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Posted: 16 years ago

Guess who's back with another surprise one-shot! This one's for a friend who had a really, really bad day yesterday, and I wanted to give her a different perspective on her situation, so I wrote a little something to cheer her up, and knowing her? She's gonna be sooooooo cheered up! 😆 I have a habit of leaving the girl's name till the end, but today I figured it'd work better this way. So enjoy!

-||-

Chup Chup Ke

Nonee sighed in frustration, glaring at her ceiling. She couldn't believe she had gotten grounded. She silently threw the Unforgivable Curses at her brother, wishing yet again she was an only child.

She sat up on her bed, looking around for a pillow to hug. She reached behind her and pulled her pillow out from behind her. She hugged it, burying her face in the polka-dotted pillowcase.

Well, if she was grounded, she might as well make the most of things. She got up and headed to her desk. She picked up her file, staring at her paper. The mere sight of it repulsed her, and she tossed it back down to her desk. She sighed again and returned to her bed. She grabbed a book from her bedside table and flopped down on her bed, belly down, and began reading.

Her phone buzzed, startling her. She frowned, wondering who it could be. She smiled seeing her best friend Aradhna's name there. She opened the text message.

I'm bored. Let's go watch a movie! :D

She sighed. Her fingers keyed out a reply in seconds, and she hit 'send'.

Sorry, Radz. Grounded. :(

She returned her attention to her book, but the words swam in front of her eyes. She closed her book just as her phone buzzed again.

Aww…Adi again? You wanna talk about it?

Nonee made a face.

No, I'm fine. I hate Adi though. He's a stupid icky boy. :P

Radz was probably laughing over that, Nonee thought as she turned to stare at the ceiling again. I'm bored.

-||-

Nonee's phone buzzed right next to her ear, startling her. She sat up, rubbing her eyes. When had she fallen asleep?

Her phone continued to buzz, and a flustered Nonee patted her bed, looking for it. Her hand closed around it, and she picked it up. She smiled at the name on the screen.

"Hello?"

"Nonee, kahaan ho tum?"

"Maine tumhe bataya nahin ki I've been grounded?" she said dryly.

"Nahin, Nonee. Tumne apne best friend ko bataya, lekin apne boyfriend ko nahin."

Nonee rolled her eyes at the mock hurt in his voice. "Sorry, baba. I was angry. Tumhare bare mein bhool gayi. I'm sorry."

"Nonee, you're not supposed to be on the phone."

Nonee turned to the door, and she threw her pillow at her brother. "Go away, Adi."

"Adi?" the boy on the phone asked. "Tum phone par mujhse baatein kar rahi ho, aur apne bhai ke bare mein soch rahi ho?!"

Nonee rolled her eyes again. "Mujhe please confuse mat karo!"

He laughed. "Sorry. Achcha suno, come to your window."

Nonee frowned. "Kya?"

"Come to your window. It's an easy enough instruction, Nonee. Come to your window."

Still frowning, Nonee clambered out of her bed and went to her window. She gasped, nearly dropping her phone. "Preet?! Tum yahaan kaise aaye? Tum toh…you were…the restaurant…"

"Are you going to keep babbling, or are you going to help me up?" he asked, grinning at her, still on the phone.

-||-

Her door locked so no sneaky brothers could intrude on her, Nonee lay on her bed, curled up against the love of her life.

"…and then he told Mum that I flunked my paper, so now I'm grounded until I get a better grade." She sighed. "Why couldn't I have been an only child, Preet?" she asked, turning her head up to look at him.

He smiled down at her, playing with her hair. "Think of it this way, Nonee: would you have met me if you were an only child?"

Nonee laughed. "I can't believe you're Adi's friend. And I can't believe you snuck in here just to see me."

Preet kissed her forehead. "Just because you're grounded doesn't mean you have to be miserable, Nonee."

Nonee closed her eyes in bliss, nestling closer against Preet. Being grounded was one of the best things that had happened to her.

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Nonee, hope this made you feel better! 🤗 Remember, all is not doomed! And if it is, well, you always have us to vent to! 😆

Love,

Bhav (:

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Posted: 16 years ago
I never commented on the other one. Oh well.

Ho hum. Heh.

N's gonna DIE! *giggle* And she's gonna love you even more for this.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I never commented on the other one. Oh well.
😛 I didn't notice, actually.
Ho hum. Heh.

N's gonna DIE! *giggle* And she's gonna love you even more for this.
Oh FUDGE. 😕 Why the heck did I not think of that?! 😕😕
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
OhMyGod!!!!!OhMyGod!!!!OhMyGod!!!!!! Sirens and sounds polluting the atmosphere!!!! Can hear my Mother shouting instructions at someone and can vaguely sense being lifted onto to something.....Is this how it feels to die!!!!! Is this how it feels when one knows one is going through the last few moments of life....The adorable face of Preet clouds Nonee's dying vision. Preet smiling at her...heart beats getting weaker....Preet next to her ON THE BED.....okay, that just did it! Heart stops dramatically! Nonee's dead.....crossed over to the other side of the Veil.....

