NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hery, sorry didn't comment before it self!!!
Great story so far!!! What i liked best about this one is the dialouges!!! They are so meanigfully written and being potrayed sooo well instead of sounding cheesy!!! Great job yaar!!!
I love Premeer, hope they stay together forever!!! Can't wait to see what Prem has in store for her!!!!!
Please update soon, and thanks for the PM!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Thanx zaibun..............Glad u liked it dear.............Ya even I hope the same dear................😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx vrinda16 .............Glad u read and liked both the parts dear.............Next part coming very soon dear.............I'm sure u will enjoy it too...............and all ur queries will be answered too..............Thanx once again dear.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx purplestar22..............Glad u liked it dear.............lekin itne din se where have u been?..............anyways..............thanx once again.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx blackdaughter ...............Glad u enjoyed this part too dear............and I'm sooooooooo glad u mentioned the dialogues..............bahot dimaag lagaana pada yaar...............and I'm soooooooooooo glad u noticed..............anyways Thanx dear for all those complements............I''m flattered and humbled..............Next part coming soon..............Hope u enjoy that one too.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Alright everyone.............Sorry for the delay............but I'm sure reading the part u all will forgive me.............and haan the credit for this part too goes to my little sis............u guys have no idea what I'm supposed to do for her in return..............anyways................Here's the next part..............

Preet smile saying—Haan Prem bhai main jaanta hoon………….mujhe bhi baujii ne hii bhejaa hai…………aapne sab kuch dekh liya………..toh chalein………….

Prem nods his head and the two make their way into the hallway……………

While the two walk in………..Preet thinks to himself-- Abb samjha Prem bhai……………subah se………..phone par kyun lagey hue hain…………..apni first engagement anniversary kii eve par bhabhi ko surprise dena chahtey hain………..ek romantic evening ka plan banaaya jaa raha tha……….sach bhabhi is soooooo lucky to have u……….yaar mujhe bhi kuch aisa karma chahiye……….apni hatti katti punjaaban ke liye……….bahot din se main aur Meher bhi kaheen baahar nahiin gaye………..(Preet says loudly as he walks away from Prem who stared at him cinfused)………….Meher………….vo main soch raha tha kyun naa…………….😊

Its quite late by the time all the guests have left…………….It was already quarter past ten………….by when the Junejas had retired to their room………….before which Prem asksed Lalit—Baujii vo…………Preet aur Meher kaheen nazar nahiin aa rahey………….😕

Lalit replies-- Prem beta tuu hii phone karke pooch le donon kahaan hain…………main toh bahot thak gaya hoon aur neend bhi aa rahi hai…………….

With that a tired Lalit leaves from there while Prem says—Jii baujii………..and calls up Preet on his cellphone…………while Her quickly makes way to her room…………..to change…………as she too had a surprise in store for Prem…………..a surprise she was sure would stun Prem……………..😊

There Preet and Meher r busy having a romantic evening at a nice hotel sitting together……..enjoying the lovely food………..and the beautiful music playing when Preet's phone rings………..he says—Jii bhaiya kya hua?.............actually bhaiya main aur Meher aise hii………bas yun hii………..baahr ek saath shaam guzaarney aa gaye………….Kyun kuch kaam tha……………😊

Prem knew his bro very well he says smiling—Achcha beta…………mera idea churaa ke……….apni biwi ko khush kiya jaa raha hai………..lagaa reh beta………….😆

Preet replies—Arre kahaan bhai………..aap jaisa koi kahaan hai…………I'm sure u have something even bigger than I did…………in store for ur love…………anyways bhai…………hope u have a nice evening (Preet laughs)…………😆

Prem blushes and replies—Tu ghar toh aa……….subah dekh loonga tujhe………..tu…………tu phone rakh……….😊

Prem smiles to himself………….and as he turns around…………what he sees………….makes his smile vanish into this air…………Prem looks stunned as Heer walked down the staircase………….🤪😊

She was dressed in a short white dress (similar to the one she had worn in green colour when Daljeet chachi had asked her to wear……….yaad aaya guys?..............)…………and she walked gracefully………..to where Prem stood just staring at Heer…………..admiringly…………….and dumfoundedly…………..Heer looked gorgeous and elegant in the dress………….😳❤️

While across the dining hall Maya and Veera stared at the two lovers in the hall in utter disbelief……………Maya almost screams--- Yeh tumhaare Prem bhaiya kiske saath hain………….kahiin unka kisi ke saath affair toh nahiin chal raha?..................🤔

Veera pinches Maya hard saying—What rubbish Maya bhabhi…………dhyaan se dekho vo Heer bhabhi hain…………….😲

Maya says surprised--- Abb main samjhi iss jaisi ladkii se tumhaare bhai ke saath shaadi kaise kar lii…………….I mean………..just look at her…………waise toh ghar mein seedhi ssadi ban ke ghoomti rehti hai…………aur yahaan………..hot bebe banke jaa rahi hai😆…………..(guys plz don't mind lekin bahot zyaada time lagaa inn do witches ke liye dialogues sochney mein I hope u enjoy them)…………….

There Prem and Hee stood staring at each other…………Prem just could not move his gaze away from Heer!................😛😊

The two rmemeber how that night………….Prem had put the coat around Heer aand told her--- Tum kitnii hii khoobsurat iss dress mein kyun naa lag rahi ho Heer…………itni jitni main tumhe dekhna chahta hoon…………..Lekin jis din isse tum dil se pehnogii…………uss din main………….dil se dekhoongaa…………….🥳

Prem walks upto Heer…………..as sharmatey hue Heer loweres her eyes…………….waiting for Prem to speak………..and wondering what he would say?..............😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fantastic job...!!!👏👏
well how is u r health.......😕
hope its fine now........😛
Ok coming back 2 the update....😃
it was Good....😃
sorry i was late 2 comment as i m busy these days.....😡
due 2 xams......😭
only pray for me 2 get very nice marks.....🤔
Above 90......👍🏼

Ayesha😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part lovelyyyyy part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yaar first of all...........All the very best to u dear.............I wish that u indeed meet ur target score................and I'm much better..............lekin pain abhi bhi hai.............anyways Thanx for those lovely wishes.............and Glad u enjoyed the whole thing..............No worry yaar take ur tim to read and reply.............Its ok as longas u reply...............anyways Thanx once again................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx sweta...............Glad u liked this one too dear...........Next part will most probably wrap up the one scene one shot............asap............😊

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