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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 12

Aryan is get ready for the party'''..

Where he looks for prem''

Prem comes to the room''

Aryan turns back''.

Aryan:wah mere bhai kitna handsome lag raha hay to''..

Prem:bhai aap bhi kuch kum nahi hoo''.

And the dress code is black and white'''

Where both are at hot black'''

Dazzling''looking tremendous''.

Where mahi is very busy In dressing,,,,,,

She is gorgeous in her white outfit'''

And she turns back to find heer ''''

She also very pretty and beautifull''

Mahi:look on heer aaj sab ki chutti tu jaroor karegi''

Heer:mahi didi''..muje bahut tension ho rahe hay''

Mahi:hay bagwaan'''..jaldi se iskeliye yesa insaan bejoo jo iska darr hamesha hamesha ke liye bage de wala''''.

And at the time some waiters'''.look some people''

They become furious one of them asks ''what 'swrong''what happened''..

And even the manager gets furious'''

Waiter: Sir yeh log kataranak hay,,,,,,,upar se minister saab ke pechchaan wale hay.,

Agar party mein kuch gadbad na ho jaya''..

And prem and Aryan comes to the party'..

Where heer and mahi''also comes down'

Meantime prem and Aryan'

Aryan:are prem tu bataoo tuje kaise ladki chaheiye''''..

Prem:bhai chod na'

Aryan:are yaisekaise chod de'''.are ho sakta hai tere mulaqat ussee isee party mein ho jaye''..

Prem:bhai aap bhi na''.

Aryan:are mat sharmavoo'..bata oo muje''.

Prem:beed mein bhi alag yeh who'''..sab ki chehroo mein alag hay uski chehra'''..uski har andaaz nilari hay''.itne pyarii ankheen hay ki mein usee mein dhoob jay'.bhai uss ladki ko dekh ne ki baad dil se ek awaaz ,,,,,,,,,tab

Muje ehkeenho jayaga k wahi yeh''.

Aryan:aur who ladki kaha hay'''.

At that time heer and mahi coming in other lift''.

Prem:aur aap bhai.who ladkijiski saath apka jagada huwa'

Aryan:naam mat lo uss nadchida ka'''.

Prem:kyon bhai ladki acchii hay'''''.aur khoobsoorat bhi hay''toh problem kya ha'..

Aryan:ha prem toh teek kaha raha hay''

Uski shakal, roop sab kuch teek hay..

Bagwaan usee dimak dena bhool gaye,,,,,,,,,aur saath saath teej mirchi ka jubaan diya hay''ab mere mood karab karne ke liye kyon uska naam liya hay,'chalo andar''

Heer and mahi also enters into the room'''

Aryan and prem also enters ''

On seeing them girls shocked'look at the handsome guys'..

One is a dashing rock star then the other is hotty choclate'let us go on '''and they move to them''

Where heer nervous''..and mahi is entirely enjoying the party''..

She is looking around''

All are at the floor''

The weird boys look at mahi and heer,,,,,,,,,

Look on one is hotty sexy red wine and other is beauty full white flower''''..let us get them'..

No not at this time let us wait for the mask party to begin''.

At that time the announcer..starts'.

Yeh welcome the hotty sexy ,gorgerous girls with very cool, crazy boys'welcome to the wonderfull evening ''here we ha d some thing different from all''..

We always dance.and all.no fun'.

This is a new technic to find who is made for whom''.let us see what destiny decide for us'.

Here there are numbers on the board'.and theya re numbers behind the mask''..

The number which displayed on the board'.should unite the number with the mask'''and the person get the same unique number will become couple''..and they are few numbers which are said to be very lucky'the people who will get the numbers will be our lucky couples of the evening they had heavy complementary packages from our hotels'.

And one more thing in order to avoid problem they had a rule that the person who got the number should wear the mask and comes to the dance''

And one more thing the person who are the best one will be decided by the flash light where it gives the answers'''so get ready''

And few numbers are announced and some people are started'''.at that timeall are supplied with the masks'''and after sometime the number 1 is announced and to the surprise unknowingly Aryan and mahi get s the numbers'and they

Come sto the dance floor wearing the masks'..where 6 number to the other couple..and 9 for prem and heer'''

And they all come to the dance floor''''

By that time the weird fellows comes in between the dance floor and they starts '.

