Bhav's Bookstore|Ruk Ja O Dil...[Pg 107][30/3] - Page 49

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Posted: 16 years ago
...See, I knew there couldn't be three pages worth of comments! 😛
@ everyone: Thanks guys! Shall be commenting back in a bit!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi B! Just realised I've never ever chatted with you on a thread! Big big hug:) Love:-N
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Thanks a lot B, now I have a FF idea that won't leave me alone.
You're welcome!
*sigh*

You know what I thought about this. Thank God I have coffee to look forward to, else I'd be bawling my eyes out. I didn't mention this, but this bit was my favourite:

She struggled to breathe, realizing that she was crying.

That line, was my ultimate favourite. *sighs* Brilliant as usual Bhav.
Heh. Thanks. You had oreo fudge bars to look forward to too, but me? I have nothing to look forward to after the episode tonight. 😛😛😛
Love,
Radz

@ Ravz and Nonee: I shall be waiting for your edit! 😃

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

Oh I am reading a one-shot of yours after such a loong loong time *sniff...I missed your brilliant writing Bhav!!!!

Avi!!!! *glomptacklehug* Missed ya!
Oh man's that was pretty sad, and coming from a person who usually doesn't get depressed reading anything or even close to being sad, that's quite an acomplishment! I guess it was mostly sad cause I know that this could be a possibility..this exact scenerio in the serial..and loosing Preet is just too much to even tolerate but still...he shal live, he shall live right here *thumps on heart like tarazan with a trace of the index finger on my right cheek indicating tears.
Yeah. The probability of it happening is what makes it even more depressing. Preet will never die, not as long as he has fans that are staunchly against his demise!!! He shall live on in all of us! (Totally cheesy line, but yeah...)
yes siree, that was awesome as usual! I hope you don't go into a depressed writing state noe lmao! I loved reading your fluffed up stuff too! *giggles.
Nope! So not gonna go into a depressed writing state! 😆 In fact, I'm already working on a fluffy shot! 😳 Which totally reminds me that I have to write Shabzie's birthday one too...>.<
Missed you!!! Missed you tons too! *more hugs*
-Avi

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey that was a great shot! wonder if this is how they will end preet also in the story !! but really hping that he is back after the leap! excellent work! hope u write more!

Thank you! So hoping that he's back after the leap too...Preet is awesome and if anything happens to him I'm gonna just...die. Thank you! 😃

@ Nonee: Nope, we've never done that before...
@ Nonee and Avi: Geez, guys! Three/Four pages after the shot and I've only got 3 unreserved comments...Man you guys can spam! *shakes head in disappointment* 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Honey B! Edited my spot on page 66...Big hug:)

And Avi just disappeared on me *sulks* Hmmmm....eye candy just came back....smiles again....

Love:-Nonee
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Originally posted by: amu142

Oops I forgot about your comment! 😕 I'm sorry!!!
*sigh*.....
why do u guys have o rub it in yaar!!
Sorry...Heh...
waise hi Preet's death news is giving me nightmares...
Ugh I know right? My heart stopped in the episode where the police came to question Heer because I thought they were going to announce that Preet was...y'know...
and u guys hv to write such lovely FFs and torture me more!!
I'm sorry! Again...*hugs* 🤗
*sniff & sigh*

Posted: 16 years ago
Di, that had to be a shot that hit home the most. Just certain lines or mannerisms you used to describe the situation, you hit it bulls eyes. Especially Meher's feelings.....I'm about to reply to you PM, details there. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bhav....that was amazing....and honestly since I just woke up...I've got nothing else on my mind and so yes...I am crying...but just your writing evokes such 'real' emotions....I don't feel that I was reading it, it was like watching the whole transpire in real life.....

*claps*

I won't be able to edit it more than that...I'm sorry!
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Originally posted by: shabo24

Di, that had to be a shot that hit home the most. Just certain lines or mannerisms you used to describe the situation, you hit it bulls eyes. Especially Meher's feelings.....I'm about to reply to you PM, details there. :)
I'm so sorry for that, Shabz! 😔 Totally did not mean to do anything like that. I'm feeling so horrible now....

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Bhav....that was amazing....and honestly since I just woke up...I've got nothing else on my mind and so yes...I am crying...but just your writing evokes such 'real' emotions....I don't feel that I was reading it, it was like watching the whole transpire in real life.....
Good morning then! 😃😆 You're really crying? I feel so bad that I made people cry but at the same time I'm proud of myself. 😳
*claps*
*bows humbly*
I won't be able to edit it more than that...I'm sorry!
That's totally okay! 😊

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sourpuss


I'm so sorry for that, Shabz! 😔 Totally did not mean to do anything like that. I'm feeling so horrible now....



Oh my gosh. BD!!!!!!!!! It's totally fine, I'm just saying that's a good thing, it just hit BULL'S EYE! TAKE IT AS A COMPLIMENT DAMMIT! 😆 It was really, really, really, really, good. 😆
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Originally posted by: shabo24


Oh my gosh. BD!!!!!!!!! It's totally fine, I'm just saying that's a good thing, it just hit BULL'S EYE! TAKE IT AS A COMPLIMENT DAMMIT! 😆 It was really, really, really, really, good. 😆
Yeah...I....um...I get that now. 😳😆

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