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hello

iam updating in this page.......
the story starts.............
this is mumbai
the city of destination.....
large crowd.......
busy people
the city which also lives at nights........
and a building is shown......
huge garden .....
and a tulsi plant..........
and the name of the building is
SINGH RESIDENCE>>>>
and a old lady well dressed is shown doing some pooja....
and she is rajwanti singh.....
and a person is shown he is pretending to be sleeping
but the lady comes and wakes him up
and says aap ki nountanki mere samane nahi chalege...jaldi se utteye warna mujese boora koi nahihoga
tum se boora koi hoo bhi nahi sakti rajwanti
and he wokes up he is balweer singh.....
then jaldi ready ho jayee breakfast is ready.....
at that time a lady is doing pooja .....to the tulsi plant and she is praying for tulsi to protecther family and gives them lot of happiness.......
and she is damini singh...........and at that time
somebody calls her name.......damini.......
she comes to her room ......
the room is beautifully decorated with picutures
and she asks kya hai andit is turned tobe his husband......balraaj singh........
he takes arrthi from her and asks her for some file..
she finds and she says apko to koi kaam mera bina nahi hota......jaldi chaleye breakfast is ready........
and a middle aged lady is getting ready at the front of the mirror and a person wakes up and flirts her saying beautifull.and she winks in a flimy way
they are manpreet and manya singh........
and at that time a damini comes down and she find sarrangements are ready
then rajwanti comes to damini and she takes blessings from her........
and she asks maa apne saari arrangements
yeh to tere bahu hey na
turn to be rani singh................
rajbir comes down and they both take blessings from all.........
then they are set for breakfast table
and manpreet and balraj also joins .....
and some servant comes and serves water for them
and suddenly rajbir asks for armaan........
and armaan is shown....
a huge room...........fully furnished.........
and the background song..mein yais kyon hoon...........)
he is armaan singh........
and he gets a call on seeing the number.........
and he jumps from the bed and says hai to ridhima.........
ridhima tells him to get ready
and he runs into thebathroom,,,,,,,,
meantime balraj asks for others
then a huge room is shown . few photographs are shown...........
and a girl with spectacles she is reading some books
she is purvi singh......
and another girl is shown.....she is on the bed...
damini went to upstairs....
poorvi comes inand meher is shown she is with her face pack......
and poorvi shouts....
and rajbir smiles and says this is singh's residence
as ususal meher is with her make up and purvi......
screams on seeing this..
and damini iss ladki ka mein kya karoon...........
and then balweer asks where are others
damini:you know babuji..............heer aur mahi are at their hostel........as they insist and this is their final semister and it is tough......
balweer:haa un dono ki alwawa ghar bahut suna suna s e hai....
kyon dadaji hum nahi hai kya.............meher replies
aur waise bhi kal to simi didi anewali hai na
dadaji:ha woh to hai simi aur ranweer aye toh accha lag ta hai.......
and they end stheir breakfast


part ends




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hello all
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing update but its hard to keep on track wiv evry one
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hi the new update is follows..........
part 1:
later on a very beautifull couple comes and take blessings of all.......
she is the eldest daughter of balraaj ............simran khurana and his huband rajeev khurana
winds blowing......
jodiya upar bantha hai
par uski milana hum insaan par chod de the hai....
jab koi phool hai toh koi hawa hai
koi aag hai toh koi paani hai........
ab agar yeh ek jahaan hai
toh iska manzil kahi aur hai........
DELHI......
a large crowd sourrounding .........and few press reporters......
in that one .....
hello to all,.,,
we are in front of the most reputed ,successfull,
bussiness tycoons ...khannas and mittals........
there is a party enviornment...........at here...
where once again the biggest deal has been gained......and lot of achivements..........
let us be part of the function.....
lot of lights.........is decorated...house...
and a huge mansion.........
and in big ahall...
and in one room a big person is getting ready for the party he is vikram khanna......
and a old lady is shown wearing jewellery.......
she is jayanti khanna........
after that his biggest son lalit khanna is shown
with his wife gayatri khanna.......
in another room mahesh khanna and his wife manali khanna is shown........
and then manav and preeti also comes to the party......
at the same time prakash mittal and his wife also comes to the party.....
the party begins........
and all are in the party..
where vikram asks his wife regarding kids......
and at the time she informs that aditya is on the way.......
and at the time a very beautifull lady is shown ..
well dressed and she is talking over phone...
and she is nandini
nandini:adi where are u all are waiting for u
dadaji,dadi everybody asking for u...
aditya:darling iam on the way..........don't worry i will reach the place soon......
and then manav asks preeti for the others.....
then two girls are introduced they are asstha and prachi.......
they enjoy the party........
then gayatri asks manali for others.......
then preeti covers them....saying that they are studying......
gayatri and manali shocks studying........
and a weird place some boys are making fun..
and in that some boys challenges for somthing
the guy looses..someone strokes him.and he fells on the ground....
and a person lifts him up..and other one is at jeep.......
he is preet khanna and other is salil.........
then they fight and wins the challenge
salil asks for where .............then he replies let us go....
maa ka ladla bigad gaya..........song is played........
and at that time asked for soham.........
soham comes to the party.........
and then aditya also enters into the party....
he take blessings of dadaji and all.......
and gayatri asks for aryan............
then manali replies that he is going to come tommorrow..........
at the college is shown..
mumbai arts and sciences.......
a girl is shown.........
she is singing......the song
her face is not shown..........
and all girls shout hey look at mahi........