Circles heer and mahi''.

Where prem see s this and he drags towards himself and puts hands over her like a protective sheld''''

Where one person dashes mahi and she again falls on Aryan where Aryan holds her'..

The winds flow ''''..

And they are paired'''''

Heer and prem is looking at each other''

Where as mahi and Aryan''''..

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hai
8 th june is my birthday so iam busy in it
cannot update sorry

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Part 13

Eye locking session continues'''

And the announcer '''.

Starts:

Ok guys the waitingis over'..the people who are paired now should dance and some are already on dance floor'''and the numbers are displayed''..at the board''.

1 is mahi and Aryan

3 is some couple

and 9 is prem and heer''.

Pls welcome all to the dance floor as the songs are going to begin''..

And the first song is

Winds blow'''..

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai
nazrein bichade
pehre laga de
dil pe
par dil kisiki na maane
Kaaton pe chalke
sholon mein jalke
roke
milke rahenge deewane
o o o
chahat ki lau to
aandhi mein bhi zilmilaye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
ye mulaqatein
yeh teri ankhein
ek pal na main bhool pau
kitni mohabbat
hai kitni chahat
tumse
kaise bhala main bataoo
Acha lage jo
toh samne muskuraye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai - 5
o rama ha ha haha ho ho hoho

And the next song is

(dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor keghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke) - 2
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein loho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halkehonth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2
aa nind ka sauda karein,
ik khwaab de,
ik khwaab leik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai,
ik chaand ke takiye taleinkitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halkehonth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2
umarein lagi kehate huve, do labj the ik baat thiwoh ik din sau saal ka,
sau saal ki woh raat thikaisa lage jo chup chaap dono,
ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaayein
bol bol na halke halke,
bol na halke halkehonth se
halke halkeo
dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor keo ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor kesharm
aa gayi toh aaghosh mein loho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke,
bol na halke halkehonth se halke halke,
bol na halke) ' 2
aisa lag tha hay ki do jahan ek saath hoo'.
And they are lost in the floor''.Heer and prem ,,,,,,,,,so Aryan and mahi'''..Heer felt strange as she suddenly she feels secure as she is In safe hands''.As she knew she is with a stranger''but the stranger feeling is not coming to her''as he is so close to her'''..Even prem also in the same situation''as he never dance that much time with any one''.But strange thing he is enjoying the moment'''
Na Hai Yeh Pana,
Na Khona Hi HaiTera Na Hona Jane,
Kyun Hona Hi HaiTum Se Hi Din Hota Hai,
Surmaiye Shaam Aati,
Tumse Hi,
Tumse HiHar Ghadi Saans Aati Hai,
Zindagi Kehlati Hai,
Tumse Hi,
Tumse HiNa Hai Yeh Pana,
Na Khona Hi HaiTera Na Hona Jane,
Kyun Hona Hi Hai
Aankhon Mein Ankhein Teri,
Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri
Mera Na Mujhmein Kuch Raha,
Hua KyaBaaton Mein Baatein Teri,
Raatein Saugatein
TeriKyun Tera Sab
Yeh Ho Gaya,
Hua KyaMain Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon,
Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon,
Tumse Hi,
Tumse HiShoor Mein Khamoshi Hai,
Thodi Si Behoshi Hai,
Tum Se Hi,
Tum Se Hi Aadha Sa Wada Kabhi,
Aadhe Se Jayada KabhiJee Chaahe Kar Lu Is Tarah Wafa KaChhode
Na Chhoote Kabhi,
Tode Na Tute KabhiJo Dhaga Tumse Jud Gaya Wafa KaMain Tera Sarmaya Hoon,
Jo Main Ban Paya Hoon,
Tumse Hi,
Tumse Hi
Raaste Mil Jaate Hai, Manzile Mil Jaati Hai, Tumse Hi,
Tumse HiNa Hai Yeh Paana,
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jaane Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Aryan and mahi also in the same mood'.

The person announces the results'..

And the winners are pair with number 1 .,

And pair with number 3 and the pair with number 9'''..

