NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ayesha24

Fantastic job...!!!👏👏
well how is u r health.......😕
hope its fine now........😛
Ok coming back 2 the update....😃
it was Good....😃
The 2 witches dialogue were ver funny.....😆😆
sorry i was late 2 comment as i m busy these days.....😡
due 2 xams......😭
only pray for me 2 get very nice marks.....🤔
Above 90......👍🏼

Ayesha😉

Originally posted by: iditri

omg...seriously awesome updates....I loved them...

the best part from ur second update was:

Heer smiles and says embracing Prem's face with her hands-- Jab mere Prem kii aankhon mein'''.mujhe apna chehra nazar nahiin aata'''..tab main samajh jaati hoon kii''''koi pareshaani ya koi baat zaroor hai'''.jisney tumhaari nazron mein basi meri tasveer ko chupaa deti hai'''..😍 sooo cute...I can actually imagine prem saying that....LOL

and the best part from the 3rd part was:

While across the dining hall Maya and Veera stared at the two lovers in the hall in utter disbelief...Maya almost screams--- Yeh tumhaare Prem bhaiya kiske saath hain.....kahiin unka kisi ke saath affair toh nahiin chal raha?..................🤔

🤣

sooo good....tooo good....waiting for more....

by the way how is ur health....do take care of ur self....😊

Hope you feel better soon.

Thanx sweetness4eva………..Glad u enjoyed this part too………….and for all those lovely complements…………I'm sooooooooo humbled…………to be honest I actually wish to see a sequenc like this in the show too………….and this scene is one of my fav Prem Heer scenes…………….glad u enjoyed it a lot and want to hug for it too dear………….and kaash the creatives actually let me take over toh bas it would be Prem and Heer only in the show…………..Thanx once again……………Next part asap………….😊

Thanx zaibun……………..Glad u enjoyed thw whole part and Maya's lines too…………..and u read things u didn't expect to……………….and u liked it too……………Thanx dear…………….Hope u enjoy the coming soon stuff too…………😊

Thanx iditri…………..Wel I'm glad u enjoyed it sooooooooooo much yaar…………can't stop laughing naa?...........even I couldnot when I was writing this stuff………..and sach pooch toh I cursed myself too for using this kind of language for Heer……….lekin kya karoon these withches r like this naa…………..atleast I didn't call her a chuhiya!............The wasy Maya did it the ther day!...............I actually felt like let Prem listen to u both………….and then he will teach u a lesson…………….anyways………….Thanx once again……………….😊