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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: noneeM

OhMyGod!!!!!OhMyGod!!!!OhMyGod!!!!!! Sirens and sounds polluting the atmosphere!!!! Can hear my Mother shouting instructions at someone and can vaguely sense being lifted onto to something.....Is this how it feels to die!!!!! Is this how it feels when one knows one is going through the last few moments of life....The adorable face of Preet clouds Nonee's dying vision. Preet smiling at her...heart beats getting weaker....Preet next to her ON THE BED.....okay, that just did it! Heart stops dramatically! Nonee's dead.....crossed over to the other side of the Veil.....
Oh....my...😕
Holy Preet!!!(Thanks Shabo) What's this????? The ghost of Nonee is what it is....Silvery and shimmering (pretty as ever, he he:) and arm in arm with HER Preet! Standing above and looking down benignly at all the humans.....and trying to comment.....
Oh...kay...😕 You're scaring me, Nonee. You really are.
Bhav!!!!!!See, I finally died properly!!!!No more revivals!!!!!Oh!My!Preet! this is so mind bogglingly (oops) wonderful.....Oh! I wish I could fly to Singapore and hug you.....Oh! You totally made my day! (correct that......my days, months, year....)
Oh goodness! Um...I'm glad I made your days/months/year? 😆
Coherence is something I'm struggling for...As a human, it would have been hard enough!!! As a ghost.....well! And it's so difficult to focus with Preet next to me here and reading about Preet.....everything is out-of-focus..😆😆😆
I don't even know how to reply to your comments!! 😆
Hmmm....."apne boyfriend ko nahin"...."Curled up against Preet" "The love of her life" phrases revolve around my ears.....One question? Is it possible for a ghost to palpitate and die...again???????
I guess? 😆
"Preet kisses her forehead"*Nonee's Ghost Dies* (In the way that ghosts can die....new area for research)

Thanks Bhav, this is the best thing that ever happened to me.....for sure....it was actually worth being grounded just to be able to read this...Oh! For sure!!!!!! I don't know how to thank you, words fail me....you are the sweetest person ever...And I totally mean this! Thanks so very much! I love you!
Haha you're very much welcome dear! 😳
And Radz is so correct! I did die:) And I do love you even more:) (Which part did you not want*hmmmm* wicked glint coming into eye)
*backs away slowly* Uh oh...
Adi so does not deserve being part of the amazing SS. I shall read it with my horrible-brothers-who-should-not-be-named-deflector glasses!!!!!!
🤣 First PTGs, then horrible-brothers-who-should-not-be-named-deflector glasses...Where do you get all those glasses???
P.S. I wish the Cruciatus could have reached him! Even now, a mental Cruciatus would be nice. Why couldn't Mom and Dad have donated him at birth to the 'Creating Homes on Mars-Donate your kid today' Research Foundation??????
Awww...😆 I wonder that about my sis sometimes too!
P.P.S I just got back and have just some time left on my hands online! Yikes! I so have to comment on the earlier ones as well.....
Yay awesome!
Once again, B, I'm grinning ear to ear and experiencing adrenalin surges rushing through my body.....(Wait, does that mean I'm no longer a ghost....??????Maybe it was the kiss that revived me....hey Preet, come here, I say...😆😆 goes off to experiment some more....Insanity, thy name is Nonee😆😆😆 Okay, better sign off before Mom thinks I'm having too much fun while being grounded....
Thy name truly is Nonee...😆
Loads of big hugs 🤗

AWww! *hugs back*
🤗 Love:-Nonee (😆 I think this comment is longer than the SS 😆😆😆 B, you're the best!!!!!!
Yeah it probably is...😆
P.P.P.P.S: A and I are not merely friends....we're related*wicked smile* [Go Figure!!!!!!]