Here we have the surprise''''

Our analyzers''''.reports'.

Saying that the people with number one

Bothare strong, captivated''.equal strengths''.even though their relationship is sipper''there will be sweetness in it make them united''..they accept their mistakes easily'

And all claps''..

The second on e is number 3 ar enot that much capable''..and their relationship isok'..

And the winners ar enumber 9''..most compatable pair oftoday's evening'.

Number 9'''the total symbol of love and they are made for each other''

Their nature,mentality,attention,attraction'..all are tremendous and extraoridinary and even their pair from heaven''''..andthey are rab de banadi jodi of the evening pls welcome

The pair no 9''..

Prem and heer suprises on to all the words''.

All are clapping '..

Prem asks heer's hand

And she gives '''

Mahi feels very happy'

As they are moving'..

One questions in their mind

Can I see her for one time

At the sametime can I see him for one time

And so with Aryan and mahi'''.

And they reaches the place''.

Prem:yeh pal yehi sama jaaye'..eh ehsaas muje bahut accha lag raha hay''.

Dil mein ek ajeeb kushi hay''''.

Yesa lagtah mein uski saath hoon'..

Jiska muje intezaar''..hay'.

Wahi ehsaas kya hay uski dil mein''.

Mere dil kyon nahi maan raha hay ki who ek ajanabhi hay''.kya yehi who insaan hay jo mere liye sach mein rab ne banaya'''.

And they reach the stage and they receive the award'''..

Heer hugs mahi'..

Aryan also hugs prem''..

As they both are above to take the masks''.

Heer goes to the refresh room '''..

The strangers see this and he comes from the backside to catch the heer

Heer finds someone had touched her'..

She screams suddenly'..

And the person close her mouth and takes her to the corner'.

Heer screams and close her eyes of fear..

The person is above to touch her''.

He is stopped by a person'''.

The person tries harder and he gets a blow'

And second turn he gets another blow'''

And he falls''''

He turns his head''.

He is gone you can come out'''.

And heer is still in the dark room'.

Prem takes his coat gives to her''.

She wores and come out''''

Where mahi also worried''''.

She is searching of heer'''

By that time the person wakes up

And he looks weirdly at prem'''.and he says this is going to be very bad to you mr choclate hero'''.

Part ends'''..

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

hai
sorry for delay
pls send comments

thank u

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Part 14

Heer is so scared'..

But suddenly he sees a person hitting prem

She screams but he is busy in fighting with the other person

And suddenly he aims at prem from the back

Heer sees and she comes between the person and prem

And the rod hits her'..

She falls'.

At that time mahi comes there sees that and she screams

Heer,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Prem turns round and catches her''.and she falls in his hands'''

Prem looks at her''''

Her beautifull face, lovely eyes'''heer also sees him'..

He is immensed in her eyes''''

She also looks 'but close her eyes''''.

Prem is completely losted'''''.

His eyes turns to pain'''

He feels as some of his part is been taken away from him'.

All are looking at them'.mahi is completely shocked'..

At that one of the person comes to hit prem again''''

This time one strong hand stops him''

The person turns to find Aryan who is folding his sleeves''''he gives a blow to first person''''..

And the second one '..

No one cannot stop him''..and he Is like a huge strom'''.and they are fall.so pain.

And Aryan'.are beating up harder''.blow after blow..

Aryan:how dare to touch my brother'..

At that time manager comes with his men and they take them away''..

And prem is still seeing at heer'..

Mahi comes to him..

And they rushes to the hospital''..

Prem is still holding her hand'

He is so worried''''

Aryan come sto prem

Aryan:prem:;;;;kaha chala gaya tha ''.main tuje dhood ke thak gaya hoon.yeh sab kyas hay''.

And prem explains ..

Prem:bhai.heer waha se chale gaye.lekin uski scaff mere saath rehagaye thi.main use loutane ke liye gaya tho.kuch log usee parishaan kar rahe the'''..is liye mein ne .unne rok n a uar beech mein heer agayee''aur usee lag gaye'..

Mahi:heer,,,,,,,,kya huwa yeh tuje.ab mein kya karoon'''..

Aryan sees mahi''''he is confused''

He comes to her'..

