FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09)

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FF: Temptations

Hello forum friends. I am starting a new FF, although it will not properly start until the end of May, as I am going on a break from the forum for a month. So I hope my readers will still be interested in it when I get back!! 😆 Okay, so this is a short teaser just to give a small indication of the story, I hope it interests you and I will look forward to reading comments! If people want to be PM-ed when I update please tell me and I will add you to the PM list, but let me repeat- the first part will be up towards the end of May! 😳


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He smiled to himself recalling her sweet scent which was still lingering in the room, wreaking absolute havoc on his senses as well as his body. As he watched her retreating figure it took him all the energy he could muster to not go after her, yet he knew that acting irrational was not going to get him anywhere. Her rejection spurred him on further, as he balled his fists, even more determined to get what he wanted. He was not used to hearing the word 'No' and neither was he planning to get used to it, but maybe this was a good thing, he thought. He liked challenges, this would make things much more enjoyable and he was always up for a bit of excitement. It may be difficult, but it would not be impossible. If there was one thing he was good at, it was making women go weak in the knees. She would not be able to hold on to her stand for much longer, she would be powerless to resist him, he would make sure of that. After all, he was Prem Juneja. And if Prem Juneja wanted something, that something would be his no matter what.

Please let me know what you think of it- I will look forward to reading your comments! See you all in May!! 😃

Love Zahra xx

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Chapter One: Page One
Chapter Two: Page Four
Chapter Three: Page Eight
Chapter Four: Page Twelve
Chapter Five: Page Fifteen
Chapter Six: Page Twenty
Chapter Seven: Page Twenty-Five
Chapter Eight: Page Thirty
Chapter Nine: Page Thirty-Six
Chapter Ten: Page Forty-Two
Chapter Eleven: Page Forty-Six
Chapter Twelve: Page Fifty-One
Chapter Thirteen: Page Fifty-Six
Chapter Fourteen: Page Sixty-One
Chapter Fifteen: Page Sixty-Seven
Chapter Sixteen: Page Seventy-Two
Chapter Seventeen: Page Seventy-Seven
Chapter Eighteen: Page Eighty-One
Chapter Nineteen: Page Eighty-Eight
Chapter Twenty: Page Ninety-Three
Chapter Twenty-One: Page Ninety-Seven
Chapter Twenty-Two: Page A Hundred-and-Three
Chapter Twenty-Three: Page A Hundred-and-Eight
Chapter Twenty-Four: Page A Hundred-and-Thirteen
Chapter Twenty-Five: Page A Hundred-and-Eighteen
Chapter Twenty-Six: Page A Hundred-and-Twenty-Seven
Chapter Twenty-Seven: Page A Hundred-and-Thirty-Three
Chapter Twenty-Eight: Page A Hundred-and-Thirty-Nine
Chapter Twenty-Nine: Page A Hundred-and-Forty-Three

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I LOVE IT! *jumps up and down in joy* Just the way you describe the emotions, have me HOOKED! And the title is just fab *wink* Can't wait till May now!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm excited for this already, and the title makes me giggle! 😳 Fun memories with the show srk brought titled the same! 😉😛

Cant wait for the first part, and of course I'd like to be on the list! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I like it, hope to read more soon, and please add me to the list
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOVE it :) Cannot wait till the first part 😛 Add me to the list pleaseee.
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Okay, so I know I said I would update the first part in the end of May, but I couldn't help myself. I get really excited and impatient easily, so I thought I might aswell update now!! I bet Meera and everyone will be giggling reading this from me, hehe!! Anyway, you may end up disliking Prem in this FF, but that is how I have made him, you will end up loving him eventually though as the story progresses!! Anyway, here's Chapter One!! I really got carried away with 'temptations' by posting this- hehe- get it? LOL, okay that realy sucked, but oh well, enjoy, and please do comment!! See you guys in a month, and wish me good luck as I really need it at the moment, LOL!! xx

Chapter One

It was a warm sunny morning, the gently melody of birds singing filled the air and the rays of brightness shined in from the windows, disturbing his sleep. Groaning, he turned flat on to his stomach and sunk into the softness of his pillow. Willing himself, he got up, pressing his temples as a tang of pain shot through his head. He didn't remember much of last night, but one thing he knew for sure is that he had got a bit carried away. He had not refused the drinks that were being offered by the countless beautiful women that clung on to him throughout the night. There were two things he loved in life: money and women, and he couldn't live without either.

Disregarding his hangover, he unemotionally stared at the woman lying on his bed for a moment, smirking at how much of a success last night had been. He knew she would be gone by the time he got home, and he wouldn't even remember her, just like the others. After choosing his favourite black suit from the cupboard he made his way to the bathroom and ran himself a cold shower, he pushed his hair back and let his head fall back, closing his eyes and letting the cold water soothe the aching in his body. Wrapping a towel around himself he strolled out of the bathroom, the water dripping down his exposed chest. He got dressed effortlessly, polishing his shoes, and putting on his tie, and then made his way downstairs.

