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Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

YAY you updated!! *dances* My Spot!! xx

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Awww, that was such a heartbreaking update Shabz 😔. Things have gone really sour between Preet and Meher, and it is making me sad! 😔 It was so depressing that a day that was supposed to be so special in their lives, became the complete opposite 😔. I am hoping that Preet wasn't actually asleep when Meher wished him and he did hear everything. Then he can get up, take her in his arms, and kiss it all better! ☺️☺️☺️ (unless that wish was in her thoughts, cuz then you can just ignore what I just said! 😆) No she said it outloud. 😆 And you read part 10, that didn't happen did it? 😆

Okay, Ashlesha disgusts me! 😡 I know, I know, you are rolling your eyes at me as I keep saying it! 😆 But I can't help it! 😆 That bit about her being happy that Rajveer let slip that it was her birthday on the same day as Preet and Meher's anniversary made me so angry 🤢. Urrrgh, I have a really bad feeling she will create some trouble on that day, but hopefully whatever she plans hits her back in her face. 😛No, I'm not rolling my eyes, everyone is saying that. 😆 Yea - we shall see about that won't we? 😆

Shabz, that Ash and Rajveer scene was pretty intense ☺️, your writing style gives me goosebumps, it was so well written, especially this line: 'His fingers trailed her waist slowly, taunting her, testing his own limits. He heard her gasp as they slowly traced small circles up her body.' Now that was totally hot! ☺️☺️☺️ Aww coming from you Z, that means a lot! Thanks! :D

Like I have said countless times before, she is so sickening! Fantasizing about Preet whilst Rajveer shows how much he craves for her. How can someone be so selfish? Like Radz, I feel sorry for Rajveer. If she doesn't love him, I don't get why she is still with him 😕 Is he some sort of consolation prize for her, which is only there to rid her of her loneliness and satisfies her needs? 😕 I feel there must be an inkling of love for him in that evil fibre of hers.She probably does love him. Maybe. I don't think that deep. 😆 You and Radzie di have fun analyazing. 😆

I remember feeling sorry for at the start of the FF and feeling that she must feel a bit of love for Rajveer if she surrendered herself to him like that! 😕 If not, then I totally hate her! 😡😆 Seriously, the parts with her forcing a smile around him made me so mad 😡! Lemme at her! *Scrappy Doo style* 😆 But wow, Shabz, I was so not expecting Rajveer to find out that way! What a twist! 👏 I loved every bit of it! 👏 And like Meera said, it's good he didn't dismiss it and act as if nothing had happened. Yea, I kinda feel bad for Rajveer, not sure what I'm going to do with him. 😆 Thanks so so much!

Eeeeh, can't wait for the next part now, continue soon! 😳

Love you, Zahra 😃 xx

I DID continue. 😆 Love you too!

Originally posted by: noneeM

Part 6:
Ash is disgusting!
Preet and the pandit cracked me up.😆
Preet and his "whose child is it?" comment!!!!! 😲 and 😆
Meet scene: Hawt and to die for [Where are my PTG's?]
Ashlesha coming in at that moment: Off with her head!😆
I loved the update S!
I knew you would like this part and I KNEW you were going to mention PTG's for them. 😆 Thanks!
Part 7:
Can I snip off Ashlesha's eyelashes*sharpens hatchet*😆😆
Radz di has rights, as her. 😆
That whole sequence with Ash and Preet culminating in her conniving "I love you" made me feel like I was seeing something beautiful being violated....somehow!!!! Disgusting tramp Ashlesha 😡 Why can't Preet just push her off...real hard (she hits something and dies!)
You want her to die? :O That's a first, most people are hoping she gets tortured. 😆
Loved the way you described Meher's reaction at seeing them! Ashlesha's really evil in this one...
She is isnt she? Just like ME! 😆
Poor Rajveer....Poor poor rajveer....
Ditto that.
I liked the "wouldn't smell Preet on her statement" was funny....although considering it was Ashlesha saying it, gross!!!!
LOLOLOL! Oh you crack me up. :_
And oh! NO! The cracks have started making their way....to destruction!!!! Evilness S! I have no hopes of a happy ending!!!!
Hmm...no comment. :)
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😛

*edited*

So here's something I NEVER thought I'd say....I Hate Prem! 😔 *cries* "let's go surprise the birthday girl" *mutters* *laughs evilly* I DID IT! 😆

