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Man, Shabz...Reading this while still partly jetlagged is just...not good. *struggles to retain coherency*

Originally posted by: tadashi

that was really good! i don't like tragic endings but this one was pretty amazing! :)

Originally posted by: noneeM

I knew it! I KNEW it! I knew IT! LOLOLOL!

Shabzie, no matter how much I expected you to end it with us sobbing out hearts out......this still brought tears to my eyes!!!!! I shouldn't be happy that it made you cry but I kinda am cuz that means it was a good part right?

My Spot!
Really, a most beautifully written chapter...right from the word go....Thanks!

'What little was left of it from the sight that kept replaying in front of her eyes.' You pack such a punch using just a line...Which is why I adore the way you write....Even if you're saying just a word or two....you pack a powerhouse of emotion into it....Wonderful!!!! I think that's my fave line in the whole ff. Thanks Nita!

The mendhi on her hands stared back at her as she remembered....Whoa!!!!! Superb!!!!The whole sequence where meher is standing by the bench, remembering everything is written so SO beautifully..... Hun, that concept is SO choried - the mendhi thing...

'It was as if the heavens were crying all the tears for her.' Another awesome line!!!!! And her letting her mendhi wash off...so symbolic...Very choried again...!

i loved that meher's automatic response was to find solace in Preet's arms....before that wicked Ashlesha's perfume...got to her...*Sigh* She sucks doesn't she?

And I loved how you described Preet's reaction to her slapping him, how the emotions on her face affected him... Thanks!!

And I have NO words to describe how beautifully you have written Preet's reaction! Honestly S! that has to be one of the most gut wrenching reactions......I could see him there, numb, blank eyed, hollow souled, empty without his love....Oh! Dear! magnificent writing!!!! Dude I love your comments! Thanks!

Like I said before, one of my fav fics...EVER!!!!!I wish All good things didn't have to come to an end!!!!! I will miss this fic. I'll miss reading comments like your's! 😃

Love:-Nonee

P.S: Oh! And that last line!!!!!! Take a bow Shabzie!!!! That was pure wizardry!!!Spellbinding!!!!
P.P.S: Bravo! on completing this fic, which is one of my fav fics..EVER!!!*runs off before she can add another P.P.P.S😆*Thanks a ton Nita! No one comments like you!

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😃 (I shudn't be so happy shud I? 😳)

*edited*

Knew I shouldn't have read this right now...😔You should have read it when you were already sad. So if it was a sad ending, you wouldn't have changed, and if it was happy - your mood would have changed.

Shabo...because we're friends, I'm going to say this much and hope you understand...THAT WAS undoubtedly the best piece of TRAGIC writing I've read in the last little while, my heart was in my throat the entire time, an honestly that is all I'm going to say, because you already know how much I LOVE your style of writing and especially when it's tragic! 😉😃Thanks Meera! I don't know what to say to that but thanks. 😆

Love you loads and loads,

Meera😳

P.S. Congrats on completing it in your set time frame! 😃 *hugs* *flutters* Thanks!

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
that was awesum but sad tooo
amazing ff

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Shabz, I have got to say one thing, I don't care what happened in the other 10 parts of this fic or even what the storyline was, Part 11 made me cry!😭

*shocked out of her senses* I made YOU cry? 😲

It just made me sad! Amazingly described and :@ at Ash! It was an amazing ending Shabz to this fic. Amazing...
Thanks a ton Shifs! Coming from you that means so much!

Originally posted by: LilyGurl

You ended the fic very tragically. Poor Preet. No matter how mad we get at Ash she wins. :S TThe emotion were so strong though. Written Amazingly but broke our hearts.👏>😭

Love Lily

Originally posted by: mithalio

tragic ending, i am not sure.

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey no tragic endings plz......i like happy moments.thanks for the pm........plz update soon

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I loved the way you ended this. It's so open-ended, because knowing Preet, once he gains some semblance of control over himself, he will throw Ashlesha out of his house and life, and find a way to get Meher back. *throws head back in relief* Thank you for seeing that! :D

But I'm glad you didn't show that, because it would take away from the heartbreak of this part. Which was beautifully expressed. Meher's heartbreak, and Preet's brokeness was so aptly done.Thanks a ton di!

Loved it Shabo! Thanks and love you too!

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: sabzz

its is a amazing f-f but sorry but the ending was very bad !😛 i dont like sad stories i wished that you made a happy ending ..!

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

OMG!..your ff was amazing!

especially the ending!...the ending being tragic was the best part!!(am i the only one saying this??)

I don't care if you ARE the only one. Thanks for saying that! :D

*sniff* The ending actually bought tears in my eyes...and that doesn't usually happen with me!..so that tells you how good you write!..especially the way you take the littlest of the details and the way you show the emotions!!..bravo!..er..i think it's brava!!