Holy Preet!!!(Thanks Shabo) What's this????? The ghost of Nonee is what it is....Silvery and shimmering (pretty as ever, he he:) and arm in arm with HER Preet! Standing above and looking down benignly at all the humans.....and trying to comment.....

Bhav!!!!!!See, I finally died properly!!!!No more revivals!!!!!Oh!My!Preet! this is so mind bogglingly (oops) wonderful.....Oh! I wish I could fly to Singapore and hug you.....Oh! You totally made my day! (correct that......my days, months, year....)

Coherence is something I'm struggling for...As a human, it would have been hard enough!!! As a ghost.....well! And it's so difficult to focus with Preet next to me here and reading about Preet.....everything is out-of-focus..😆😆😆

Hmmm....."apne boyfriend ko nahin"...."Curled up against Preet" "The love of her life" phrases revolve around my ears.....One question? Is it possible for a ghost to palpitate and die...again???????

"Preet kisses her forehead"*Nonee's Ghost Dies* (In the way that ghosts can die....new area for research)

Thanks Bhav, this is the best thing that ever happened to me.....for sure....it was actually worth being grounded just to be able to read this...Oh! For sure!!!!!! I don't know how to thank you, words fail me....you are the sweetest person ever...And I totally mean this! Thanks so very much! I love you!

And Radz is so correct! I did die:) And I do love you even more:) (Which part did you not want*hmmmm* wicked glint coming into eye)

Adi so does not deserve being part of the amazing SS. I shall read it with my horrible-brothers-who-should-not-be-named-deflector glasses!!!!!!

P.S. I wish the Cruciatus could have reached him! Even now, a mental Cruciatus would be nice. Why couldn't Mom and Dad have donated him at birth to the 'Creating Homes on Mars-Donate your kid today' Research Foundation??????

P.P.S I just got back and have just some time left on my hands online! Yikes! I so have to comment on the earlier ones as well.....

Once again, B, I'm grinning ear to ear and experiencing adrenalin surges rushing through my body.....(Wait, does that mean I'm no longer a ghost....??????Maybe it was the kiss that revived me....hey Preet, come here, I say...😆😆 goes off to experiment some more....Insanity, thy name is Nonee😆😆😆 Okay, better sign off before Mom thinks I'm having too much fun while being grounded....

Loads of big hugs 🤗


🤗 Love:-Nonee (😆 I think this comment is longer than the SS 😆😆😆 B, you're the best!!!!!!

P.P.P.P.S: A and I are not merely friends....we're related*wicked smile* [Go Figure!!!!!!]
Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

🤣 Thanks N! I shall comment in detail later on! For now I shall get Radz to explain to me how you guys are related. Although I'm probably gonna jump out of my window when she does. 23rd floor, anyone?

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Posted: 16 years ago
my spot! 😛

*edited*

Aww Bhav! You're such a sweet friend, writing a one shot just to cheer up Nonee! *hugs for Nonee or rather...sends hugs from Preet to Nonee!* (That'll do better na? 😳)

Anyways--the entire scenerio was written really well Bhav--totally realistic and very descriptive enough to see it in my head! 😃😳

The end had to be my fav bit though! 😳 Totally adorable and judging by nonee's reaction...she LOVED it!😉😆😆

Write more soon! 😊

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
bhangda!!!
I love reserving with dances and animal sounds!!! 😆
OMG, that was so adorable!!! Nonez must have loved it i'm sure!!! Awww, she was having a bad day and you must have made it all better!!! *hug* Aren't you sweet!!
Hehe he Adi ratted her out!!! ROFL!!!! But that means Preet comes for her!!! 😳 Haw they were on the same bed!?!?!?!? 😲😉😆 He makes her day so much better no!?!?? 😆 Maybe being grounding isn't so bad after all!?!?? 😉😆
Awesome one, i loved it!!! She did too!!!
Love you! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
Good lord Nonee, breathe. 😆

So cute, so perfect, so adorable. Me ish jealous. *pouts* Me wanna cookie. AND HOLY PREET! MEET WERE IN THE SHOW TODAY! LIKE A GUST OF FRESH AIR!!!!!!!!!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
My Dil goes.....Kulran....


Honey B:) That was awesome! I loved it. Kulran are so cute, this was so much fun to read.....loved the interaction, loved the emotion and the entire feeling, superbly written and a total pleasure to read! And 'chocolate dena padega kya😆 How chweet!!!!

And, You've got psychic powers now....You have Kiran flirting with Meher just a few days before they turn up hand in hand on the Spa red carpet....Whoa!!!!!! Okay, tell me honestly, can you "see" my future with preet! Do you think we'll walk hand in hand and all that?????😆😆😆

Loved it! Big hug:)
Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
Daisy Chains and Marigolds!!!!

Awwwwww......Awwwwww....Awwww....This one had me going Awwwwwwww all the time......

Preet's making daisy chains for Meher.....awwww....

Oh! This was totally totally adorable! Oh! Preet! Sigh! Why isn't he mine yet!

I loved it! How could I not! It's so adorably sweet!

Big hug:)
Love:-Nonee (eeps, that's Mum driving in. Gotta go*disappears*)

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