Bhav's Bookstore|Ruk Ja O Dil...[Pg 107][30/3] - Page 47

My Spot!

Seriously, I don't want to read it, knowing I will then be attending my next class....all in tears....Even without reading it, I can feel the tears coming....B! 😭 😭

Be Back....

Love:-Nonee

Backkkk....for a bit..

I cannot believe that they didn't get to make up before Preet (breaks down sobbing) died (broken sobs) Oh! That was so beautifully written B! So beautiful.....Thanks! I'm gonna be crying all time in Class now *bawls her eyes out* Be back later...

Backkk again...

This one shot is written perfectly B! There are so many things I love about it! Where to start!

Preet's face twisted, turning into a look of pure rage, that Meher had never seen before!
Wow! B! Awesome! And I loved the way your Meher stood her ground. How I wish the Meher in the show was like this. Somehow you always write exactly what I want to see happening! Awesomeness!

And I loved the "Oh! so it's perfectly fine if you accuse my brother of killing his wife?" Bravo B! Bravo!

She can't be gone, he thought, panic setting in. She can't be gone!
Goodness! Bhav! I'm psyched now! What a brilliant way to put it!

I love the way you've potrayed Kuldi's reaction! Brilliant! I had tears in my eyes...

Not commenting on the last part because it's making me angsty....And that last sentence....killing B! killing! I don't know whether I will ever be able to accept it. But we can keep him alive in our hearts, can we not! You will write more of him alive won't you????B!, otherwise you will have another death on your hands...I hope you know that!!!!!!

All in all, a brilliant one shot. The manner you write is so fascinating, i never think I'm reading, I'm just watching....And i've said this loads of times but B you totally rock!

Big hug:)
Love:-N

🤣 I don't even know how to reply to that. Mum drinks Coke when she needs to stay awake at night...

Well I was thirsty and I really wanted coke. I didn't care what time it was, I just wanted to drink it 😆

And now you can't sleep. 😆 Seriously, if you've got a copy of Great Ex lying around at home, go dig it up. I can assure you you'll start feeling sleepy just reading it. 😆

Poor CD! If he only knew his life's efforts were gonna be used in lieu of caffeine shots 🤣 🤣

@Ravjot: Hey! What is the time right now in C? 3 a.m.???? Shocking!!!!!!! Sweet Dreams....

Love:-Nonee
P.S. And this is what I am doing instead of getting my research stuff

Oh I am reading a one-shot of yours after such a loong loong time *sniff...I missed your brilliant writing Bhav!!!!

Edited (a bit) my spot!!!!!

Be back after this Class...

Big Hug:)

@ Handmaiden: No I don't have a copy of it lying around. But I wanna try going to sleep by 4

hey that was a great shot! wonder if this is how they will end preet also in the story !! but really hping that he is back after the leap! excellent work! hope u write more!

*sigh*.....