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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

hi sri i liked your ff it is good keep it up

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

OMG ITS AWESOME PLEASE CONTINUE SOON AND PLEASE MEET PREM AND HEER IN THE NEXT UPDATE PM WHEN U UPDATE THZ

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 5

Heer comes to the friends..

And mahi comes there..

And both they hug

And heer rangs to dadu

Dadu:heer beta tumhara phone ke intezar kar rah hoonkaise likha tha paper toh select ho jayege na

Heer:ha dadu paper bahut achha tha..aur mere manzil bahut kareeb hai..

Dadu.sab kuch teek hai dadu

And mahi also talks to dadu..

Ap tension mat le dadu mein heer ka khayal rakhloongi naa..

And she puts on phone.

And dadu shares the information with all..and all feels very happy..

Then balraaj looks furious..

Where damini comes to him.

Damini:kya baat hai aap itne parishaan kyon ho rahe hai,,,,,,

Balraaj:mana heer achiee padthi hai.aur who select bhi hojayegelekin agee kya hai.

Usse itne door bejna aur uske bina hum kaise jeelenge

Damini:balraaj ..aap kyon parishaan ho jate hai.kya hamare bade hoon kya ismein hamara khushi nahi hota haibachoon ki kamayabi mein hi hamari khusiyan hai naaur waise bhi hey koi asaan baat nahi ha na..

And then rajbeer comes to them.

Rajbeer:bauji maa teek kaha rahi ha waise bhi mein hoon na jaroorat pade par mein chale jaaungi heer ki saath..aur waise mahi hai na uske saath

Rani also console balraaj and damini..

Meantime mahi and heer are coming out of the college and suddenly there is raining..

And they both goes to the rain

and starts singing.the song,

Naa re naa re, Naa re naa re
Naa re naa re, Naa re naa re
Barso re. Megha megha barso re
Megha megha barso re, Megha barso
Meethaa hai, kosaa hai, Baarish ka bosa hai
Kosa hai, kosa hai, Baarishon ka bosa hai
Jal jal jal jal jal jal jal thal jal thal
Chal chal behta chal

Geeli geeli geeli ha. Ha ha ha ha
Geeli geeli maati, geeli maati ke
Chal gharonde banyaange re
Hari bhari ambi, ambi ki daali
Mil ke jhoole jhulaayange re oh
Dhan baiju gaj ne. Hal jote sabne
Bailon ki ghanti baji. Aur taal lage bharne
Re tair ke chali main toh paar chali
Re tair ke chali main toh paar chali

Paar waale parle kinaar chali re megha
Naa re naa re, Naa re naa re
Naa re naa re, Naa re naa re
Tu tu turu, tu tu turu, tu tu turu

Kaali kaali raaten, kali raaton mein
Yeh badarvaa baras jaayega
Gali gali mujh ko, megha doondegaa
Aur garaj ke palat jaayega

Ghar aangan angina, aur paani ka jharna
Bhol na jaana mujhe, poochenge varna
Re beh ke chali, main to beh ke chali
Re beh ke chali, main to beh ke chali
Re megha

Naa re naa re, Naa re naa re
Naa re naa re, Naa re naa re

And they moves from there

Mahi:heer tum bhi na baris ko dekh the pata nahi kya ho jate hai tuje.beekhithihoo..

Heer:pata hai mahi.muje barish bahut acchee lagte hai..

And she snuzees

Then mahi replies aur isse showing her snuzees

Both laugh.

Then Aryan is working over his laptopprem comes in..

Aryan:are prem kya baat hai..itne parishaan kyon hoo,

Prem:who baat hai ..ki muje kuch kaam hai kal.uskeliye out of station jana padega..

Who bahut jaroori kaam hai .

Aryan:is mein prob kya hai.chale jana..

Prem:lekin papa chahtein hai mein unki saath kisi kaam se jayoomein na papa ko mana kar sakta hoon..aur kaam regarding future kais liye

Aryan:donot worry..ek kaam karte hai mein bhi kuch kaam se kal bahar jana haitum mere saath ajana do no kaam saath mein kar lengi.

Prem:par jyada waqt lagenge toh..

Aryan:uski tension tum chod do.

At the same timeheer gets a call from a place

On listening to that heer gets furious,,,,,

Mahi comes to her.

Kya baat hai heer parishaan lag rahi hoo

Aa mahi eisa ki.joo exam ki result aye hai

Use ke baat hame agle 2 more rounds hai

Aur uske liye hame kahi aur jaane pade ga.

Aur kaise jayege bahut waqt lage gapata nahikya karoon..

