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PART16

Prem looks out of window n something grabs her attention, he sees small kids playing with ball, but that is not what caught his attention. Among the kids he saw a cute little charming girl, she had a sweet smile, "she must be around Ayush n Avi's age?" he thought. Prem liked the way the child was moving here n there n playing with her friends in garden. Prem could'nt take his eyes off her, infront of him was the little girl but while looking at her he had flashbacks of Heer. Prem remembered Heer's smiling face, he remembered those moments in which Heer used to be happy with him. Prem wondered that why is he imagining Heer while looking at the little girl? He asked himself what is the connection between this girl and my Heer? Kyun mujhe ise dekh kar Heer ka muskurata chehra yaad aata hai? May be they both posses a beautiful smile, he answered himself.

Prem didnt noticed that he was so much engrossed in his thoughts that he came outside. He was at distance from the little girl when a kid threw ball that went in his direction. The kid requested him to pass the ball. Prem did as he was asked, he turned n before that he saw the little girl climbing the stairs of a slide. When he turned he heard the little girl's cry: aaahhhh!

Prem rushed towards her n in time held her before she could fall down. The little girl was in Prem's arms, she didnt knew that she is saved, due to fear of falling down her eyes were closed. Slowly she opened her eyes n was shocked to see her father infront of her. Her mouth was left wide open, she blinked her eyes few times.

This was the moment when Additi saw Prem for the first time in real.

Prem talked with her: beta aap ko lagi to nahin? aap theek ho na?

Additi stood up, she was standing n Prem was sitting on his knees.

Prem again asked: kya huwa beta? aap ko kahin chot lagi hai?

Additi smiled, realizing that it was'nt a dream, then very sweetly she hugged Prem.

Prem was touched by her sweet gesture, he also had his arms around her not knowing that she is his little princess! Prem couldnt understand what was happening, but one thing for sure he liked it.

Additi was very happy, she had a huge smile on her face because she saw her father after so many years, the other reason for her happiness was that she was saved by her father. As a child Additi felt pleased that she has a protective father.

Finally the hugging thing came to an end, Additi stood infront of him.

Before he could say anything Additi said: thank you! aapne mujhe girne se bachaya isi liye maine aapko hug kiya.

Prem smiled by the explanation he received from her.

Additi asked: par aap yahan kaise?

Prem: main yahan kuch kaam se aaya hoon, aap to apne friends ke saath khel rahe ho

Additi smiled at him.

Prem: to aap apna khel enjoy karo main chalta hoon, he got up.

Prem by his hand touched Additi's sweet face, Additi liked his act, he then walked inside.

They both kept on looking at each other. Ek ehsaas tha jo unhein judaa nahin hone de raha tha.

After sometime Prem glanced at window, he saw Additi walking alone. He went outside to find out that why is she alone.

Prem: beta aap akeli kyun ho? aapke friends kahan gae?

Additi: woh to sab apne ghar chale gae, aur jiska yeh ghar hai woh piano lessons ke liye gaya hai.

Prem: aapki car abhi tak nahin aai, aapka ghar kahan hai?

Additi: mera ghar yahan se bohot kareeb hai

Prem: chaliye main aapko chor doon.

Additi agreed "okay!"

They both sit in car n left.

Additi told him the address, she was sitting in front seat n Prem was driving.

Prem: aap theek ho na? he remembered how she was about to fall down.

Additi nodded assuring that she's fine, she said to herself "mama bilkul sahi thi, papa bohot sweet hain!"

Prem: aap ne abhi tak apna naam nahin bataya

Additi says: additi!

Prem: aapke saath ghar mein kaun rehta hai.

Additi: main aur mama

Prem: aur aapke papa?

Additi: woh bhi bohot jald hamare saath honge, she said it with full confidence.

Prem smiled at her n finally they reached their destination.

Additi left the car n said: bye! see you very soon

Prem: bye! he waved her, he was truly amazed by the child n felt very good for first time in many years.

Prem was driving n he got Gaya3's call, he answered it because now he was not in his sad thoughts but was in peace after meeting Additi.

Gaya3: prem kahan ho? mera phone bhi nahin utha rahe

Prem: maa meeting mein busy tha.

Gaya3: acha ab main tumhein address batati hoon. wahan aajao hamari car kharab hai, aake humein le jaao.

He says yes, n follows the address, Prem was pleased to meet Additi, he smiled after long time, there were many thoughts in his mind n he didnt noticed that he was going to Additi's mansion for 2nd time.

When he was half way he realized that he actually knows the address, maa us ghar ka naam kya hai?

Gaya3: additi's mansion

Prem: aap log wahan ho? main abhi aata hoon.

Additi's mansion

Additi entered in her house n stood still for sometime.

Mitali: additi dekho tumse milne kaun kaun aaye hain?

Additi said to herself: aaj to god ne sach mein meri prayers sun li, papa ke saath unki poori family bhi milgai!

She ran towards her grandparents, she stood infront of Lalit n said "bauji!"

Then she touched Lalit's feet, he had tears in his eyes n he remembered Heer when she was little n used to behave same like Additi.

Lalit took Additi in her arms, gave her a long hug of love, then Gaya3 dearly looked at her, even she had tears then she took Additi in her arms n hugged her. All members of Juneja family got very happy to see Additi n they gathered around Additi n her grandparents.

It seemed like a huge happy family bas Prem aur Heer ki kami thi.

Prem was walking towards Additi's mansion, finally he reached there, rang bell, Mitali opened.

She moved n right infront of him Prem saw his whole family along with Additi.

Additi was in Gaya3 arms, Lalit around them, they were in jolly mood, the rest of people had a huge smile on their faces.

Prem stood shocked, he somehow understood but then Gaya3 proved him right.

Gaya3: additi tumhari aur heer ki beti hai prem!

Additi was smiling, she had an innocence look on her face.

Prem had tears in his eyes, he slightly smiled, he was very much happy but didnt knew how to express his feelings.

You'll come to know more about Prem's reaction in next update! Read the precap below!

Precap: Prem had his arms spread, he was over his knees, Additi running towards him. Tomorrow finally baap beti ka milaap ho jaayega. Dont miss it!

Edited by zehra-pisces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey
awesome update
loved it
Awww finally prem and his little princess met
do update soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg awesome part
continue soon please don't make us wait more!!!!!
please continue soon
Awww finally Prem and Addiiti met !!!!
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww...soo cuuute!!!
finally prem met additi!!...swweeet!!
dying to read the next chapter!!..when is heer going to come back??..hurry up heer..there's a big surprise for you!!
update ASAP!!
~nitya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
yeah i agree to each and every word of prempadmasujal😊
loved ur update .ooh it was so nice.👍🏼
please update it tday itself . we can't wait more.it was such a nice updaet as always.
prem addite seen was great and i want heer to come back soon.kahan ho heer??
ooh im waiting to know how wuld heer react when she sees prem with addite??
ooh waiting for it asap.
please post the enst part tday.
please ⭐️

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