Mere khwaabon mein jo aaye
Aake mujhe chhed jaye
Mere khwaabon mein jo
aaye
Aake mujhe chhed jaye
Usse kaho kabhi saamne to aaye

a boy is shown.........
he riding the horse, he is playing squash......
he is doing lot of things.....
Mere khwaabon mein jo aaye
Aake mujhe chhed jaye
Usse kaho kabhi saamne to aaye
Mere khwaabon mein jo aayeeeeee

Kaisa hai kon hai wo jaane kahan hai
Hoo..
Kaisa hai kon hai wo jaane kahan hai

he is shown doing some work at office...
he is giving lift to some old person......
Jiske liye mere honton pe haan hai
Apna hai ya begana hai wo
Sach hai ya koi afsaana hai wo
Dekhe ghoor ghoor ke yun hi door door se
Usse kaho meri neend na churaaye
he is smiling...........
buying something from the shop........

Mere khwaabon mein jo aaye
Aake mujhe chhed jaye
Usse kaho kabhi saamne to aaye
Mere khwaabon mein jo aayeeeeee

meantime the mahi is in her dreams
she is between the flowers.........
Jaadu sa jaise koi chalne laga hai
Hoo..
Jaadu sa jaise koi chalne laga hai
Main kya karun dil machalne laga hai
Tera deewana hoon kehta hai wo
Chhup chhup ke phir kyun rehta hai wo
Kar baitha bhool wo le aaya phool wo
Usse kaho jaaye chand le ke aaye

Mere khwaabon mein jo aaye
Aake mujhe chhed jaye
Mere khwaabon mein jo
aaye
Aake mujhe chhed jaye
Usse kaho kabhi saamne to aaye

screen splits and one shown mahi and other is
aryaan.......
and he is aryan khanna...............
and he rings to the mansion......
and manali picks and says aryaan...
aryaan:choti maa.......it takes time to comein
mama there is work here.....
i will reach day after tommorrow .wishes to bhai......ok chotimaa i will call u back.
manali:aryaan........wait on.......
GK:kehene ko woh mera beta hai par sabse jyada tere kareeb hai.......
kyon manali.....
MK:aur diid mera kya agar apka ladla mera kareeb hai......toh mera beta apka ladla hai na.......
jayanti asks mein toh bhool .gaya
sab se pyara....sab ka dhulara .......tumhare ladla kaha hai.
prem kaha hai.....
aditya also asks haa ma prem kaha hai....
meantime suddenly a girl comes on calls mahi..
mahi.......where are u ...........u forgot..
then mahi reminds.......ya i forget........
i need to say best wishes to heer.......
as today it is very important exam for her.....
where is heer..........
all two voices of gayatri and mahi mixes
and ultimately
where is prem and where is heer...............
a huge lot of crowd...........
and all are waiting for performances......
now the name of the person whose going to win the hearts of the people with his lovely and tremendous voice.......pls welcome MR PREM KHANNA>>>>>>>>>>>>>
and a voice overhears..........
tum iss hawa mein hooo.....
iss jahan mein hooo........
tere khusboo mere har saasoon mein
tere dhadkhan mere dil mein hai.......
jab hawa chalete hai...
tuh khusboo banke muje choote hooo.....
jab bhi moosom badele har woh mousam mein
tere ehsaas jhalak the hai.............
tere unkaheen bateein mere under sama is tara sama gaya....khi tere saat h mere yaisa ehsaas hei
ke mein doondoo tuje har chand sitaroo mein///
a song starts.........
I Love You All

Doston Na Koi Manzil Hai Na Koi Saathi Hai
Phir Bhi Nikal Pada Hoon Ghar Se
Shaayad Jiski Talaash Hai
Vohi Saathi Hai Vohi Manzil Hai

Hit It
a girl s shown between the flowers......she is praying to god....and her eyes are shown........her laal duppatta flewing.........and she is playing with kids...........

