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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

awesome update can't wait till next part Prem and Heer will finally meet!!!! PM ME

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Part 8

Heer comes to the room and finds the room is very untidy.

Where all things are shattered.

Oh no lagta hai mahi phir se gussa haiand mahi is fuming

At the person who is stuked.as the cool drink in his hand accidently fall on her dressat the same time Aryan also fuming on the girl.

Prem trying to console Aryan..and memorized that they should leave immediately other wise he missed his client

At the same time rajbeer comes and says heer to make fast asthey need to go far distance..

And prem and Aryan comes to through the lift..

And other lift heer and mahi with rajbeer comes down.

They both are in opposite directions.

Suddenly winds blow and a waiter bums with heer and her file drops

And the same time suddenly prem files also drops.

And both files at the other direction..

On the hurry and tensed heer picks the other file.

Where prem picks the other one.

Both are unaware of the fact that the files are exchanged..

And they go on different directions.

And heer reached the place..

Prem hugged Aryan.

And reached the office

As he goes inside he bumps with some official.and the cover inside the file falls down..

He goes where the person.sir aap ka cover

He turn s and took the cover ..he sees name on it..

Miss heer singh he read it louder and gives back to the person

The person answers sir,this is the cover fall from ur file..

Then he looks at file

Then he remembers the dashed down and falling on the ground..and he is picking the other file..

Lagta hai ki mein galti see kisi aur ladki ki file lagaii..oh no..

At that time he sees the address.he informsare yeh kiski examination ke details..iske bina toh us ladki ko ander nahi ane dengi..

Meantime heer is praying to god..as the person asked for identificationhe opens the file.but she finds cover is missing..

She is tensed.

Yeh wau guru yeh kya hogaye mere cover.ismein id card haymein kya karoon.

Prem phones to Aryan

Aryan:prem ..tumhara matlab hay ki hum uss ladki koyeha doondkar.use yeh wapas karte hai

Prem:haa..bhai

Aryan:prem.itne acchey mat banooo..tum apne presentation ki doosri copy

Mere laptop se doondkar une present karo,.aur jalde se yeh kaam liptaaooo

Prem:nahi bhaiyaa hamere liye sirf ek project ho sakti hai.

Mein ek aur din mehnat karongepar us insaan ke liye ek sapna ho sakta hai

Agar aap ana chahtei hai to h ana mein kudh usse dondoongi

Aryan:prem mere baat suno..

But prem leaves in anger..

Aryan:chotimaa teek kehte hai..eh ladka kuch jyada hi seedi haikyon ek ladki ki madad karne ke liye apne project ko daaun pe laga raha haiisse mein maa ka haat hai.who bhi yesi hai..

Prem goes from there and he calls taxi

At the time

Aryan comes there

Aap ki car tyar hai lok sevak ji

Prem looks at him

Aryan:oh laad saab baad mein dekh na jee bar ke warna wahi jis keliye hum itne mehnat kar rahe kahideer na hojaye.

And he goes into the car.

At the time heer is very furious as rajbeer and mahi went for some other work..and she is stuked between she cannot go out nor go inside

Tears are coming from her ears.

By that time damini finds some sense..

She comes to bauji..

Bauji:kya baat hai damini.itne parishaan kyon hopata nahi bauji mere baii ankh pad pad rarahe hai kahi toh kuch gadbad haiheer teekhai ya nahi..yesa lagta haibachii parishaan hai

Bauji:are damini..phikar kyon karte hai

Bachii itne door gaye na is liye parishaan hoo..mata rani sab kuch teek karege.

Heer is crying and she is praying to god

Prem is coming in the car having the envelope in his hand .

Heer is praying the god

Background song

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu Vishnu-mayeti sadbita
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu shakti rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu bhakti rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu matri rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu shanti rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu daya rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu Sraddha rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu lajja rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu chhaya rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu lakshmi rupena samsthita,

Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

Ya devi sarva bhuteshu nidra rupena samsthita,
Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai, Namas tasyai namo namah.

As the song completes

A person comes and calls heer..

Heer sees the person..officer incharge want to meet u..

And she reaches the table sees

The person tumhara naam heer singh hay.

Heer replies yes.

Hey tumhara cover kisi ne de kar gaya hai

Kaha hai ki tum bhool gaye hoo.

Heer is in thinking..

And a letter inside it..

She opens..

Donot think to much and donot worry tofind out the person who had helped first goto ur room and finished ur exam and return back after wards u can find him

Best of luck for ur exam

Stranger.