Mahi:koi baat nahi heer soch lete hai

Aur she suddenly flashe srajbeer bhaiyya

We know he always help us

And she calls to him and come back and says

We are moving today' s evening.

And pack the luggage lets us go

But heer u didn't mention where we are going.

At the same time Aryan also asks where we are going..

Heer and prem both replies at the same time

Gurgoun.

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Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

hai

like the post

pl s send comments

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Awesome part continue soon PM me whenu update

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Awesome update continue soon and PM me when u do update

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

love it continue asap Pm me when u update

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Part 6

Gorgon

Preet and salil jumps

Preet:Wow AB aur PB jaa rahe hau

Aur soham bhaiyya bhi nahi hay.

Toh preet looks at salil

And salil wrinks at him..

They both move to the prem bhaiyya 's room

Preet:prem bhaiyyamy sweet cute bro

Prem:folding his sleev..seeing at preet..

Kya baat hai subha subha yeha kya hai

Preet:bhai.hame app se kuch kehna hai bhai.

(as sashikapoor's style)..

prem:kya baat hai bahut filmy..ho rahe hoo.salil bhi aye hai kuch toh gadbad hai.

Preet:who bhai hum apke saath gurgon jaane chahte hey

Prem:looks at him gurgonkyon..aise kya baat hai

Preet:to salil;agar hum prem bhai ko nahi pataenge toh hum nahi jasakte kahani to banne padenge

Bhai baat yehnki mere doost ki mousigi ki tabiat karaab hai who bahut parishaan mein hai ham e madad karne chahei..

Both sees at prem

Prem is convinced and he agrees for this..

Salil and preet jumps..

Aryan sees this.achaaiii toh yeh baat hai..teek hai mein bhi tumara bhai..hoo.

Prem toh seeda hai par mein nahi..

Dikahti toh hoo mein kya cheez hoon

And prem and aryan comes and take blessings from all..

And Aryan already talked to Mahesh regarding project and he take all the documents..

And about to leave

Preet and salil joins them,

Gayatri stops them

Gayatri:Are tum dono kaha jare hoo ..

Preet:badimaa hum loog toh gurgon jare hai..

Ha ma mere doost ki mousiji ki tabiyat karab hau is liye unne hosla dene ke liye.jararahe hum..

Preeti:looks lovely at them.hay mere chote nawab.kitna khayal hay dosto ki.

And even gouri also supports them,.

All are surprised

Aryan:ha chotimaa kitne khayal hai inne badoon ki..isliye becharee apne college ke youth festival ko bhi chood kar..

Preet and salil:youth festival..

Aryan:ha chotimaa youth festival(wrinking to wards prem)

Where prem is smiling

Salil:angry look.preet youth festivalkuch karooo

Preet:he rings to salil.

Salil:sees the number.and he acts as he wasin the phone.and says what..ok and cuts the phone..

Salil:Actually my friends tickets are cancelled ashe is not going there..so without him there is no point to going over therecomeon preet lets us go for college.

And they both leave for college

And Aryan and prem gets into the car

At that time

Prem:ok bhaiiwhat next.

Aryan:move on

Prem: bhaii there is no report of any youth festival near by and what is this.

Aryan:muje pata hai koi youth festival nahi.

Unne peeche chud wani hai

Prem:kyon

Aryan:are bekar ki tensionyeh dono seede hey nahi.achha kasa business trip to begde denge..

Prem:kyon bhai aap enjoy nahi karengeenjoy.

Are mere bhai kuch sunaawoo

Kya bhaii.

Meantime heer is busy in packing

And both are into the bus,,,,,,,

And meher calls to heer,,,,,,

Heer:ha meher bhoolodidi mein jo list mange hay na use saath mein lana .

Purvi:diid waha exam ke liye jare hai .tere liye shopping karne nahi.miss world.

Meher:very funny purvi tuje padne ..ke alawa kuch aur atta hai kya

Purvi:aur tuje iss chehera pe kuch karne ke alawa kuch aur kaam atta haikya..

Meantime damini takes the phone from the two..

Diid apna khayal raknaaur mahi didi ka bhi.

Damini.beta apana khayal rakhna..bhai ki saath rehana..apna khayal rakhna..ha maa..

Rakhti hoon

Are mama diid se bath karne de na

Are tum dono bhi na ladaai ki bina rahena nahi sakte hai.

Kaise hoga tum logon ka..

Waisa iska solution tere pass hai miss padakoo

Ha yeh..tere chotise demak pe jyada joor mat dalnajis tara mahi didi aur heer diid

Meher:matlab.