Mahi:sab mere galti hay.kya kareen'..bhayya bhi sheher se bahar gaye'.ab mein kya karoon'..and she is crying'..

Aryan comes to her..

Aryan:I think u love ur sister a lot.but donot worry ''''she will get well soon'''.and donot worry jab tak tumara bhayya hum yehi rahagayenge.,,,,

Aryan looks at prem'''

Prem is still seeing at moon and also to the room'''

Kya hey hay''.yesa kyon lagtha hay..

Ki chot muje lagee''..dard mere dil ko kyon ho rahe hay'..

Kyon is ke har ghum mein leluuu'yesa lagtha hay

Is ke liye duniya chod ne ko dil karthe hay..

Is ke liye is duniyas e ladnana ko chahtein hay'..

Chahtein mein duniya bhula na chahetin hoon.

He sees devi maa s idol'..

Pls maa'''..chot usee lagee hay ''

Par dard muje hora hay''

Gayal mere dil ho gaye hay''.

Maa teek karo usee''

And at the time some nurse comes with papers.

Mahi is so scared'..

Where prem sighs the papers''''..

And the nurse asks for particulars.he informs that they are family friends''''

Prem wakes up'.

He is at couch '.

He sees mahi who is sleeping''. Prem goes to the room'''Aryan is still at the couch''

He sees heer''

Winds blowing'''.

Hair locks on her face''''

She is very pretty at her white outfit''''

He smiles ''..

He goes near to her'

He goes to the window'he sees moon'

Mein samjatha tha ki toh hi sab se khubsoorat cheez hay is duniya mein..par chand ji eh galat fame apne dil se nikalee dijaye'''kyon ki yeha jo bed pe hay na apse bhi khubsoorat hay'''

Aur uski samane aap kuch bhi nahi''..

Lagtha hay premji''..ap ne tho is ladki ki izzat bacheee''par badle mein aap ne sab kuch haar gaya hay''''''aurwho tho sab se keemeeti cheez'..aur who hay mr prem khanna ki dil'''''

And Aryan wakes up and finds mahi is sleeping'.

And he sees winds are blowing'''..

He sees mahi is sleeping and shivering''''..

He goes to her .and puts his coat over her''..

Aryan:yeh itna bahadur dikahana hay ki koshish karte hay''shayad apne behen se bahut pyarr karthe hay''.dil ki boora nahi hay'''''.

Prem sees this..

Prem:jaanta hoon bhai'''aapm bilkul nariyal jaise hay..bahar se saqt but andar se bahut komal'''..lekin bhai aap bhi boora nahi hay'.

And he goes from there'''''

Heer opens eyes'..

She finds mahi''''''

Mahi comes and hug both'..

And nurse comes to the room'..

Nurse:hai'. Heer ''..u both girls very lucky having such a wonderfull life partners'''

Heer and mahi both are shocked'..

They say life partners''

Nurse:yes//////////they taken very good care of both'''..the two are very cute'.

Heer and mahilook each other faces..at that time prem and Aryan steps in'.

And they see both of them'''''with a huge surprise'..

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

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srilu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Part 15

Both heer and mahi suprises

Four expressions quite embrassed''''

Prem:I think nurse misunderstood us

Im sorry'''..

Later on heer sees prem

Prem looks at heer'.

Prem:sorry, I think now atleast we should be introduced to each other

Hai im prem khanna and he is my brother 'Mr Aryan khanna

Heer:hai im heer singh''.and she is my sister mahi singh''''

And they both once again see to each other'.

Prem:kitna haseen chehra hay,,,,,,,,,,dekin toh bhi dil nahi bartha hay'''.

Rab ne bahut phurusat se banaya hay,,,,,,,,,,ek haseen shayar ke kwaab jaise''.

Jitne in ankhoon ko dekhoo dobone ko dil kartha hay,,,,,,,,

Heer:kaun hay yeh ajnabhi bhi apna jaisa lagtha hay

And she remembers the incident''.

Meher:didi muje pata hay'''muje kisee shadi karne hay'''.

Purvi:ha jisse pe kar lena par dekha us ki demak ki screw jaroor loose hoga'

Meher:ha to bada mechanic hay,,,,,,,,teek karlege'''..

