n Prem.

Preet to Mitali: aap ne humein yeh to bataya nahin ke heer bhabi aur additi kahan hain?

Mitali: additi apni frnd ke ghar par hai, thodi dair mein aati hogi

She continues: heer nihaal ke shraat aur pindaan ke liye ludhiana gai hai, woh kuch dinon ke baad aayegi.

Juneja family is quiet n thinks abt Prem, Heer n Additi.They all have same desire in their hearts: Prem Heer to be united, they all wish to see Prem n Heer together along with their child.

Meher says: yeh tasveer yeh sabit karti hai ke heer didi aaj bhi prem jiju se bohot pyar karti hai. Heer didi ko prem jiju ki zindagi mein waapis aana hi hoga.

Mitali: heer ko na sirf prem balke tum sab ki bhi zaroorat hai, woh aap sab ko yaad karti hai.

She points to a room

Mitali continues: us kamre mein heer ne aap ki tasveeron ko saja kar rakha hai, aur additi to har waqt us kamre mein jaati hai. Woh aap sab ko dekhegi to bohot khush hogi.

Mitali tells driver to go to pick Additi from her frnd's house.

Preet: humein prem bhaiya ko sab kuch batana hoga.

Lalit: prem yeh to jaan gaya hai ke veera ki maut ki waja nihaal nahin hai, lekin nihaal ki maut ke baare mein woh nahin jaanta, heer ne yeh paanch saal kaise guzaare yeh nahin jaanta, prem to apni beti ke baare mein bhi kuch nahin jaanta.

Gaya3: main prem ko phone karke yahan bulaaongi, ab sab theek hoga.

Prem is at his colleague's place for some business work. Prem with some men are sitting in a room, his cell rings n breaks his chain of thoughts, to attend it he leaves the room. Now Prem is in lounge, he disconnects the call because he is thinking abt Heer n not able to concentrate on anything. He feels bad for hurting her due to which she left him. Prem looks outside the window n something grabs her attention. What is outside the window which took Prem out of his thoughts filled with sadness? Wait for the next update!

Precap: Additi is in Gaya3's arms, Lalit standing next to them, they all are in jolly mood & Prem is standing on the entrance door of Additi's mansion.What will be Prem's reaction towards additi?

Originally posted by: nasco

well u like supense.
but this is killing me !! and i keep thinking abt this al day long.
please post it soon😊

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

very beautiful part..............finally prem n gaya3 realises their mistake but sry if i m being pessimistic but i really don't want heer 2 frgve prem atleast nt tll nw as bcoz of him he losses her brother n everythng

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome part
continue soon please left us with suspence
can u please PM me when u update???????????????/

Awesome. Cannot wait for the next part... Cant wait to read Prem's reaction...

it was good and precap seems very interesting can't wait.