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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Thanx shantaus ...............Well I'm sooooooooooo glad u could actually feel all the emotions I tried to pen down.................and for those lovely complements too.................I'm sooooooooooo flattered and yet humbled too................Hope u enjoy the coming parts too................Next part asap..............and yaa.............I'm quite better.............hope to be fine by next week..............Thanx once again..................😊

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Thanx purplestar22…………..Glad u enjoyed this part too dear…………..yaa that is why?.............I was wondering where r u…………well……….glad u found out time to read and reply too………..and hope to see u around frequently soon………….Thanx once again…………..😊

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friendsforeverh

@friendsforeverh

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Wow amazingly written

Good going

Keep it up.

How are you feeling now?

Hina

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Ishita

@iditri

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: leothebest9

Thanx iditri''''..Wel I'm glad u enjoyed it sooooooooooo much yaar''''can't stop laughing naa?...........even I couldnot when I was writing this stuff'''..and sach pooch toh I cursed myself too for using this kind of language for Heer'''.lekin kya karoon these withches r like this naa''''..atleast I didn't call her a chuhiya!............The wasy Maya did it the ther day!...............I actually felt like let Prem listen to u both''''.and then he will teach u a lesson'''''.anyways''''.Thanx once again''''''.😊

Hay sheeba....really love the way u write....i wish u were the creatives really...LOL....and mayas lines were perfect...i could actually imagine her saying them and imagine her expressions as well...i wish they showed something like that....

u knw wat wud b the best....if in this current track while maya and veera are planning all these to seperate premeer and they see them becoming more closer and going out and stuff....😉

too good yaar...keep going...waiting for more....😃

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

oh..seriously mindblowing part ..awesome work..great narration..funny and sooooooo romantic at the same part..I loved it !!... great dialogues esp.that Maya one-tumhaare Prem bhaiya kiske saath hain………….kahiin unka kisi ke saath affair toh nahiin chal raha?..................🤔... 😆😆😆...update next part soon..hope you are doing well now😊..

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

completely romantic.. and u left us a cliffhanger. too

waiitng for the next shot....

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Yaar thanx to u all..............alag se reply baad mein karoongi.............pehle an important note..............

NOTE-- Since u guys r liking the stuff...........Plzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me soon do u want me to convert this into a FF.................Jaldi batao?...............😊

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Thanx friendsforeverh .............Glad u enjoyed the whole thing dear..............Hope u like the coming part too.............I'm much better............Thanx to u all ofcourse for all those Get well soons...............Thanx once again dear...............😊

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Thanx iditri............for all those lovely comments.............Yaa even I wish this happens.............ayaways sorry to keep u waiting for the next part...............its almost ready................coming soon..............Hope u enjoy that too................plz read the note too...............😊

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Thanx Bul3............Glad u enjoyed it soooooooo much yaar.............I can see it with those smilies u used..............anyways hope u enjoy the coming part too.............and yaa I'm better............Thanx............I should be fine completely by early next week............that's what the doc says................😊

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