Mahi come s'are bas karo tum dono'..

Abhi simran didi ki shaadi huyee hay

Iske baad mera number phir heer ka number

Uske baad ap logon ka number.,,

Aur mehe r toh shaadi ke bare main baad mein sochelena pehle padaii ke barameinsochoo''.warna hostel bechane padegi tujko'''.purvi smiles

Are oh ensteen ki bachee.,toh bhi kabikabhi kaam kar diya karo''.kal; college ke kapade kya tere ..liye tere pati nikalega kya'

Is ladkiyaa bhi na''..naak pe daam laga ke rakhe hay

Are heer yeha kya kar rahi hay..

Toh bhi in loogon ki tarah apne pati ke bareemain soch rahi hi kya''..

Heer:mahi di hame kaisa pata chalti hay

Wahi hamere liye bana hay'''.eh hu m baat kaise pata chale''.

Mahi:waise bhi yeh baat mere dimag pe bhi.nahi ayaa'.chalo maa se poochlete hay'.

At that time damini is at thedoor'..

She sees both of them''..

Damini:,mein bataungi''.joh insaan hamare liye bana hena usse dekh ne ke pehle nazar pe apna dil gawayee degee''.ki yehi who insaan hay'..

Jo tere liye bana hay''.

Sach mein mama'''.

Prem still staring at heer'.

And heer is thinking''.

Dil ne gawee dena shuru kardiya ''..lagtha hay heer hey who insaan hay jis ke liye too banee hay''

At that time mahi and Aryan also looks at each other''.

Aryan:pehle jagadthi thi'lekin kal raat jab isne apne behen ko is halat mein dekha tho ek dum bachee ban gaye''..asoon ane lage is ki ankhoone se''''.

Mahi also thinks''':yeh bhi kitna ladtha tha muje ..jab apne bhai par aya tho'.isne sab kuch chod kar hamar amadad kiya'agar yeh naa hota kal tho ''''..main kaise akele samaltha''''

Sach mein yeh insaan bahut achha hay,,,,,,,,,,,

At that time inspector comes in'..

He comes to heer''.

Inspector:well miss heer singh.ab aap teekhay na'''..aap un logon ko pechaan sakthe hay'.jin logon ne aap par attack kiya'''..

Heer is totally confused''''

And she is looking at mahi'even she is also worried'''

She calls Aryan.

Aryan:kya baat hay tum ne yeha kyon bulaya''.kuch problem hay kya''.

Mahi:dekhiya hum is seher mein nayee''.aur hum eha ek kaam se ayee hay''.is liye pls hame koi police ke chakkar main nahi padna '''

And Aryan talksto prem''

Prem comes to inspector'

Prem:understands heer condition''..he says

Sir, sorry to interrupt u in the work'.actually these are our family friends'''and yesterday

Heer is still in shock'.and it was so sudden that we are not in a position to talk regarding this matter''.if heer remembers anything then we shall inform u as early as possible'.

And inspector takes the leave''..

Prem:lekin bhai yeh inspector'''

Aryan:yeha na apna befakuww manager'''uski kaam hogi'''

Prem:oh no bhai..agar usne mere mama ko aur apka mama ko batadiya tho''''we will on big trouble''.

Aryan:ha prem ek kaam karenge.toh mere mama ko manana aur mein tumara mama ko.

Heer is confused''..

Heer:agar boora na mane tho.eh apke mama ki saath yeh aur aap unke mama ki saath ..baat kuch ajeeb lag rahi hay'''

Prem:who lambi kahani hay'.mein apko jaroor sunungi'lekin pehle dawaai toh khaii hay aap''..

Heer:thanks''..

Prem:thanks'..muje aap ko batana chahey'.kyon kiagar aap beech mein nayee agaye hoti toh apke jagah mein bed pe hota aur aap mere sewa kar rahi hoti''..

Heer:aap ko itna ehkeen kaise ki agar chot apko hota ..tho mein apke liye'''yeh sab kuch karoongi''..

Prem:jo ladki ek ajnabhi ke liye apne jaan ki parva na karke chot kane ke liye beech mein asakthi hay'''toh kya who ladki kisiko beech raasthe pe chod ke jaasakthi kya'.

