FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 8

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My spot! 😛

And omg Z!!! My dad says the same thing to me EVERY DAY! 😆Yes and oh also everyday around 9:45 ish...he's like what's coming on TV next? Oh wait *he turns to look at me and smiles* Harshad's show right? I'm like...😳 the whole time! 😆 It's really bad!😆LOL, your dad is so funny!! At least now he knows what kind of guy you are looking for!! 😉 This was the first time my dad said something like this that is why I found it so embarrassing and hilarious!! 😆

But onto your...."too frequent" updates!😆😆 I shud come there and MAKE you study na?😉😆😆 Yes, they are too frequent, but the next part won't be updated so soon!! 😆 Yes you should make me study, but yes I will get back to the model-making, hehe!! This forum is a good stress reliever!

Reena.....*shakes head* I disapprove of my Prem's attitude...as HOT as it always makes him sound!😳 I like Reena....🤔 Actually, no I don't! 😆 Yeah, it does make him sound hot, LOL, yet even when this attitue changes he will still be as hot as ever, I can assure you of that!!

I'm VERY glad you added the distant relative note at the bottom otherwise I was going to be like...uhh???😛😕 Where are you going with this!😆😆😆I kind of realised afterwards what the implication of me writing 'relative' will have, so I quickly added the note, Heer is waaaaayyyyy distant, like Lallu's cousin's wife's neice or something, LOL!!

Her intro...and their interaction?? FABULOUS Z!!!👏 Hai...he's so caring na? *swoons* I want a prem! *stomps foot* anyways... The way you described his concern and his voice and the way she'd stare at him?? Seriously outstanding! 😃 Can't wait for more Z!! 😃😳 And I can't wait to see where these temptations lead! 😛😉 Awww, thank you, I am happy you liked it!!! Well it was his fault she cut herself, so he had to tend to her wound, hehe!! These temptations will lead to a place which you cannot even imagine!! 😉😆

Love you loads, I love you too, Zahra xx

Meera😳

Originally posted by: Mallu_gal

As usual.....i totally loved itt.......i just wanna know the whole storyy noww....i wonder whats gonna happen next......oh n thnxx for adding me to the pm list.

Waiting for the next updatee. :)

Alpha.

xx.

Originally posted by: sabzz

wonderfull !!!👏

cant wait to read more !😊

continue soon

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey, awesome update. loved it very much. cont.soon.
tc.

Originally posted by: shabo24

Harshad ki deewani - go study. 😆Hehe, okay mommy, I will go and study!! I deserve a break don't I? 😆

Great part - Roshni - there better be a part with her getting jealous of Heer. Thank You! Ummm, now that is an idea, if the chance pops up I might bring Roshni into it later, but I don't think Roshni will be able to face the Junejas after stealing from them, so I might not go for this!!

THANK GOD THEY ARE NOT RELATED! Holy, I had a heartattack and then I read the note at the bottom. LOL, I am SO glad I decided to add that note then!! 😆 I didn't think distant relative as a problem, but I realised afterwards so thought it would be a good idea to add the note!! Ooops, sorry for giving you a heartattack- Or am I?? 😈

The chemistry between them is already WOW! Loved the way you wrote it Z, amazing as always! Awww thanks!! You're so sweet!! You will see much more chemistry as it progresses!! 😉 Love Zahra xx

--shabz

Originally posted by: zaibun

wow great update heers entry cant w8 to read wt happens next keep it up

Originally posted by: vrinda16

Hai, Hey Vrinda!!

How can I thank u enough for ur generosity? I thought may be with ur studies, this ff won't proceed much for a few days but u r proving me wrong each time with these surprise updates. Awww, no need to thank me!! There won't be another quick suprise update though, hehe!!

Thanx for the PM. No problem!!

So, Heer entered?????Yaaaaaay. That too as Lalit's "doooooooooooor ke rishtedaar"😆

But my guess came right that she would enter as domestic help.😉 Yes you guessed right! 😆 Now we have to see how this 'domestic help' makes a place in her boss's heart! 😆

Now, who the hell is this Reena with whom he was busy flirting at home??? And I think Heer saw him with her right??? Just a random girl he met in a club. Ummm, you will find out if Heer saw him or not sometime later!!

So, in their first meeting itself, he caused her to cut her finger but also tended to it.So sweeeeeet. And she has created a lasting impression on him too😳Yes he did, he is very caring and possessive about things too!! 😉

Me, waiting to read how the story develops further & how she maintains her lasting impression on him & how he manages to create a lasting impression on him. You will see, she will hover in his thoughts just like he will hover in her thoughts!!

Looking forward for ur generosity to be showered like this on us in future too.😆😉 Well, sorry, but no generosity for the moment!! 😆 Will try to get the next chapter posted by next week! Love Zahra xx

Vrinda.