Walking down the stairs in his usual charming way he took a seat next to his father on the dining table and engrossed himself in the newspaper. Lallit Juneja stared at his son incredulously and shook his head, he should have been used to it by now but it still managed to surprise him seeing his eldest son indulge in such frivolous acts. He wanted to see his son settle down and start a family, he wished to see his son fulfil his duties, and most of all he wanted to hold his first grandchild. But he knew this was a long-shot, and his son was not going to change so soon.

'You came rather late last night didn't you?' asked Lallit, whilst sipping on his tea, unsuccessfully trying to plaster over the annoyance that showed on his face. Prem sighed, knowing what was about to come.

'Really? I didn't think so' he said simply, his eyes unwavering from the newspaper. A small smirk played over his lips, knowing what he had just uttered would irritate his father.

'So you think it was early do you? And was there someone with you? I thought I heard giggling' prodded Lallit. This was a regular occurrence, made daily since Lallit's wife and Prem's mother Gayatri had gone to visit her sister in Delhi. Prem saw it as a liberating experience, and this experience would always be questioned by Lallit the following morning.

'Dad- why don't you just say what you want to say and get it over with' said Prem, finally putting down the newspaper, and pouring himself a cup of coffee from the pot.

'Son, I don't like seeing you like this. I understand that you are a grown man, and you have...needs...but I think it is time you stop all this partying shartying and settle down!' announced Lallit.

Prem coughed through the middle of drinking his coffee and looked up to see a determined Lallit. 'Settle down?'

'Yes- settle down' he responded calmly 'It would make me and Gayatri so happy to have a bahu in the house- she would take care of the house so well- and most of all she would take care of you'

'I do not need taking care of Dad' said Prem. Him having to spend his whole life with just one woman was next to impossible.

'Well I think you do- you are getting older Prem- it is about time you think of finding that special girl and get married' started Lallit, already dreaming of his house being brightened up with the entrance of their daughter-in-law.

'I am getting late for office, we will talk about this another time...' said Prem '...or never' he muttered to himself, picking up his briefcase and fixing his suit.

'You can't keep running away from this Prem- once Gayatri comes back we will start searching for a girl for you' called Lallit's voice from behind as Prem neared the front door.

Pretending not to hear it, Prem turned to face Lallit. 'I might be late tonight, I have an important...meeting...with someone' he said and walked out of the door.

'Course you do' mumbled Lallit, letting out a big sigh. He knew once Gayatri returned they would together be able to bring their son to his senses.



Ooooh, so that was it- let me know if you liked/disliked it!! I am sure a lot of you will be thinking 'No, Prem you cannot be like that!' But yep, that is my story, different to my other FFs- hope you like it!!

Love Zahra xx


Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
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FIRST TO COMMENT! =]

I don't know what you are talking about. Franky, I love Prem in this one, all haughty and self-loving. Going to make it even more fun to read when Heer enters the picture. But wow, he seems to love himself a lil too much no? Can't wait for Gayatri to return so they can find him a wife!! =]

Good luck Z! Love ya!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg this is such a cute FF!!
Im dying to read next..great job!!
Prem's attitude is so HOT!
we all know that only one girl can tame him..lol
plz continue soon!
if your going to have a PM list - plz add me!
thanx
-Sadi*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mine! 😃

*unreserved*

I was giggling the minute I got your pm to be honest, only cus that's how I felt when I posted the preview of Never Fade Away! 😳 As for disliking Prem....I'm very hard sway like that...I usually don't hate him...ever!😆😆

Oh and the Temptation to write joke, was good! 😛😳 And ooh ooh Good Luck!! *hugs*

He couldn't resist money and woman? *raises eyebrow* This is going to be interesting!😆😆 Oh....okay...so everything I said in the first sentence or second sentence.....might be a lie....my stomach feels weird! 😳😛

You're making my emotions go haywire here Z!!! 😆 You......made.....him.....sound.....sooooooooo ☺️

I like Lalit here! 😛 He's being good! 😃 Or well WAY better than his son right now!😆😆 This line though...had me giggling! 😛 "you have...needs... "😆

So all in all, I love it! 😃 As much as it hurts me to see my Prem like that!😆😆😆

Love you loads Z! 😃

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Zahra! You're going away on a month's break eh?? How come I didn't know about this 😆 hehe? Anyhow good luck with everything dear! As for your latest FF, I've only managed to read the intro and its absolutely amazing! Well done 👏...I love it 😳 already!!
Will read the 1st chapter soon and comment back.
Keep it up!
Shafaq 😃

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