She suprises but get into the room for her exam

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

@srilu_123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

hai

sorry for delay

pls send comments

thank u

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srilu

@srilu_123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Part 9

Heer comes to the room..and she sees the paper

She finds questions are easy..and she finishes the paper

She comes out..and she sees the devi maa idol

And she thinks ,dadu aur maa hamesha teek kahete hai

Wau guru hamesha madad karte hai

Aur uss bale insaan ka jiski waja se yeh namunkeen munkeen huwa..

Wau guru uski mano kamna poori kare

Prem comes out and he feels happy.

Us ladki ka exam achha se hoga.and he comes the car..

Aryan is very furious,,,,,,,,,,,,

Aryan:oh mere loksavak ji agar apk I lok seva katam hogaye ha kuch bake agar katam hogaye toh chalewaha client apka wait kar raha hay

Prem:client par hamere pass presentation ki cd nahi ya na..

Aryan:who aap jab lok seva mein busy hey na us waqt mein ne apke presentation ki copy download karle ab ap presentation par dyan de.

Prem:bhai.

He hugs Aryan..

Aryan:ab bas toh jyada emotional mat hona aur chalewarne phir se client bhag jayege.

Prem:aur mere bhai usee bhagne nahi dega..

And they both reaches the office.

In meantime heer comes out and she sees the file..opens it and reads the name on it

Prem khanna

And she comes out

And she finds some group dancers are singing something

Dil hai.to deta hai

Is jagah se us jagah

Jinne milna hai usko mila deti hai.

Ye rab ki duwa hai

Ishq mein fanaa ho jate hai..

Tuje kya pata tere haato mein kiski ki amanat nahi..

Bal ki kisiki zindagi..hai

Jo naam tere jabaan pe haywahi naam bahut jald tere zindagi banege.

At that time mahi comes there

And they both reach the hotel

Are mahi didi bhayya kaha hay.

Mahi:unoo ne kaha tha ki unne ekm jaroori kaam hai aur who jaldi hame hotel mein milenge

Heer reaches the room

Mahi finds her disturbed..

And heer remembers the lift incident where files are exchanged

That means the person resides in same hotel..she smiles unknowingly

Mahi in meantime repeatedly calling hee r but heer is in he rworld..

Mahi:heer kab se bhula rahi hoon kaha ko gaye hoo..aur eh kya hai

Sab kuch teek hai na.tuje kya huwa hai and she takes the file

And finds some other in it,,,,,,,,,and she screams heer hey tumahara file nahi hay.toh phir tera file kaha hai.aur tune exam kaise diya.

Heer explains everything..and heer says lets us go.

Mahi:lets us go where

Heer:come on didithe person is residing in same hotel.

Mahi:dekh tere file mein sirf Xerox copies kyonki orginals sab kuch room mein haiaur bachii kuchi hay who rehne de..aur is file ko lotana ki

Baat is pe jo naam hay na ..hotel receptionis t mein wapas kar ke ayenge.

Who bhi de degi..

Heer:mahi didi who teek nahi rahege ..he is very nice personhe came back to return,,and due to him I had fulfilled my exam and due to me he must have lost his presentation.even though he prioritized my exam first very few people think like that ..

If u r not coming then I will go alone

And she moves from there.

At that time oh bhartiya lok sevaka muje bhi apne saath le chal

At the time prem and Aryan reaches the hotel prem goes to reception

Aryan:yeh prem waha kaha jaae rahe hobhai jis ladki ka file haiu na who isse hotel mein rehtre haiis liye who reception ko de kar aja ungaaap jayee room mein

At tbat time Aryan goes in different direction,,,,,,,,,as heer ahead to the reception.

Prem also walks to the reciption,.

And mahi find s lift is not working and so Aryan

By that time suddenly mahi slips and falls on Aryan who is coming in the opposite direction..

And they both fall on the ground..

And at the time prem and heer reaches the reception..

And they prem asks for heer singh

Where heer asks for prem khanna..

Reception sees both..

And both face one another

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

@srilu_123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hai

pls send comments

it encourages me

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srilu

@srilu_123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Part 10

At that time winds blow and lights go off.

And heer looks at the person straight to him.

And prem looks at the girl in front of him..

It is not just a shadow

It is his life..

It is his destiny

And he is her soul.

And her life completes with him

Their first meeting may be not full

But they two complete their life soon

They are ahead to their destinations..

Thoughts are going on where they come back as receiption calls them

Sir this is your file madam had given..

And madam this is your file left with sir

They exhange the files and they looks and moves in different directions.

At that time they both listen the screams..