O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana

O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana Sanam
heer is shown..........
Mera Khwaab Mere Khayaalon Ki Rani
Kisi Din Banegi Hamari Kahani
Mera Khwaab Mere Khayaalon Ki Rani
Kisi Din Banegi Hamari Kahani
Ay Meri Bekhudi Ye Kasam Maine Li
Pyaar Mein Ek Din Meri Jaan Tujhe Hai Paana

Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana
O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana Sanam
the girl giving some choclates to childreen
helping people... and enjoying with them.....
Kisi Khoobsurat Pari Jaisi Hogi
she is doing lot of things.........
Mujhe Kya Pata Dilruba Kaisi Hogi
Kisi Khoobsurat Pari Jaisi Hogi
Mujhe Kya Pata Dilruba Kaisi Hogi
Sochta Hoon Tujhe Chahta Hoon Tujhe
Dil Mera Keh Raha Saare Faasle Mitaana

O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana

O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana Sanam

O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana

O O Jaane Jaana
Dhoonde Tujhe Deewana
Sapnon Mein Roz Aaye
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana Sanam
Aa Zindagi Mein Aana Sanam
and she closes his eyes............and suddenly girls sourrounds him.he says he need to go home..as his badi maa is waiting for her........a story startsshe is heer singh and he is prem khanna.............
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Part 3

Preet is around with girls and suddenly he shoutsprem bhaiyya

One of the girl what.

preet:Are yaar we forgot today is PB 's show..

And even Aryan bhaiyya is not here

Sure there going to be a big blow for us.

Sahil:Do not worry .i had already managed with preeti chachi.she sets everything for us..

Preet:even though we need to move on fast..

And that time he gets a call

He picks the call it is Big B---aditya

Preet:Hai big b.where are u guys

AK:U know there is a party at the houselook on I donot want any explinations from u both come fast.we are waiting for u

Preet: ya .big b but we are waiting for PB's show.we will come along with him.

They get into the jeep and move to the college

There prem is sourrounded by the girlshe is trying to escape from them

Salil:look on preet here we are on to the girls and all are back of Prem bhaiyya

And instead of gluing up he is running from them

Preet:we know our Prem bhaiyya.he is shy type..pata nahi kaun hai unki kismat mein

At time heer is shown praying to the god..

Heer:oh god pls save me ..today is my exam and iam too nervous for itpls help me ..

And she turned back and searching for someone.she came backto the room.she finds the room is so untidy..and she muttering pata nahi yeh mahi kaha chala gayee

Uske bina mera kya usne mujegood luck wish nahi kee.

Then she sees a letter.with a flower on it

She opens it and read the letter

no one cannot separate me from u..

As iam ur shadow which follows u

We are one for another and do not dare

To say that iam away from u

All the best for ur exams

With lots of love from ur sister mahi..

She turns and finds mahi

And they both hug

Then the third girl comes in and asks ..

What if u both marriedthen mahi replies in that case we marry two brothers.and they laugh.

Mean time preet comes to prem and they both hug.

Prem:kaha they tum dono dikhaii nahi de.kahi phir se koi.ladaii,jagadajaisa kuch..

Preet:bhai.aap hamesha shakh kyon karte hai..aap jante hai na hum kitne seedi hai

Prem:haa achiiee tara se jante hai ke kitne seedhi ho..

Achaa ghar chale waha sab hamara intezar kar rahe hai.