You two are so NOT related! *sticks tongue out defiantly*

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😛

*edited*

Aww Bhav! You're such a sweet friend, writing a one shot just to cheer up Nonee! *hugs for Nonee or rather...sends hugs from Preet to Nonee!* (That'll do better na? 😳)
Yeah it probably will...😆 And aww thanks! 😳 You did that too! ...I think...
Anyways--the entire scenerio was written really well Bhav--totally realistic and very descriptive enough to see it in my head! 😃😳
Hahaha cool! Whenever I write I try to play it out in my head, which is why I sometimes talk to myself while I write. 😳😆
The end had to be my fav bit though! 😳 Totally adorable and judging by nonee's reaction...she LOVED it!😉😆😆
Yeah...Nonee scares me. Severely.
Write more soon! 😊
I will! Got another one coming up soon!
Love you loads,
Love you too!
Meera😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

Good lord Nonee, breathe. 😆
😆 I think she needed that...
So cute, so perfect, so adorable. Me ish jealous. *pouts* Me wanna cookie. AND HOLY PREET! MEET WERE IN THE SHOW TODAY! LIKE A GUST OF FRESH AIR!!!!!!!!!
*rummages around* Sorry, I got no cookies. Want ice cream instead? OOOH MEET were so CUTE! Was it me or did it seem like Meher was a little sad that Preet didn't know how to romance? 😳
--shabz

@ Nonee: I shall reply to your comments on the other ones tomorrow. My brain's exhausted from trying to process your comment on this one! 🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: noneeM

My Dil goes.....Kulran....


Honey B:) That was awesome! I loved it. Kulran are so cute, this was so much fun to read.....loved the interaction, loved the emotion and the entire feeling, superbly written and a total pleasure to read! And 'chocolate dena padega kya😆 How chweet!!!!
Ahaha thanks! 😳
And, You've got psychic powers now....You have Kiran flirting with Meher just a few days before they turn up hand in hand on the Spa red carpet....Whoa!!!!!! Okay, tell me honestly, can you "see" my future with preet! Do you think we'll walk hand in hand and all that?????😆😆😆
I know, weird right? Um, no, I don't see anyone's future...😆 Sorry bout that!
Loved it! Big hug:) Thank you! *hugs back*
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: noneeM

Daisy Chains and Marigolds!!!!

Awwwwww......Awwwwww....Awwww....This one had me going Awwwwwwww all the time......
😳 Thanks!
Preet's making daisy chains for Meher.....awwww....
He totally wasn't happy about it though! 😆
Oh! This was totally totally adorable! Oh! Preet! Sigh! Why isn't he mine yet!
😆 'Cause he hasn't met you yet!
I loved it! How could I not! It's so adorably sweet!
Hahahaha thank you!
Big hug:) *hugs back*
Love:-Nonee (eeps, that's Mum driving in. Gotta go*disappears*)

Say hi to mum for me! 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

On my way to work today the song Love Story by Taylor Swift suddenly popped into my head. And along with that, so did the idea for this one! I think I'm psychic, by the way. I was just discussing Ash with Radz, and she popped up on screen. I am so awesome. 😎 I see potential for Ash-Rajveer or Ash-Harman, now that Maya's out of the house! 😆 Anyway, here's the story!

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Love Story

We were both young when I first saw you

I close my eyes and the flashback starts

I'm standing there

On the balcony in summer air

Who was that boy, Meher wondered, frowning. She hugged her doll closer to her, hiding behind her mother's dress.

The boy was doing the same, though he was hiding behind his father's leg instead of his mother's.

Meher tugged on her mother's dress. "Mama, who is that?" she whispered loudly.

Teji smiled at her. "That's Preet. He's Lalit Chacha's son."

Meher nodded. Lalit Chacha worked for them, which meant that Preet was a servant.

"Mama," she whispered again. "Will he come to my tea party?"

"Why don't you ask him?" Teji gently nudged Meher forward.

Clutching her doll, Meher moved towards him. "Do you want to come to my tea party?" she asked him.