And heer and prem moves towards it

At that time lights come back

Mahi finds she is top of Aryan

And Aryan also

Until they cannot move as lights go on

Mahi gives a disguising look at him

And he give a adher look.

Both lift up.

And Aryan says sorry..

Mahi whoos on him.

She goes on

Mahi:hello what means sorry.tum ne jaan booj kar yeh sab kuch kiya..

Aryan:jaan boojkar.tumhara kya matlab hai.ki mein yeh sab kuch planning jante hai mein kaun hoon

Mahi:tum jo koi hai muje kya.dekh agar tumsorry bhi bholo na muje koi farak nahi padta..

Aryan:what Aryan or sorry.neverlook at ur face..never thinkof dreams.also

They are arguing like anything.

Meantime prem calls Aryan where heer calls mahi..

Mahi:I will see u

Aryan:Ok where and when iam ready for that..U want I will give my album.

Mahi:Shut up ..

Aryan:First u shirt up

Mahi:sarpera

Aryan:bartemeez ladki.

Mahi:samajatha kya apni apkoand heer comes to mahi.

Heer:Mahi didi kis par gussa kar rahi hoo.

Aur yeh kya huwa.

Mahi:mere chodo tum usee mila kya.thanks bola kya,.

Heer:nahi .lights off.uski chehra dekh na paya aur thanks bhi na..

Mahi:muje us ladke ko sabat sikana chaheiya

At the time prem comes to Aryan

Aryan:is ladki ko nahi chodungasamajthe kya hai apne apko.bartmeez,kamadi ladki.

Prem:kya baat hai bhai .kis par itna gussa kar raha hookaun hai who.jis ne mere bhaiki saath panga liya.

Heer also thinking the same kaun hai who jo mere behen ki saath pange liya..

And both are thinking..

At the night winds blow on..

And prem goes to the window

He looks at the moon..

Kya he yeh ehsaas hai..

Jo muje itna acchaa lagta hai

He remembers the shadow of heer.

Kyon us ladki ko dekh ne ke liye bechainne hoon.

And heer also thinking ..

Kyon uske khayal muje itna

Prem sings

At the same time heer listens as he came out the room for walk.

As she also came out..

She hears the guitar music

And she follows it..

Where prem is sitting near the swimming pool

Khamosh Raat
Sehmi Hawaa
Tanha Tanha Dil Apna
Tanha Tanha Dil Apna
Aur Door Kahin, Roshan Hua Ek Chehra
Ek Chehra, Ek Chehra
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna
Khamosh Raat
Sehmi Hawaa
Tanha Tanha Dil Apna
Tanha Tanha Dil Apna
Aur Door Kahin, Roshan Hua Ek Chehraa
Ek Chehraa, Ek Chehraa
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna

Jhuki Jhuki Palkein Jab Uthi
Nainon Mein Diye Madham Madham
Adh Khule Hothon Se Hansee
Jhaank Rahi Madham Madham
Kaise Kahan Phir Ho Gayee
Uski Charee Madham Madham
Pal Pal Uthti Hasratein
Hone Lagi Madham Madham
Aur Door Kahin, Roshan Hua Ek Chehraa
Ek Chehraa, Ek Chehraa

Sooraj Tha Pe Noor Sa
Uski Tanak Madham Madham
Chaand Bhi Sa Bujha Bujha
Taare Bhi The Madham Madham
Jugnu Dilasa Dene Lagey
Nanhi Si Jaan Madham Madham
Shamaa Bhi Thak Haar Ke
Hone Lagee Madham Madham

Aur Door Kahin, Roshan Hua Ek Chehraa
Ek Chehraa, Ek Chehraa...
Jeene Ka Tha Hum Mein Dam
Par Nahin Tha Koi Humdam
Khushiyoon Ki Thi Justajoo
Mil Rahe Thay Bas Gham Hi Gham
Shuru Mein Is Duniya Ke Bhi
Khamoshi Thi Aur Ek Thay Hum
Rahein Sabhi Thi Sooni Sooni
Uth Rahe Thay Kadam Tham Tham
Aur Door Kahin, Roshan Hua Ek Chehraa
Ek Chehraa, Ek Chehraa
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna

Khamosh Raat
Sehmi Hawaa
Tanha Tanha Dil Apna
Tanha Tanha Dil Apna
Aur Door Kahin, Roshan Hua Ek Chehraa
Ek Chehraa, Ek Chehraa
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna
Ye Sach Hai Ya Sapna

Heer comes to him

She sees from the backside.

She steps ahead to call him.but he gets a call from Aryan..