they reaches the house....meantime prem gets a

message.........
u r like a shiny shower on the beach......
u r like a pleasure of the wind..........
and always glow like a star ...
and impress with your voice.......
lots of love from....urs aryan.........
he calls him,,,,
he replies ...you are always with me
l love u a lot bhaiyaa..........
and he smiles........
heer is so still nervous and she gets a call from
dadu...
heer :dadu.mein to apka phone ka intezar kar rahi hoon ..mein bahut nervous hoo........
dadu:isse mein nervous ki kya baat hai heer
dekha na tum jaroor kamyaab hogi beta,,,,,
bas kudh pe vishwaas karo aur man lagake padoo.......apna kayal rakhna beta...
heer:good night dadu...
then damini enters into the room.......
damini:bauijii.......heer ka phone hai.....
dadu:ha beta bahut nervous hai..
damini:ha baujii woh waha hai aur humyaha ussine jidd karke hostel chale gaye.....
dadu:jaanedo na..waha rahege toh padaii to karege warna yaha toh sab usse disturb karte rahege......
meantime she hears noise from the other room....it was scream of purvi.....
she is running after meher.as she is carrying books in her hands........
damini:meher what's going on .in ladikyon ka kya karoon..meher kya hai yeh.....
purvi:dekho na badi maa........iss meher ko mere kitab lekar bhaag rahi hai........
damini:meher uski kitab wapas karo...kya hai yeh....
meher:mama samjayee is padako........einsteen ki choti behen ko........chamsma he aur site badane ki chakkar mein hai....
purvi:tume kya..........
menatime simran comes in .....
meher hides behind her.........
simran:mama relax mein dekh loongi isse......
meher kitab wapas karo.......purvi.ka.....
purvi:diid pata nahi isse akal kab ayeege....
oh mein toh bhool gaye bhagwan isee khubsoorat shakal diya aur pata hai akal dena bhool gaya.....
meher:haa tume toh agal jyada diya na.....
purvi:aha tujse jyaada......
simran:pata nahi mama yeh tono apne ladaii band kab karege......
damini:ladaii karte hai par ek doose ke bina nahi reh sakte hai........
meantime all the boys reaches home.....
vikram dekh hai kehta hai loo mera shejaadein agaye hai.......
jayanti.....haa apka dulhera agaya........
prem enters into the house....
manali stops prem and gayatri comes and gives the arrthi..and he performs nazar utarna......(tradition nazar utarna----removes the bad evils)..then he hugs gayatrii..and also take blessings of manali and others.......then preet and salil enters.then preeti hugs them...meantime aditya comes and hugs prem.....
soham comes in talking over phone......
meantime preet raises his eyebrow and salil sighes ..pari bhabi ki phone hogi....oh remote control.
soham:cuts the phone kya hora raha hai.........salil where are u till now..
salil:bhai...woh mein .....mein college mein tha...
hey na preet.....
preet:hai soham bhai.......hum college mein they.
kya performance tha prem bhai ka.....maja ayee.......hey na...
prem looked confused......not understanding what is happenning..
meantime preet sighing him to help them..
(bhai hamara watt lagane wali hai sab pls help us........pls pls..)
prem haa yeh log mere saath hai........
AK:prem are u sure......
prem:aa bhai..yeh log mere saath hai.......
party ends.....
all are into their rooms....
meantime gayatri calls for dinner.......
and they are to dinner.........
at that time prem is in his room.......
gayatri comes to the room..........
gayatri:prem badi maa......kya baat hai neend nahi are hai kya.bahut takh gaye ho beta.araam karo......
prem:nahi badi ma.yesi koi baath nai.....sab kuch teekh hai........
gayatri:ha prem tuje jhoot bholana nahi ata hai.
kyonki seedhe log kabhi galati nahi kar sakte..
aur tumhara sharrat bhai toh bilkul nahi......
unko mein achii tara se janti hoon.
prem:badi maa chotee hai pls........
gayatri:toih baat bahut achhee se manta hai.......
gayatri wishes him good night and leaves from there.......
prem looks at moon........
tum ho to mein hoon........
yeh hawa mein tere khusboo hai
mere har geet mein tum shamill hoo..
lekin nahi jaanta kaha hoo..
par duwa karta hoon ki jaha bhi hoo
hamesha kush rahooo.........
aur jaldi se mein zindagi mein ajooo......
and suddenly heer wakes up.....and finds mahi is sleeping on the other bed...
she moves on to the window...
she sees at moon........
she whispers.....what made to wake up......
yaisa kyon laga hai kisne muje yaad kiya.
kaisa yeh ehsaas hai....
door bhi hay par achhaa kyon laga hai.......
kya hai yeh......
both look at moon..........
part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago
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CONRINUE SOON AND PLEASE PM ME WHEN U DO UPDATE
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Part2

Heer is shown praying to the god

And mahi comes and hug to her

And they both leave from the temple

Meantime heer sees a man at the temple.

And she gaves coin to him,..

The person gives blessing that her life is always be happy

And they both leave..

At that time prem is getting ready for college..

Meantime he is seeing at the watch..