He moved out from behind his father. "What's a tea party?"

A smile broke out on her face. "It's where we all sit around a table and drink tea and eat cookies!"

Preet made a face. "That doesn't sound like fun."

Meher pouted. "Well, you're coming anyway. Let's go!"

She turned and headed to her nursery, glancing behind her to make sure that he was following. She stopped and frowned, putting a hand on her hips. "Chalo!"

Preet exchanged a look with Lalit Chacha, who was hiding a smile. He nudged his son forward. "Jaao, beta."

Making a face, Preet reluctantly followed Meher, who skipped to her nursery. Finally, she would have a guest who would drink her tea and eat her cookies!

See the lights, see the party, the ball gowns

See you make your way through the crowd and say hello

Little did I know

Meher flopped onto her bed, tears flowing angrily down her cheeks. Thanks to that Preet-who-couldn't-catch-a-cricket-ball, she had gotten in trouble with Mama. If Preet had caught the ball she wouldn't have broken that window, and she would've been able to eat that chocolate mousse that Gayatri Chachi made for dessert.

She hated Preet. She hated, hated, hated him!

That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles

And my daddy said stay away from Juliet

And I was crying on the staircase begging you please don't go

A little tinkling sound came from her window. She turned her head to look at it, but from her bed she couldn't see the little pulley system that she and Preet had made. He had put a little bell at the top, so that whenever they used the pulley, she would know.

She got up and headed to the window, wondering what Preet wanted. She opened the cover that was on the basket, looking into it. An unwelcome smile made its way to her face as she saw the bowl of chocolate mousse and the spoon that sat in the basket.

And I said, Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone

I'll be waiting, all that's left to do is run

You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess

It's a love story, baby, just say yes

She looked past the basket, and saw Preet grinning up at her from the soft yellow light of the lamp. Her smile faded. She turned her back to Preet, folding her arms. She hated Preet, and she wasn't going to eat the chocolate mousse that he had brought.

In the garden, half-hidden by the vines that grew along her window, Preet rolled his eyes. He reached for the rope and shook it, jingling the bell.

Meher was not going to break. She hated Preet. Preet, who couldn't catch a ball. Preet, who nobody had blamed because they knew that Preet threw like a girl, so he couldn't have broken the window. Preet, who had brought her chocolate mousse as an apology.

She felt her resolve slip as her mind played images of her standing by her window, the bowl in one hand, the spoon in the other, her eyes closed in bliss as she licked the creamy dessert off the spoon, a smile on her face.

Just because she was angry at Preet didn't mean she had to be angry at the dessert, right?

She turned and grabbed the bowl and the spoon from the basket, making a face at Preet.

As she turned away, she spotted a piece of paper in the basket. Sticking the spoon in the bowl, she reached out for it. She held it up and read it.

Sorry, Meher.

She couldn't help the smile that turned up the corners of her lips.

So I sneak out to the garden to see you

We keep quiet, 'cause we're dead if they knew

So close your eyes

Escape this town for a little while

Meher sat between her mother and her father, half-listening with a small smile on her face as her parents discussed the joining of their family with another's. She had studied the boy and hadn't found him very interesting. He looked like an ostrich, she thought. And 'Harman' was a rather funny name.

On second thought, he looks more like a cross between a monkey and an ostrich, Meher thought. She bit her lip hard to stop herself from laughing. She amused herself so much sometimes.

She suppressed a sigh as the giggles subsided. She was bored here, stuck inside on such a beautiful day while her parents arranged her marriage, when she could have been outside, riding on her horse with Preet next to her.

Preet was fun, she thought, tilting her head to the side. She decided that he was the only one who could put up with her crazy plans that she more often than not dragged him into. She smiled, wondering what he'd be doing now.