Aryan:prem kaha ho tum

Prem:who bhaimuje neend nahi ara raha hai

Is liye mein yeha.

Aryan:teek hai ab wapas ajoo.

And mahi calls heer

Heer goes to opposite direction

And prem goes in different directions..

And the winds blow..

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Part 11

Mahi:Heer kaha rahe gayeti tum tum apne bed pe nahi hoo isliye bahut parishaan hogaye mein

Kya baat hay heer……….

Heer:mein toh walk karne ke liye gayeethi,……waha mein ne gitar ki music suna aur who gana ………..kitna acchaa gana tha…isliye mein…………

Mahi:are yeh hamara sehar nayee hai aur rajbeer bhai ne kaha hay ki unki kaam kis I bhi wajah se do din aur post pone ho gaye hi hey is liye aur do din hame yeha rahana hoga……….

Prem and Aryan:

Aryan:do aur din n oh no prem muj se nahi hoga…..

Prem:kya karoon bhai.who do aur din maang raha ra hay…….uski apne koi problem……

Aryan:toh uska problem hay hum kya kareen……….

Ok sleep……….

Next morning………

Heer wakes up and finds mahi is not there …..

Hey mahi kaha gaye…………..

Pata nahi……..

At that time mahi again bumps with Aryan…at the swimming pool…..

Aryan:yeh ladki tujko bagwaan aakh nahi diya kya………

Mahi:ha diya hai par tera chehra dekh ne ki baad patak gaya……

Aryan:tum insaan nahi chadail hoo….

Mahi:haa tere family ka realation bhi unki saath hay na……..

Aryan:dekho muje gussa mat dilana warna tere tange thodunga…….

Mahi:ha mein kya cheez hoo tuje bataunga………

At that time prem is looking for Aryan

Where as heer is for mahi…….

And a waiter comes to prem

Prem:hey look did u see my brother……tall, handsome……..

Heer inquiring some other boy……..

Did u see girl..curly hair………..fair………

And they see the crowd..and prem overhears Aryan's voice

And says are yeh to bhai ki awaaz hay….

Aur heer listens mahi 's voice……..

Oh no phir se……..

And they both run in different directions to stop them

Heer stops mahi and execuses for Aryan…………

And he replies to heer

Are tum iske behen ho samaj jayoo usee kisi ki saath kaise behave karna hay……

Tere too mein……..

At that time prem is trying to console mahi…..

Im really sorry to my bro……..

Yeh samajoo apne bhai ko ladkyon ki saath kaise bath karne chaiyee……….

And they take them both……

And Aryan,tum muje kyon rokha mein uska death thodonga..aur hum abhi is waqt nikalrahe hay………

And he starts packing………

Oh nokiase rokhoo bhai…….ko……

And he says teekh hai….

Muje laga tha ki kam se kam aap shaam ki party tak rukh jaata teek hai hum chale jayenge……..

Party what……….

Ha who bhi mask wala party…………new people,strangers……………kya pata apko apki…who wale miljye………..teek hay mein bhi apna packing karloonga…….

Are prem kya baat hai tu har bath itna serious kyon leta hai mera bhai……………

Are itne door aye toh enjoy karlenge ismein kya…..mein apne bhai ko chod ke kabhi ja sakta hoon kya…..

Prem smiles for his plan…………..

And heer screams party……

No didi….apko pata hay na muje beed se kitne darr lag tha hay…..aur who bhi ajnabi ke saath

Aaj to bhaiyya bhi nayee hay

Are uis liye hey mokha……….

Pata hai ek ajeeb ehsaas…………kya pata hamara manzil yeha kahi hamara intezar kar raha hoga…….

Manzil……………mahi tum bahut filmy ho rahe hoo………lekin

Oh aaj kal ki pavirit bharti nari……..yeha apke raksha karne ke liye tere yeh jhansi ki laxmi yeh na kya too apni mahi ke liye ek party tak attend nahi kar sakti hay kya…..

Jyada maska marne ke jarorat nahi hay………..

Ab batauu kya dress pehenge party mein…..

Who too dress code hay…..aur mein ne dress tayarr bhi kar lee hai………………..

Heer:is ka matlab tum jaante hoo ki mein mann ne wali hoon……

Mahi:mein apne bholi bhali see heer ko bajpan see jantee hoo na……..

And she smiles at heer…….

And prem looks at Aryan…….

The screen splits into parts………..

And the title

Rab ne banadi jodi…………..

The four faces………..

Aryan………………prem………mahi………………heer………………

Part ends