Heer:aap baatein acche kar le hay'''..

Prem:thank u''.aur jab tak aap poori tarake se teek na hoo''''llejiye medicine lijee

Heer:aap tho bahut jiddi hay'lekin bahut acche hay..

Prem:teek hay dubara '''.kise musibat mein pad jaayee aur isbaar mein chot kavunga toh aap mera sewa karna''

Heer:kya zindagi bar hospital mein rehne ke irada hay kya''''

Prem:aap saath de tho..

Heer lowers her head.and smiles '''..

Prem also smiles'''.

Aryan and mahi'''..sees both of them

Mahi:pehle baar dekh rahi hoon mere behen ko bina darr ke kise ladke se baat kar rahi hay.strange''''.very strange''

Aryan:haa yeh baat to hay.mein ne bhi prem ko itne deer tak koi ladkise baat karke nahi dekha hay''.

Both look at each other.

And they gets into the room'

Aryan:bhai.who'..press wale'''

Prem:don't worry prem maine samala..

Heer and mahi gets worried'.

Heer:press

Mahi:lekin press beech mein kaha se agaye'.are wau guru yeh kaise musibaat hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Aryan:musibaat tum se jyada musibaat ho nahi sakta waise donot worry we will manage..

Mahi:kya manage tume kya ladka hoo'..kuch bhi manage kar sakthe hay.par hum toh ladkiyaan hay''''

Aryan:ladikyaa toh kya.ladkoon bhi izzat hoti hay''..samajana''.isee'prem eh ladkiyaan hote hi yese'''..

And prem consoles Aryan'.

Where mahi comes to heer..

Mahi:samajtha hay apne apko.accha heer mein canteen jara rahi toh tere liye khane ke liye kuch lane ke liye'''.

Heer :teek hay didi''samal kar jana.aur ha please kisi se jagada mat karna ,,,,,,,,,,

Prem:comes to heer''who mera bhai thoda gussa wala hay..par dilki bahut achaa hay''

Mujse pyar toh bahut kartha hay''.

Aryan bhai mere liye sab kuch hay'

Heer:ha mahi didi..bhi'.waise hum dono sirf mahineen no se difference hay'..didi mera sab se jyada support hay'''mujse pyar bhi karthi hy''.dil ki bahit achhee hay''.

Prem:achha baat hay ki'''..dadiji aur dadimaa

Hamara ghar ka sabse bada pota'adi bhayya se bahut pyar kiya tha''.

Aur jab dobara bademaa maa bana yeh na'''.

Phir maa shaadi karke ghar mein nayee ayee thi.is liye Aryan bhai ki har kaam ''''who karte thi''isliye jab mein paida huwa tab badimaa mere har kaam kar thi hay'

Is liye mein apne badi maa yeni Aryan ki mama ka ladla hoon.aur Aryan'.chotimaa yani mere mama ki ladla hay.

Waise bhi ghar mein sab bhi yesa hi''.

Mera chota bhaibhi apne choti maa aur sabse last ladikyaa'''.badimaa ki 'taaki pyar kam na pade''

Heer:mere behen bhi yesa'.hi hay'''

Aur rajbeer bhaiyaa hum sab ko bahut pyar kartha hay'.. agar bhaiyya yeha hote toh.

Heer observes that she taken the medicines

Heer:mein apne medicines lelee hay

Prem:ha lelee'''..baat o baatho mein

Heer:lagtha hay aap jaroor ek jadoo ghar hay

Prem:waise jaddo chal rahi hay'''.par deere deere''bahut baatein ho gaye hayab aap baatein nahi karenge aur araam karenge'''.

Nayee toh phir se jhansi ke rani toh ban na hay na'''..

Heer smiles''''

Prem also smiles'''..

Prem leaves from the room'..

Heer slides and goes to sleep,,,,,,,,,

Prem gives a look'''..

Iss ka chehra bhi nayee balki dil bhi bahut khubsoorat hay'''.

Aryan comes to prem,,,,,,,,,,

Prem:baat hay''.bahut parishaan hay'''..

Aryan:ha ek bahut problem hay

Andhe takes prem

And puts on TV>'..

