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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 28

Prem is driving the car

Where Aryan comes back

Mahi is still in her world

Where heer looking at her surprisingly…………

Prem mean time smiling little bit

And he suddenly stops the car…………..

Aryan ……….looks at a shock…………………………

Aryan:kya baat hay prem ghadi kyon rokhi………..

Prem:wow bhai..apko toh kuch khayal nahii….lekin muje khayal rakhna padega na…..

Aryan:confused….kya…

Prem:ki…………shayad apko nahii……..lekin muje ped mein bahut jyada chuhe doud rahi hay……bhook lagii hay……….

And he turns back……….kya baaki log ko bhi hay…..ya shakal dekh kar jeene ke practice karrahe hay……….he looks at heer…….naughty look

Heer :graps his words..and her face turns red….and she mummers..yeh itna seeda diktha hay utna hay nahii….

In meantime she turns to mahi.ab chale didi

Mahi comes back……….

Prem:kya baat hay………aag mein nekahi aur jalee.aur pataka kisi aur pode…..hot mirchy……..chup……aag barabar lagii hay……………..

And he gets down………………

Looking at heer

Where aryan…..goes to wash his hands……….

Meantime………….mahi also…………….goes for water

It is a dhaba………….

Mahi goes to the tap…

Where accidently aryan also goes there

Both hands ar etouched

Aryan:pehle tum……..

Mahi:pehle tum………….

At the same time

Hey laila majnu…..hey pehle aap pehle aap ke chakkar mein…..mein bhooka na marjaoo………….chalo.yeh cinema kahi aur karna

A person staring at them.saying the words……………

Aryan fumes at anger…..

Before he says so…….

Mahi stops him by touching his hand

Aryan stops…………

Prem looks at the scene

And he remembers….his mother words………

Gayatri:are kaise samajoo.aryan..gussa jya da kartha hay……pehle bhi eisa………….hi hay.aur sab kuch his manali ke wajah se..laad pyar karthi hay aryan….

Malini:are didi……..mera aryan.aap pls mera aryan ke baaremein yesa baat mat karna

Gayatri:are kaun.shaadi karegi usse…………..itna gussa

Malini:kyon nahii karege shaadi.sahi ladki milne dijyee usse dekhna …yesi ladki uski zindagi mein ayege.ki uski haat pakade the hii.gussa thook jayege…..

Prem:smiles.lagtha hay maa……apki dua kaam kargayyee…….isliye bhaii ko samalne wali agayee…………..

He then moves from there

But bumps with heer

Heer gives him a angry look and sits at the table………….

Prem :ar wah gussa mein kitne pyarri laghthi hay heer……chalo..

And he sits opposite to her

But heer turns his face ……

The waiter comes and serves the food…………..

Prem:puts food into his mouth..and starts……..meeta khana accha hay.,..lekin kabhi kabhi meete ke saath tadka be chalege………….lekin jyada tadka nahii chalega…………….istara muskhurat………….ke saath saath thoda gussa chalega…….lekin jya da gussa…………..prem nahii chel saka……banda..thoda mirchy chalega…..lekin jyada nahiii………

Dil chahta hay…….ki….ek baar gussa ke jhalak bhi dekhe………pyarri se surat mein kaise hota hay……………..

He smiles

Where heer also smiles

And prem comes to aryan

Prem:kya baat hay aap teek to hay bhayya….

Aryan:ha.teek hoo..

Prem:bhayya …mein apko bachpan se jaanta hoo..mujse apka halat chupati nahii………….jyada time hame zindagi nahii deti hay,,,,,,,isliye kal ka kaam aaj karo.aur aaj ka abhi…..agar apki dil mein chalta hay toh deer mat karna .mein jaanta mera bhai bahut samajdhar hay……..

And he goes from there

Aryan comes to mahii……………….

Aryan………..and mahi…………

Food is served……

Aryan:are kuch bholo.shuruwaad karoo………….ar mokha mila hay na………….jaldi karoo aryan warna ya prem ajayege ya phir heer.prem ko toh samalege…………lekin……heer ko nahii na……………..on the other hand

Mahi:mahii.wow sadu hay tu bhi jaanta hay…………tuje kya huwa…pehle nahii.lekin ab tohachaa lagtha hay na…kuch toh bhol na…………….

Aryan:wow mein kuch kehna hay tujse

Mahi:haa muje bhi……………….

Before he says something

Heer comes didi…….chale hay na.barish hone wali hay,,,,,,,,,, Aryan looks at prem…….

Helpless……………..

And mahi goes with heer

Mahi:accha huwa…….heer agayee.agar uske dil mein yesa kuchnahii jo toh soch rahi hay toh…….gadbad ho jayege……na………….philali…………pehle usse bholedo warna kya barosaa.wow isbaremein tuje chede toh…….

Aryan:kya karoon mein…………….he is confused………………..

At the time suddenly rains falls

And heer is rinsing in rain

Where mahii……..stands

But heer pulls her…………

And they both rinse….

Before………………………..

Aryan sees mahi…

Where prem is completely lost…………………………..

He is seeing heer…………….

Heer is fully enjoying………………

At the time schoolbus comes and some kids get down……….

Where heer gets all the kids into them…………….

Prem smiles and removes his guitar.

And plays the tune………

Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom.... ghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum o Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tumghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum o Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tumprem comes and pulls aryan into the rainand they all danceprem sings koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Haichakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomkoi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Haibaarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhumaryan sings…………koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Haibaarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhumheer singskoi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Haichakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomarre Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Haisaawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoomkoi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Haisaawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomho Ho Ho Hohey Hey Hey Hey baadal Jhuke Jhuke Se Hainraste Ruke Ruke Se Hainkya Teri Marzi Hai Meghapar Hum Ko Jaane Na Degaaage Hai Barsaat Peechhe Hai Toofanmausam Beimaan Kahaan Chale Humtumchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Haibaarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhumkoi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Haisaawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom ho Ho Ho Hohey Hey Hey Hey ambar Jhuka Jhuka Sa Haisab Kuchh Ruka Ruka Sa Haichhaya Samaa Kitna Pyaarasaawan Ka Samjho Ishaaraaise Mausam Mein Tum Bhi Kuchh Kahotum Bhi Kuchh Karo Khadi Ho Kyon Gumsumchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom ghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum o Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tumghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum o Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tum chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Haibaarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhumkoi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Haisaawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoomchakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom ho Ho Ho Hohey Hey Hey Heyho Ho Ho Hola La La... aryan meantime………….looks at mahi,,,,thodi alag hay ….pagal hay.nat kat hay,,,,,,,,,,gussa karthi hay…lekin iske har baat muje itna acchaa kyon laghta hya………..isse dekh khar mein kudh kyo kyon bhool jaata hoo…………..kya yehi who ladki joo mere zindagi mein pyarr ka ehasaas lane wali haykya mein isse pyarr kartha hoo……………am I love………………………on the other hand………mahi.ho na hoo..wow sadoo hay..gussa kartha hay..toh kya huwa..accha toh hay…………..iska dil bahut saaf hay…jaisa bahar se utna ander se…………….bahut saaf dil ka ladka hay……..mein iske baaremein itna kyon soch rahii hoo…kya mahi….tuje kahii pyarr toh nahii huwe………….Part ends

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
nicely written......
waitin 4 other part.........hope u write soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
hi everyone
one important news need to share with u all
my marriage is fixed
engagement is on 23-09-2009
marriage date : 21-10-2009
so im busy in shopping
so pls excuse me for not updating
it takes time for updates...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
ohh congratulations yaar
njoy ur shopping

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