~nitya
Thank you SO much Nitya, your comment means a lot to me! :D

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
just found ur ff and it was amazing...👏 loved ur tragic ending...even though I am not a big fan of them...this one was really sad but very good. if you do start an other ff...do PM me...thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

omg shabz ...that was just so0 brilliantly sad 👍🏼😃😭

loll right now i have so0o many emotions at the same timee...........but ur ff is like priceless 👏 w0ncerful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!C0NgRAtZ on completing itt ...... it was AMAZINGGI LOVE THIS FANFICC .......one of my FAVV !!!!!!! 🤗awwww what a tragic.....i cant believee this or should i say..i cant believee you would do that ....loll......but u went farr beyond my expectations..and ofcourse it was just FABULOUSS !!!!!

...i hate and always will Hatee Ash..lil b*tch😡 lol...but the way u ended it was so0 beautiful ...the emotions were elegantly portrayed and not enough words can extol and praise your FF😳...though its sad to see P n M like this...soo apart... poor poor Meet 😭...................anyawayss I LOVED IT TO BITS....and im s0o glad u enjoyed readin my comments😳 loll.....imma miss readin ur FF......ughh scho0l had to start ...omg i just remembered i have to finish some hw ......lol.......anywayss that was Fantabulous !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv u

Rumsha

Originally posted by: Neetu2825

Wow! I can't believe you ended it like that.
I was so looking forward to a happy ending...I hate to see MEET apart and Ash win out in the end.😭

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Man, Shabz...Reading this while still partly jetlagged is just...not good. *struggles to retain coherency* *shakes head* Y'know you could have just hit the like button. Or wait - you didn't like it? 🤣

Ending tragic...good....but why? I was hoping for a happy ending, lekin tumne toh tragic hi kar diya. *sobs* I mean, it was seriously awesome though, but it was so sad. You should do a "some years later" thingie...Please? :D You can make it my birthday present! *ignores the fact that her birthday is over a month away* 😆 Because it's me. Nuff said. 😆 Thanks for liking it and yeah, I was about to say that. :D Nope, unless I get a stroke of genius, I'm leaving it like this. It's open ended enough 😆

Okay yes a jetlagged Bhav is a useless Bhav. *struggles not to agree* No comment.

Love,

Bhav :|

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Thank you thank you! I loved it! i know i haven't had a big chance to post comments on this FF, but i'm sure you realize that i simply loved it!

It's ok Maddy, its all good!

I swear before school starts i'm going to write a tragic OS, just for you! it's long over due, but better late than never right? {:D]Relax your pants - you don't need to! 😆

If people didn't appreciate the ending.... well screw them! *sticks tongue out at them for Shabz* 😆 I thought it was beautiful as a tragedy. People need to realize that not everything is always a happily ever after! You showed that so well! LOL - you rock. I'm going to miss you tons! Thanks!

I could picture everything in that last chapter! So well written, all the emotions, the expressions, the physical movements! it was all so good Shabz! *round of applause*

*blushes* Thanks!

You are definately one of the best ff writers on IF! Great job, can't wait for whatever is next!

Love you! *hug*
I'll tell you what's next. School. 🤣 Thanks and lots of love! *hugs*

Originally posted by: jamune

OMG dat was just touching, Ash cant beelive her, love Rajveer what a brother he actually warned his brother, but meher now she is gone , ur such a talented writer

Originally posted by: Garima93

*Sigh* Shabzie....I knew you'd do this.... My spot! 😛

*Edit*

Yeah, so I already kinda knew you were gonna make it tragic, cuz I'm psychic like that 😎 😆 But honestly, even though it was tragic, and sad, I still liked it! Cuz you write tragic stories SO well! Like seriously, I adore them! Because of you I've started having soft spots for tragic FF's/One shots! (Does that make sense?) 😆
Yeah, everyone kind of expected it. 😆 Thanks so much and YAY I'm glad!
The beginning was kinda happy-ish, cuz for a moment Meher forgot about everything and ran straight to Preet and hugged him for dear life! But then She got all angry and ran away! I felt SO extremely bad for both of them! Bechare! Because of one misunderstanding they had to be seperated! 😭 I hope in the next Janam they meet again and live happily ever after! 😛 😆
That's what I was trying ot show, that they still love each other but their trust was broken. In a weird kind of way. 😆 Why next janam? Maybe sooner than that? 😆
Oh yeah, btw. I DESPISE ASH! *death glare* 😡 But the ending was FAB Shabo! LOVED IT! Congratz on finishing this FF! Cant wait till next summer for your new FF! (Btw, are u gonna write one next year?) Till then ttfn! 😳
LOL - she was not even in this part. :) Thanks so much! Ummm maybe I will. I was going to write a couple more shots before I became inactive for school but now I'm double thinking that. :)
Luv,
Garmzz 😳 😃