On TV news channel'''.is showing,,,,,,

There is huge hawac on the roads of delhi'''

Lot of commoters are creating havoo'''on the roads.

People are adviced to not to move out.

And due to political unstability.,'''lot of people are arrested '''.and there is huge police'''.surrounded the places'''.

And a special report'..

We cannot move from this place'.prem'

Lot of tension in the city

Prem looks worries'

And Aryan shocks as he is infront of mahi.

Which is shattered''..

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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Part 16

Mahi is shattered'.

She is trying to call rajbeer but his phone is switched off'.at the same time

Rajveer is strucked in a mess'..and he is trying her level best to come out'.

He is talking to the inspector'but he cannot come out..

Inspector:dekhya '''sheher bahut halla malla machahuwa hay''.kisko bhi nayee

Chood rahe hey..agle 24 gante tak kuch nahii kar sakthe hay

Rajveer:24 hours oh no mere 2 behene hay musibat hay .aur who akele bhi hey'..

Wau guru kya karoon mein '..ghar mein phone kiye tho who log parishaan ho

Jayenge.,'.na heer ka phone lag raha hay na mahi kaa''''kya karoon mein''..

And Aryan comes and consoles mahi'..

Aryan:dekhye mein aap ka halat samaj saktha hoon'''..hame kuch aur soch na chaheiye''..aap ki behen ki condition bhi poori tarah se teek nahi yeh'''

And mahi is so furious and comes to heer's room'..

Where heer is sleeping '..and she wakes up''..

Heer:kya baat hay mahi didi aap ko yeha ki khana achaa nayii lagaa''''

Problem kuch hay kya''''

But mahi is so calm'''.heer doubts'''before mahi could say anything Aryan comes to her'

Aryan:noproblem heer your sister worries for small things''.

Mahi:gives a angrily look to Aryan'..

Where heer understands''something is again happened between them again'''.

Mahi leaves'''

Aryan:take care heer nothing to worry'.we are there ''''.but ur sister doesn't believe us''''.especially me'''''

Heer:didi thodi gusse wali aur thodi over protective hay mere liye.,'.woh bachpan ka aadat hay,,,,,,,maa hamesha hum dono ko hi bechete thi kahi bhi''.mein eise hi chup chap se rehete hoon'aur didi thodi bhool thi hay''

Par dil ki bahut acchee hay''''.

Aryan:isse thodi kehete hay..are shole mein basanti bhi isse kam bhool thi hay''''.

And Aryan and heer both smiles'

Prem comes to the room'''..

Prem:kya baat hay''..kisse ne mere serious Aryan bhai ko hassaya not bad'''

Aryan:Haa prem yeh dono behen bahut kamal ki

Ek hai sweet rasmalai ki tarah hay toh dosori'..

Hot mirchi'..woh bhi radio mirchy'''..

And mahi comes into the room''

On seeing mahi prem changes the topic'.

Prem:nothing to worry''I made all the arrangements and good news is heer is going to be discharged and we are going back to hotel room'''..

Mahi is still worrying'''.and she knows why''

She made a excuse and leaves the hospital'''..

Prem comes out''..

Prem:acchaa bhai aap ko hot cheezee bahut pasand hay na''''

Aryan looks confusing ly at prem

Prem smiles ''im kidding bhai'''''

Aryan come sout and sees mahi is not there

He excuses for prem '.and he enquires for mahi in the receptionist'..and he also leaves''

He sees mahi going out of the gate'..

He follows her .,'he sees her going to jewellery shop''..where she gives her ring and chain to the merchant'''..and she takes the money and comes back to the hospital.

Aryan sees this'''''..

After that he enters into the shop'

And he takes something from them'''..

And mahi is above to pay the hospital bills.

The receptionist informs that already bill has been paid'''..

She asks the receptionst informs that hotel authorities had paid the bill'''..

Prem also looks confused''''.but he smiles'''.

Prem:hello bhai'''..kya baat hay aap yeha''..

Who kuch nahii''''.muje aap se ek jaroori baat kar ne hay'.

Aryan:dekh prem jya da baatein mat banoo'''..

Prem hugs him and says aap bahut acchee hay bhai'''mujse bahut acchee''

At that time mahi still confused''..