FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 9

Originally posted by: munam_13

Zahraaaaa...oops Harshad ki deewani😆Yes get my name right Priyo!! 😆... I know how would you feel, my parents also calls me with all sorts of names related to Harshad😳Kitna embarrassing hai na?... awww I loved Heer's entry...pehli nazar main hi bowled???? gr8!!! I can just feel that Prem is going to lose his cassanova image soon cause Heer's here...cant really wait...be generous one more time😃😆Yes you are right, Prem will lose his casanova imagine, but it might take longer than you think, hehe!! Thank you Priyo!! Love Zahra xx

Originally posted by: sadizzle

aww!! heer's here! - to the resue! hahaha

very good upate..

but after meeting heer, will prem be able to tend to 'business' as usual? lol

so can't wait to see what happens next!

thanx for the update and PM

-Sadi*

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

lovely entry of heer
lets see wat further impact will heer have on prem.

i hope prem first falls for heer rather her falling for him bcoz as we know he is a casanova he will just hurt her if she falls first.
lets c how u will proceed ur story.

can u later brng a jealousy angle also later on with prem being jealous of sm heers childhood friend bcoz as we know prem does not blv in love so that wud be a way of making him realize

its just a suggestion as i love jealousy angles

lovely writing on ur behalf

Originally posted by: fungrl

too good..............lets see how Prem and Heer interact with each other in the future

Originally posted by: luv4bb

i just read the this ff.itz awesome loved it.update next par soon
luv

Originally posted by: nslove

hi

it was a beautiful

thx contine soon😊

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