'Cause you were Romeo, I was a scarlet letter

And my daddy said stay away from Juliet

But you were everything to me I was begging you please don't go

As soon as that thought had crossed her mind, Preet came into the room, carrying a tray of biscuits and cakes. His eyes met hers, and he stole a wink at her. She blushed slightly, smiling at him. He smirked at her as he set the tray down on the table. They silently teased each other, flirting with their eyes.

The air felt heavy as Preet left the room. Meher sighed, her shoulders slumped.

"Meher, do you agree to this marriage?" her father asked, turning to her.

"Hmm?" Meher blinked, looking at her father blankly.

He frowned slightly in annoyance. "Do you agree to this marriage?" he repeated.

"Oh. Um," she looked at Harman, who looked at her expectantly, a half-smile ready on his face. "I guess?"

Her father raised an eyebrow at her.

"Yes," she amended quickly. "Yes, I do."

Harman broke into a grin as Meher's chest tightened, leaving her wondering if she had made the right choice.

And I said, Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone

I'll be waiting, all there's left to do is run

You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess

It's a love story, baby, just say yes

Meher felt sick. She felt like she was about to throw up. She looked at herself in the mirror.

She was surprised she didn't look green. She was instead very pale, her lips painted red and her black hair pulled into a bun, loose curls framing her face, giving her a Snow White look. Her wedding dress was a creamy white, and she held a bouquet of pink roses in her hands.

She paced around the room, her white shoes clacking against the marble floor as she waited for her father to collect her and lead her to the altar.

Romeo, save me, they're trying to tell me how to feel

This love is difficult, but it's real

Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess

It's a love story, baby, just say yes

Meher had always known that she would get married to someone her parents would choose for her, so now that it was about to happen, why did she feel like she couldn't breathe? Oh, god, I can't breathe! She set her bouquet down and gripped the edge of her dresser, doubling over and gasping for breath.

Maybe it was because she had always thought her Prince Charming would be funny, charming, sweet. That there would be sparks the moment their eyes met. That when their hands touched, there would be electricity.

She had spent some time alone with Harman, and she hadn't felt anything like that with him.

She looked at herself in the mirror again. She straightened, composing herself just as the door opened. She turned to see her father stepping into the room, smiling at her.

"Are you ready, dear?" he asked.

Meher forced a smile and nodded.

I got tired of waiting

Wondering if you were ever coming around

My faith in you was fading

When I met you on the outskirts of town

"Does anybody object to the marriage of this man and this woman?" the pastor asked, looking around the church.

Meher bit her lip. She wanted to look around the church too, to find a sympathetic face, one that would object and save her from getting married to Harman. But she kept her eyes fixed on the floor.

"Anybody?"

And I said, Romeo, save me, I've been feeling so alone

I keep waiting for you but you never come

Is this in my head? I don't know what to think

"I do."

Meher frowned, looking up. She turned, wondering who had been the one to speak. She gasped as Preet rose from his seat in the back row. He made his way to the aisle.

"Meher, please don't do this," he pleaded. "This is going to sound absolutely crazy, but…I love you."

He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said

Her eyes widened. All of a sudden she could breathe again.

"I've loved you since the day you took me to your nursery and served me water and sugar and chocolate chip cookies."

She smiled, remembering their first tea party.

"Meher, do you think this duffer standing beside you – " (From the corner of her eyes, Meher saw Harman get ready to protest, but she hissed a 'shut up' at him before he could open his mouth) " – could put up with all the crazy things you do?"

Meher teared up.

"Please don't do this, Meher. You know you don't want to spend the rest of your life with this…this…"

"Fuddy duddy?" Meher offered, giggling as she remembered the phrase that Preet had used to describe all her imaginary suitors.

Preet grinned. "Fuddy duddy."

They shared a moment looking into each other's eyes. Then Preet reached a hand out to her silently.

Marry me, Juliet, you'll never have to be alone

I love you and that's all I really know

I talked to your dad, you'll pick out a white dress

It's a love story, baby, just say yes

A grin lit her face.