Anyways....let's get into the update shall we? 😳 😛 I loved loved loved the beginning with Meher's angry and Heer coming, it seemed to natural to see the sisters like that! 😳 And Preet...aww! *hugs him* The smile on his face seeing Meher, totally imaginable! 😃I loved the sister's scene in today episode didn't you? 😆

Oh oh oh love the song!!! 😃😃 Really is one of my most fav ones yet! 😳 And the way they danced and aww Heer put it on? cute! 😃😳 I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS SONG! I can't stop listening to it. 😆

Oh and before I forget, loved Rajveer's voicemail greeting!😆😆 😳 He deserves so much better! 😃LMAO -that was my fave part as well! 😆

I thnk I already said what I feel about the ending...Prem included! 😔 😳 But oh oh oh I did love the way you showed how Meher felt...very well written! 😃Thank oo! 😛

No need to thank me for sending pm!😳 I love reading when you update! 😃 Oh and remodeling? sounds interesting! 😳 Gosh, I was just so tired yesterday - thanks! :) And insteresting - the people remodelling are certianly interesting. 😆

Love you,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: Dark Love

haaq over this spot! So, so lame. 😆

SHABO! 😲MADHIA! 😲

Agony. Isn't it great? 😍

Their wordless patch-up was beautiful...but damn you woman...that brushing of the lips....gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Ashh 😡 *dumps Ash in guttter* Thank you thank you - hm, sounds like me when technology is acting up. 😆

Amazing chapter though...I just hope Preet tells Meher and [at least partially] erases the doubts! Keep hoping. 🤣

Oh! && it was too short 😛😆Oh dammit. You saw through the using lyrics to make it look longer? 😛

You need like a part triple the length of that next time...I plan too. 😆 Lots of stuff is going to happen. Maybe. 😆

Originally posted by: mithalio

no worries take your time

Originally posted by: aati1429

It is just amazing.. how intense the love is but still MU come in

continue soon

Originally posted by: noneeM

Shabzie, you are seriously evil....I can't believe my eyes....Evil, Evil, Evil.....If you let Ashlesha win.....*thinks what to say*...errr, ummm, never mind, I'll think of something more evil and get back to you*winks* *winks back* Lemme know. 😆

My Spot.

Love:-Nonee

P.S. Just one more part doesn't seem promising at all.....If this turns tragic, I'll haunt you, princess Zee....so help me, I will....😆 *runs and hides behind bed*

P.P.S: I adore Westlife....and LOVE that song!!!!! OMG YOU TOO?!?!

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

*cries* Why Shabz, WHYYYYYYY???!!! *Kenan style* xx

Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

O0O0OOHHHH EEEMMMMM GGGEEEEEE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲😡

kutti kameeni Ashh !!!!! How daree she kiss him ...ughhh this woman is suchh a 🤬🤬 ..ugh duniya ki saari galiyaan iss manhoos ko mein dedoon ..lmao0o .........mera sarr ghoom raha hai ..after reading wht she did........loll but the beginning, i gotta admit, was reallyyy cutee 😳...Preet is the world's most adorable hubby😍 the way they danced and everything..*sigh*hayee😃😆........until some hoe had to mess it up😡...man they were just about to get comfy w/ eachther ..aur yeh aagi beech mein ..yuckky womann.....lolll
Wow. What a reaction. I think your reactions Rumsha, to my updates are the most entertaining for me to read. 😆 See? I have you a meet scene didn't I? Now go read that again an dignore Ash! SIMPLE! 😆

anywayss shabz that was like the best updatee ever..as alwayss hahaa .....i checked out the song on youtube and i was likee "this is so0 goin in my ipod" loll...really nice song though.....

r u gonna write another fanfic sometime later on ?? cuz i kno imma be sad when u end this😔 loll😆..i h0pe u do hehe....eagarlyyy waiting for the next updateee ....cant wait to see meher murder ash ..haha and thnxAwww thank you! 😃 No I'm not, school is starting so gotto focus on that! THanks and luv ya! :)

luv ya Rumsha

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

oh
it was awesum
ok now i am dying to read next update LOL

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I refuse to reread the part. *glares at computer screen* Prem is an idiot, and so is Preet. Seriously, he could have just waited for Prem! He knows that Meher's not happy with things with Ashlesha. And this, this was just plain stupidity on his part.
No problem. Thanks for editing it though. :) And yea - umm...relax?
Poor Meher.
Ditto. :)
Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: sourpuss

How are you going to wrap this up in just one more part?! I refuse to believe that that's possible. *folds arms* Nuh-uh.