Why he is not coming

And everyone at the breakfast table

Manav and aditya is talking over share market ..

Meantime nandini and preeti distracts them and warns them to concentrate on their food served

Mean time gayatri sees manali Is seeing at the door often.

Suddenly she felts bad and returns to her room

Others look worried..

Where suddenly two hands come from the back and place them at the eyes of manali.

She catches the hand and says Aryan.

And she turn back to find handsome tall,Aryan smiling at her

Manali:Aryanitne deer karade kab se intezaar kar rahi hoon tumhara pata hai na..

Aryan:choti maa .i know but what to do flight was late..even I tried to come but cannot..

And they both come to downstairs..

And all surprised to find aryan

Vikram:Aryan puttar when u came we are all here.

Aryan:I came by other way..

Preet:the other wayaryan bhai.this is not good.

Aryan:the same way used by u at the time u finishes ur disko thekhsmirking at him.

Preet:Aryan bhai ur too dangerous..apse panga lena hamere bas ki baat nahi..

Yeh kaha pus pus ho raha hai

And Aryan smiles.and preet consoles haa insaw Aryan bhai koand he sighes he manage everything..

Then Aryan take blessings ofgayatri and lalit

And Aryan reaches prem 's room.

Aryan:So boy of dreams.heart throb of college.and a well known singer of khanna family.how ru.

Prem turns and find Aryan

Lekin Aryan ke bina prem nahi..

I really missed u bhai

I too.

And they both hugged.

At that time suddenly gayatri fumes at preet where as nikila mittal asks for salil

Both are muttering who maa who hum sab prem bhaii ki program mein hai.aur mama hum bahut seedi hai aur padiee bhi kar rahe hai hey na salil meantime soham and aditya are laughing

At that time preeti and gouri sides salil and preet.

And meantime jayanti smilesand says

Aryan is gayatri's son where as ladla of manali.

And prem is manali's son and sab se kareeb hai gayatri ka

Aur preet and salil to unki choti ma kaa..

Waha soham bhi gouri ki dulhara hai.

Is liye

Aur dadi mera number kya hai

Aditya reminding all

She says to toh dadimaa ka ladla hai..mera sab se bada aur achhaa puttar.aditya

And she hugs him.

Aur is liye jis tara.mein ne nandini jaise beti ko tujse shaadi kiya waise bhi ab number hai

Aryan ka..aur phir prem

Both Aryan and prem blushes.

Udar dekho dono bhayyonko man mein ladoo put raha hai .preet and salil teasing them..

Prem mutters bhai apko nahi lagta yeh dono kuch over oreha yein

Do not worry mein hoon na.(smirks Aryan)

He reaches preet and salil where they are discussing ..

hamara number kab ayega

he goes them pehle apnesemister ki number ke bare mein soochoo..

semister ke number oh no..and they run from there..

meantime aditya takes leave from others and all leaves to their places..

heer is attending her paper

she prays to god.

Heer:maa muje ashirwaad do.mein exam achii se lik loo

Meantime suddenly prem looks the maa idol.and he thinks.and goes to maa

And he says ma pata nahi lekin aisa lagta hai

Kisko apke asshirwaadchaieheinto usee madad de jiye maa.

And flower falls on him.

And gayatri comes to him.lagta hai tere duwa maa ne khubool kar le..

And he take blessings and leave from there..

Heer sees the paper and smiles and starts writing..and she finisher her paper.

And she comes out in a very mood.

And she hugs mahi

Mahi :tere chehra bata rahi hai tu ne paper achaa kiya hai..

Heer:ha mahi yasa lagtha hai ki bahut achaa lag rahe haikiska duwa kaam kar ne lagi/..

Mahi:acha mera good luck kis kaam ki..

Meantime prem reaches to the college.

And some girls talking amoung themselves

Look on mr prem khanna..

He isso cute, but why he runs from us..

Another girl:I will sure ask him today.

By that she reaches prem preet stops her.

Preet:hello baby.what ;s up why are u after my bhai

Girl:I cannot be after u boy.what 's wrong with ur bhaiwhy he runs from girls.

Preet: he always like that u can try me if u wantu can try..

Girl:no ways.

Preet:my bhai feels he is only for one special

And he is waiting for her to come into his life

She is special for bhai.

Girl:who is she

Preet:I donot know and everyone hardly know where she is

And suddenly he shouts whereare u

And heer replies mein ya hoo,..to some of her friends who are searching for her

And prem smiles,,,,,,,,,

Part ends..

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago
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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".