Bhav's Bookstore|Ruk Ja O Dil...[Pg 107][30/3] - Page 45

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
*silently takes the cookie and saves it* When I see numbers everywhere...I'll use the cookie to help! 😊
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5th person commenting nots so bad is it.

OMG it was AMAZING. All three husbands trying to do what their wives like😳 shoo cute

I gotta say Heers got good taste

I feel sorry for Preet and Kiran the most though.

Thnx for the ff

Love Lily
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Posted: 16 years ago
Good God people...I was pleasantly surprised that the Bookstore was already on page 63...Then I come and see that you guys are spamming it...
Welcome back Radz! BTW, I totally ignored your SMS last night and fell asleep...😆
To everyone else: I shall comment back soon! :D
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Originally posted by: noneeM

Me! Me! Me!
*Dances around the table merrily, happy to be first* 😆 *hands Nonee a celebratory cookie*
Me!ME!Me!
My Spot!
Off to read it.......*runs off*
Love:-Nonee

Awww, Honey B, that's the cutest one shot! And as usual, I only had to lay my eyes on the words and they just flew into action. Believe me, I could see them enacting the whole piece out. There was no need to read! You're brilliant B! Loved the writing!
😳 Thanks! Like I've mentioned a dozen times before, I sometimes talk out the dialogue to make sure it doesn't sound so forced and scripted, so I usually look like a nutcase when I write...and if I can't imagine it in my head, I scrap it. 😳
Heer's reaction about John and Kuldi was 😳 *Thinks about John in Dostana and drooooooooolllllllllsssssss 😳 😳 😳
John is hot. End of topic.
Loved the bit about Preet and his bruised ego walking off....*murmurs in a side tone....Don't worry Preet...Main Hoon Na 😳 😍 😆
😆 You'd love anything to do with Preet!
I don't know....but I really loved Prem in this one....he's adorable in this one....
😆 With the pouting and everything, right?
Oh! And I love your attention to detail....Kuldi brought in the containers, the subji bowl in one hand.....I love detail....Cool B!
First I'm a Honey B and then I'm a Cool B...😆
It was all so realistic B and so very well written! I loved it... 🤗 Thank you dear!
Loads of hugs! *hugs back*
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hehehe..that was a great story abt the guys and their bruised egos..i think i need to make some of my friends read this! lol.. great story! hope u write more!

😆 Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! The idea just popped into my head and I knew I had to write it, so I did! 😳

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I wanna go into detail because this was SO adorable it deserves detailed comments, but right now all I can say is that I loved it....the three guys were awesome! 😳
Hahah thanks!
And I wanna see Preet dancing like Hrithik! 😳 That'd be fun...Prem seemed vain when he was checking himself out in the mirror....but that's okay! 😉 He's allowed to be vain! 😃
I wanted to have Prem trying to mimic SK's look, but the way I wrote came out a little weird, but it kinda fit...😆
Thanks Bhav for this awesome awesome one shot, totally made my morning! 😃
Awww you're totally welcome! *hugs*
Love you loads,
Love you too!
Meera😳

Originally posted by: jessica18

That waz an awesome One shot!!!

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: ruky786

i loved it sooooooo cute
Thanks! 😃

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Originally posted by: shabo24

I watched Dhoom 2 yesterday. 😳 I'm telling you, we were separated at birth. *ignores the age difference*
*raises eyebrow* Riiiiiiiiiiiiight...Maybe we're just somehow in sync with each other...Hey, Meera, what happened to our connection???
I really, really, really, really, want to see Preet dancing to Dhoom 2 with that same step. 😆 It's like a craving now. :) I loved it, specially that part and Kiran doing push-ups. 😆 Poor baby. :)
Hahah thanks!
ahaha Premu!!! *pinches cheeks* You are cute - when you act like you aren't. If that makes sense....yea....I need sleep. :)
😆 Is it odd that it did make sense? 😆 I hope you went off to sleep!
--shabz

@ Radz: WELCOME BACK!! *dances too* Eh, you wanna go watch a play that the TSD alumni did? Yagnya co-directed it...
@ Nonee: That's okay dear! At least you're apologising...😆
@ Shabz: You have a basement?! No fair! *pouts*
@ Meera: Uh...why were you reading a phonebook?

Originally posted by: LilyGurl

5th person commenting nots so bad is it.
😆 Not at all! *hands Lily a celebratory cookie*
OMG it was AMAZING. All three husbands trying to do what their wives like😳 shoo cute
😆 Thank you!
I gotta say Heers got good taste
I think Kulraaj has better taste...In the John department...😆😳
I feel sorry for Preet and Kiran the most though.
😆 'Cause they got hurt right? 😆
Thnx for the ff
You're very much welcome!
Love Lily

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Posted: 16 years ago
I'm not one of those weird ppl who read it for fun Bhav....believe me! 😛 I had to do some work for my uncle...😔
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Ahhhhhhhhhhh...I knew you couldn't be one of those weird people who reads the phone book for no reason whatsoever! 😆
indiandoll89 thumbnail
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You know me well by now Bhav! 😊 as for our connection,....I don't know but I'll say one thing for sure...I miss it! 😔 I miss everything right now! 😔 Blah I hate coming to do random stuff for my uncle! 😔 (yes I complain...a lot! )
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Ah totally feel ya...I hate doing stuff for my boss...Which is why the moment June is over, I don't ever plan on going back there again. *nods solemnly*
P.S. Spam away! 😆
indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
I MISS my work right now....it was work even though I complained about...I liked doing...this is horrible, because it's my mama I can'\t even say no! 😔 Anyways I need to shut up....and sleep! 😔

No more spamming from me! 😊

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