Purvi:dekho mahi diid aur heer diid ko eh failsa kiya hai ki who do bhaii ko shaadi karenge,,,,,,

Aur hum do dostoon ki saath kaise hey

Meher:waise koun hogi who dono

Preet and salil says hum hane na.yesa plan banenge ke sab dekh the rahe jayenge,

Prem and Aryan moves into car

And heer and mahi into the bus,,,

Two raste,,,,,,ek manzil.

Do jahaan ..ek safar..

Dekhte hai agee kya hogi.

Agle update mein

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Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Part 7

Prem and Aryan are moving in the car..

Heer is at the window seat where mahi is sleeping at her shoulder

As heer is thinking of her exams.she is nervous

Rajbeer see this

Rajbeer:heer,nervous feel kar rahe hoo.

Heer:ha bhaiyya.bahut jyada

Rajbeer:donot worry kudhpe aur rab be barosa rakhoo

Dekh na jeet tumhare hogi.

By that time Aryan and prem are in car..

Aryan:toh mera lover boy kuch sunawoo

Prem:bhai im not prepared

Aryan:are koi love song

Perm:bhai

Aryan:dekh mujse mat chupaoolets us rock..

And they both starts..

mere sapanon kee raanee, kab aayegee too?

aayee rut masataanee, kab aayegee too?

beetee jaaye jindagaanee, kab aayegee too?

chalee aa, too chalee aa

mean time heer is looking through the window

pyaar kee galiyaa, baagon kee kaliyaa

sab rang raliyaa, poochh rahee hain

geet panaghat pe kis din gaayegee too?

mere sapanon kee raanee, kab aayegee too?

aayee rut masataanee, kab aayegee too?

beetee jaaye jindagaanee, kab aayegee too?

chalee aa, too chalee aa

Aryan sings..

Mahi in meantime wakes and she also sees from the window and they both smiles.

fool see khil ke, paas aa dil ke

door se mil ke chain naa aaye

aaur kab tak muze tadapaayegee too?

mere sapanon kee raanee, kab aayegee too?

aayee rut masataanee, kab aayegee too?

beetee jaaye jindagaanee, kab aayegee too?

chalee aa, too chalee aa

prem and Aryan both sings.

kyaa hain bharosaa, aashik dil kaa

aaur kisee pe ye aa jaaye

aa gayaa to bahot pachhataayegee too

mere sapanon kee raanee, kab aayegee too?

aayee rut masataanee, kab aayegee too?

beetee jaaye jindagaanee, kab aayegee too?

chalee aa, too chalee aa

and heer and mahi reaches the station..

heer steps at the bus station..

she feels some thing strange

as her world is changing.

Winds are blowing.

And she is thinking

In hawa mein eh kaisa ehsaas hai

Where at opposite prem also gets down from the jeep..he also feels the same.

Both

Eisa kyon lagta hai ki hey fiza mujse kuch kehre hai..

Koi anjane se dor muje apne taraf keech rahe hai

Heer.

Yesa pehli baar ho raha hai..

Prem

Yesa kyon hora raha

Aryan comes to prem

Prem hame hotel jana heyyeha nahi rehnahai

Aur waise bhi hum gurgoun aksar ate hai na

Yesa kyon behave kar rahe hoo ki pehle baar are rahe hoo..

Prem:pata nahi bhai..alag sa ehsaas..kuch naya hai..

Aryan:achaa ab hotel chale.

Meantime mahi comes to heer..

Mahi:chale heer .hame pehle hotel chalna haiwaha se fresh hokar hame college jana hey..jaha se tere exam hay.

Rajbeer comes to them chale.

And they goes to the taxi..

And they reaches the hotel..

But the same time Aryan and prem also reaches to the same premises.

And Aryan says to prem tobe at lobin where he sees the formalities

Where rajbeer also tells heer and mahi to stay at lobin..

Mahi excuses for some work

Heer is alone at the lobin

By that time she sees some kids are playing

And prem also seeing this

At that time Aryan accidently bumps mahi

Who gaves him a angrily looks and say idiot

By that time he replies waiter handover him the keys

At that time suddenly one boy falls down..

Before prem reacts he sees heer runs towards the kid holds him.she is turned in opposite direction.

Before prem sees the face. Aryan calls him.and prem moves into the lift

The lift closes

Part ends.

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

hai

pls send comments

due to reasons i can update at alternate days

thank u

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do dil ek jaan (a new FF-prem heer)updated on09/9 - Page 3

And heer rangs to dadu

And they moves from there

Toh preet looks at salil

Rajbeer see this

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