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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#301

hey no tragic endings plz......i like happy moments.thanks for the pm........plz update soon

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#302

I loved the way you ended this. It's so open-ended, because knowing Preet, once he gains some semblance of control over himself, he will throw Ashlesha out of his house and life, and find a way to get Meher back.

But I'm glad you didn't show that, because it would take away from the heartbreak of this part. Which was beautifully expressed. Meher's heartbreak, and Preet's brokeness was so aptly done.

Loved it Shabo!

Love,
Radz

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roshaa

@roshaa

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#303

its is a amazing f-f but sorry but the ending was very bad !😛 i dont like sad stories i wished that you made a happy ending ..!

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#304

*Sigh* Shabzie....I knew you'd do this.... My spot! 😛

*Edit*

Yeah, so I already kinda knew you were gonna make it tragic, cuz I'm psychic like that 😎 😆 But honestly, even though it was tragic, and sad, I still liked it! Cuz you write tragic stories SO well! Like seriously, I adore them! Because of you I've started having soft spots for tragic FF's/One shots! (Does that make sense?) 😆

The beginning was kinda happy-ish, cuz for a moment Meher forgot about everything and ran straight to Preet and hugged him for dear life! But then She got all angry and ran away! I felt SO extremely bad for both of them! Bechare! Because of one misunderstanding they had to be seperated! 😭 I hope in the next Janam they meet again and live happily ever after! 😛 😆

Oh yeah, btw. I DESPISE ASH! *death glare* 😡 But the ending was FAB Shabo! LOVED IT! Congratz on finishing this FF! Cant wait till next summer for your new FF! (Btw, are u gonna write one next year?) Till then ttfn! 😳

Luv,
Garmzz 😳 😃

Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago

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Madiha

@Dark Love

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#305

Shabz I stillllll haven't gotten a chance to type out a proper comment, but this keeps popping up in "my last 10" and (btw, I know I was suppose to leave today, but my trip got postponed *sniff*) I'd just like to point out that even though the ending was tragic, as I expected it to be, it was utterly beautiful, and it's completely disappointing to see that so many people don't respect the fact that the tragic, yet open ending gave it so much more beauty than a happy ending would.

Life isn't all happy-go-lucky...

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Thanks everyone! (Well maybe not everyone. 🤣) Will reply soon! :D

madz - tell me about it. whatever. like i care. i wrote what i wanted to. i appreciate comments that criticize my writing, not the ideas. if they don't like it, no one is forcing them to read it. 😆

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isomers

@isomers

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#307

OMG!..your ff was amazing!

especially the ending!...the ending being tragic was the best part!!(am i the only one saying this??)

*sniff* The ending actually bought tears in my eyes...and that doesn't usually happen with me!..so that tells you how good you write!..especially the way you take the littlest of the details and the way you show the emotions!!..bravo!..er..i think it's brava!!

~nitya

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#308

hey
just found ur ff and it was amazing...👏 loved ur tragic ending...even though I am not a big fan of them...this one was really sad but very good. if you do start an other ff...do PM me...thanks. 😊

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Rumsha

@pRinc3ssRZxJT

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#309

omg shabz ...that was just so0 brilliantly sad 👍🏼😃😭

loll right now i have so0o many emotions at the same timee...........but ur ff is like priceless 👏 w0ncerful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

C0NgRAtZ on completing itt ...... it was AMAZINGG
I LOVE THIS FANFICC .......one of my FAVV !!!!!!! 🤗

awwww what a tragic.....i cant believee this or should i say..i cant believee you would do that ....loll......but u went farr beyond my expectations..and ofcourse it was just FABULOUSS !!!!!

...i hate and always will Hatee Ash..lil b*tch😡 lol...but the way u ended it was so0 beautiful ...the emotions were elegantly portrayed and not enough words can extol and praise your FF😳...though its sad to see P n M like this...soo apart... poor poor Meet 😭...................

anyawayss I LOVED IT TO BITS....and im s0o glad u enjoyed readin my comments😳 loll.....imma miss readin ur FF......ughh scho0l had to start ...omg i just remembered i have to finish some hw ......lol.......anywayss that was Fantabulous !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv u

Rumsha