Watch me. 8sticks toungue out*

Anyway, here's a phrase I never thought I'd be saying: Stupid Prem! Was he really that blind to all the freakin' tension between Preet and Meher and...and...that WITCH...that he sent Preet out on his OWN?! And then that stupid WITCH. How could she dream of planting a kiss on PREET?!

That, um.....WITCH is pretty stupid don't you think? 😆 So yea - I'm glad you liked it. *ducks*

*fumes*
*laughs*
And seriously, there is no way this can be ending in one more part...That's my problem, not yours! 😆

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: Garima93

OKAY Shabzie....right when it was getting good, you HAD to bring in that STUPID, FILTHY Ashlesha! UGH! *Glares* Yeah, I did. You know me, can't see everyone happy. 😆

And dumbo Prem had to go and "surprise" the stupid birthday girl! Ugh! PREM! WHY?!?!! Everything was going fine between Meet until Preet went up to Ash, and her stupid lips coincidently brushed past Preet's lips! UGH! It was so planned by Ashlesha, wasn't it?? GOD! I hate that idiot! She can go to hell! And Shabzie, the ending BETTER not be a tragedy or I swear...IMA KILL YOU! Oh relax. No it was not planned but yes Ash is an idiot. 😆 It's FICTION GARI! Relax! :)

anyways, great update! loved it! but HATED Ashlesha, as always! Continue whenever you have the time! 😳 Thank you thank you. :)

Luv,
Gari 😃

Originally posted by: rankanrock

minee

Originally posted by: rankanrock

okayyy soooooooo iiiiii screwed it again... 😳 😳 hehe 😳 .... okay... so i seem to be getting in the habit of doing that 😳 😳 😆 okay so here goes... Well you can't do it for much longer, only one more part left. 😆

Chapter 9: i just want to say one thing to ash... HA!!!! BUSTEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!! 😃..... *grins like an idiot* now coming to meher... oh god i feel sooo sorryyyyyy for the poor girl 😭 .... you described the sudden stiffness in their relationship quite well... 😊 ... and the last part was so sad... and i feel like literally killing preet.. i mean i cant believe it... he actually slept...??? i mean how can you be so thick and dense... you are planning to end this FF on a happy note arent you young lady?? *looks sternly*.... well the chapter was well written... the ash rajveer part was umm uncomfortable?? 😕 😕 😆 i wish you had switched the names in the making out part with the names of meet... 😃 😃 😃 well thats it for chap 9 😊 LOL - that has to be the best comment for chapter 9 so far. :P And hmmm, yea I don't know. OK lie, I do know but I can't tell you if it's going to be tragic or not. 😆 That would totally kill the mood. 😛

chapter 10:

nice update really until you reach the end...... 🤢 okay so the scene b/w heer and meher was really natural! 😊 you described it well 👍🏼 the dance between preet and meher was soooooo endearing!! 😊 😊 the lyrics were very nice... and the scene was very sweet shabz 👏 👏 👏 loved it! and nowwwwwwwww we come to the bad part... i trluy regret this shabz but now wld be a good time for you to duck! *throws tomatoes! Ha! i got one! 😛 😆.. that felt good 😆! but seriously woman! are you bewitched? what exactly compelled you to write that scene??? i mean come on!!things could have stayed positive for one chapter! it doesnt hurt you know 😭... *thnks who is more evil.. ash or shabz* 🤢 the last really put a damper on the whole chapter.. kinda makes the patch up a lil pointless...! and as im older then you by one year.. so its spanking time! 😈 *spank spank spank* ahh that felt better 😉 😆 😆 well i think i have blabbered long enuf! 😆 please end the ff on a positive note..! Oh god, now physical abuse? 😆 Harsh man, harsh. 😆 Hey, I had one postive chapter didn't I? Gosh, be happy with that. *ducks* I'm glad you think I wrote it well thought and thanks! :D No promises!

love,
maham

P.S sorry if the spanking hurt.. i couldnt help myself 😆I'm used to it. 😆 Thanks again. :D