NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx Bul3...........Glad u enjoyed this one too dear...............Next part asap...........yaar my little sis is doing the typing for me today............she already did to update the FF..............abb thoda aur time lagega...........usse manaanein mein..............anyways thanx for the get well soon dear.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx iditri..............Glad u liked this one too dear...............and for those wishes for a speedy recovery too..............I feel soooooooooooo bad............I need them yaar.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx DECENT--DIYA ...............Glad u liked it dear.............and the dialogue too............sorry for the delay............lekin kya karoon as I just said...........meri behen ko phir se taiyaar karna padega............I'l update asap...........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Next part asap sweta..............😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heer is blushing even harder………..as it was for Prem that she got dressed in his fav colour saree…………and seeing him appreciating her that much…………….made Heer feel as if she was on cloud nine…………… but when she turns around………..she finds Prem staring blankly into nowhere…………and had a frown on his face…………

She says embracing his face with her hands-- Kya hua Prem…………Kuch kehnaa chatey ho?.................

Prem moves his head sideways…………in utter disbelief………….wondering how Heer managed to know him that well?.............

He asks her smiling-- Tumhe kaise pata chal jaata hai Heer………….kii………..main tumse kuch kehnaa chahtaa hoon?…………..

Heer smiles and says embracing Prem's face with her hands-- Jab mere Prem kii aankhon mein……….mujhe apna chehra nazar nahiin aata………..tab main samajh jaati hoon kii…………koi pareshaani ya koi baat zaroor hai……….jisney tumhaari nazron mein basi meri tasveer ko chupaa deti hai………..

Prem is all smiles…………he tells her-- Heer tum………..tum mujhe mujh se bhi behtar jaanti ho………….Waise………mujhe tumhe kuch kehna tha………..aaj………..baisaakhi ke function ke baad…………tum taiyaar rehnaa…………main tumhe kaheen lijaana chahta hoon…………

Heer asks him—Lekin kahaan Prem?..............aur iss tarah……….

Prem replies in a whisper—Sh…….abhi nahiin batta saktaa………..bas………..tum taiyaar rehnaa………….

With that rem asks Heer-- Abb neechey chalein?................

Heer nods and the two make their way…………to the halway………….where everyone was already present ready for the celebrations………….and were already busy in receiving the guests who had started to arrive……………

Lalit smiles at Prem and Heer who bend to touch his feet saying--- Jeetey raho…………khush raho…………Prem ek kaam toh kar beta……….zaraa peecheydekh aa khaaney ka kaam chal raha hai naa?............aur haan un halvaaiyon se jaleb banaaney ko bhi keh dena………….aakhir yeh to hiss tyohaar kii special mithaai hai…………..

Prem smiles saying-- Jii baujii……………

Lalit says-- Aur uss Preet ko bhi leta jaa……….bekaar mein idhar udhar gappey ladaa raha hoga…………

Prem nods his head saying—Jii…………he leaves fro there………..but seeing Preet busy doing his maskhari with Maya and Meher………….he leaves from there…………deciding not to disturb him………..afterall he was the entertainment quotient of any occasion in the Juneja house!.....................

Prem makes sure everything was being prepared in the backyard...............just as he is about to return………..when his phone rings………..Prem picks it up and says smiling--- Haan yaar……….thank u sooooooo much Rahul…………yaa……….we both will be there by ten…………and haan ………..Thanx for everything…………..I really want it to be exceptionally special for her………..theek hai main phone rakhtaa hoon…………I'll call u later…………..

With that Prem turns around………….to find Preet standing by the doorway and starind hard at Prem…………

The smile on Prem's face vanishes!............He fumbles—Preet Tu?!............Vo…………actually…………main………..baujii ne kaha tha………..

Preet smile saying—Haan Prem bhai main jaanta hoon………….mujhe bhi baujii ne hii bhejaa hai…………aapne sab kuch dekh liya………..toh chalein………….

Prem nods his head and the two make their way into the hallway……………

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Posted: 16 years ago
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The credit of this part goes to my little sister.............who did the typing for me.............Thanx dear..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Itney saarey views............no replies............😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx sweta.............Gld u enjoyed it.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hai,
Read both the parts & they were wonderful.
Am curious to know what's Prem's surprise for Heer. So, when are u updating the next part?
Has Preet heard Prem's conversation with Rahul?
Waiting 4 u to update soon.
Vrinda.

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