Both of them knew he didn't have to say anything; she knew what he wanted of her.

She turned to Harman. She thrust the bouquet at him. "Have a nice life, Harman!"

With that she gathered up her skirts and left the altar, running to where Preet was. She grabbed his hand and pulled him out, laughing at the horrified stares she was getting.

So what if she was eloping with the servant boy? Meher knew that everything was going to be perfect now that she was with Preet.

'Cause we were both young, when I first saw you

-|end|-

Eck. I'm sorry that the time frame thingie is all over the place. It was supposed to be set in the older times, something like HMT, but then the 'fuddy duddy' thing came in (BtVS FTW!) and the time frame just flew out the window. 😆 Somehow my endings never seem to come out right, but whatever. Hope you guys liked it! 😃

Love,

Bhav (:

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Posted: 16 years ago
I'm first *dances around wildly* yessssss!!!!!!!! *dances away* Okay, will read and come back.......Love:-Nonee

Backkkkkkk.....

This was totally adorable Honey B. (That they met when they were little.....always been a dream of mine!!!!!! There's a solution to everything! Puts on her PTG and 😍 )😆

I totally loved it! So cute! Read it over and over again:) Meet are so adorable....and you just write them so brilliantly Bhav, you are so amazing!!!!!!

"Finally, she would have a guest who would drink her tea and eat her cookies!".....Awwww, that was so adorable!!!!!

"Gayatri Chachi made chocolate mousse" 🤣

Awwww, they made a little Pulley system......How cute!!!!

Harman, the ostrich!!! the cross between a monkey and an ostrich!!!! 🤣

And the conversation in the church.....once Preet objects *sigh* 😍

The duffer and fuddy duddy bits cracked me up totally... 🤣 Poor Harmie.....I wanna refer to him as harmie somewhere 😆

And "I've loved you since the day.....cookies" 😍 This is the kind of thing I want someone to say to me some day.....(Let's think of all the boys I've known since I've been in pigtails.....hmmmmm, I think I must have dreamed of Preet when I was three....does that count????😍

Eloping with the servant boy.....Preeet!!!!! I'd elope tomorrow if he'd agree......maybe I should focus on a really strong confunding love potion here.....(Now, whom can I test it on*mind working wickedly and on an overdrive*)

Loads of hugs:)
Love:-Nonee
Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
HI,
Well im new on this forum......this is the first tym im writing something about ur work,but i hv been reading ur stuff for quite sumtime......I am a die hard Meet fan n just love ur Meet oneshots...Dey r just amazing.....Do continue writing more of them........
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Posted: 16 years ago
My spot! 😳

*edited*

My comment's going to be kinda short now--I don't wanna start talking crap in this stupid mood!😊

Anyways--it was just so adorable! 😳 I love the simplicity in the way you wrote it! 😊 The song itself is just so nice and with Meet it makes it even better! 😳

Sorry Bhav for this crap comment--but you've got to know I loved it! 😳

Love you loads,

Meera
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey bhav! omg ive been so busy so just catching up now..😊..this one shot was soo cutee..meher as a lil girl n preet as a shy boy awww😳 so cute😉 ahahaa the way u described harman..a cross between a monkey and an ostrich WOW😆 that srsly made me laugh soo muchh...poor guy..😆 actually poor meher😆 lol..the ending was...sighh😳..so beautiful..her running to him..aww one of my fav endings...reminded me of kat running to akshay in namastey london😆😳 i love that movie😛 anywayss great one shot thanks!...-karen😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Loved this so much!
Aww mini Meet were so cute Loved how Meher described Harman 😆
I could totally imagine Meher running away from Harman and towards Preet 😆
Thanx for the really entertaining one shot
Edited by Aaliyah01 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
Ugh, how am I supposed to study now. Fantastic dude, and classic - Lalit Juneja a servant. 🤣 *goes to read with her PTG's*
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Posted: 16 years ago
Updated my crap comment! 😊

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