||Dhadke Jiya|| (SS) Epilogue Pg. 14 (April 3rd) - Page 7

YEAAAAAAAA! Things are heating up! Slowly...but surly...they are meeting! I loved how you showed Prem's sadness but at the same time, his determined feelings ish to win Heer back! GOOOOOOOOOO PREM! He rocks my socks are well! ☺️

Plans to meet and then they well get tingiling feelings and then they will reunite....ohh that reminds me of a song "reunited...and it feels so good..." lala ok I'm basically really high right now, so before i embarass myself further......TATA!

--shabz

I'm he-ere! (And I'm up at 8 in the morning again...*insane giggle*)

^^Thanks everyone! 😃

And uhem....Vikram's a spelling error, was meant to say Manmeet!

YAY, another update. Have I mentioned how I love the way you write this? There's some suspense as to what happened to H/A, but also this assurance that because she can sense the connection with him, in the end, everything is going to be okay.

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey another great update luved it so heers using her brain yep cant w8 to read more

Thanks a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesome

update soon

Thanks so much!😳

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Mine!!

Ok!! Here i am!!!! 🤗 All through classes today i only thought about this forum!!! I am sooo addicted (not that i'm complaining) 😉😆!!!!!!! Awwww don't worry, I'm totally completely addicted as well!😆

Great update!!! Loving this story sooo much!!!! It's so sweet how Prem when talking to Heer totally focuses on talking the way he would when they were together before!!!! I suppose it's to invoke those feeling and memories in Heer!!! YAY, he has a picture too!!! Thank god!!! I hope he shows it to her when they meet!!! Awww thanks!😳 Yup, that's the main reason for it!😆 Ahh pictures, yes he'll show her a significant picture!😉😳

Heer was so awkward as she talkes to him! Her mind tells her something, but her heart is telling her something else completely!! Um... by Vikram, did you mean Manmeet??? I'm geussing you did!!! oops! I did mean Manmeet, sorry typo!😆

Heer's heart is Prem's already!!! Loved that last line!!! I hope she gains her memories soon!!! Yaar ye Manmeet ki mystery is annoying!!! *pouts* 😆, i guess we just have to wait!!! Can't wait till they talk!! Cholly! But don't worry only 4 ish parts left!😃😳

Great update, hope you update soon because i am eagerly waiting!!! Will be up sometime tom!😃

P.S. if you have a PM list, please add me!!! Nope sorry, I'm not doing a pm list for this SS!😳

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum part 4
aww loved premeer convo
loved it every bit of it

Thanks Pooji! 😃 Glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

YEAAAAAAAA! Things are heating up! Slowly...but surly...they are meeting! I loved how you showed Prem's sadness but at the same time, his determined feelings ish to win Heer back! GOOOOOOOOOO PREM! He rocks my socks are well! ☺️ *teehee* Glad you like it so far! 😳 That insight wasn't in the original, but I added it in for Bhav! 😃 Ahhh what DOESN'T rock your socks?😆

Plans to meet and then they well get tingiling feelings and then they will reunite....ohh that reminds me of a song "reunited...and it feels so good..." lala ok I'm basically really high right now, so before i embarass myself further......TATA! *sigh* ahhhh hopefully....and yes I could tell!😆

--shabz

@Maddy: commented back!😛

Originally posted by: sourpuss

I'm he-ere! (And I'm up at 8 in the morning again...*insane giggle*)That's early Bhav!😆😆😆

Anyway, of course the second message was from Heer/Aditi! And typical that he would totally forget about calling home...😆 *shakes head* Yeh Prem bhi na... And awww it was so sweet that Heer/Aditi wanted to keep talking to him! Just one question though, because I'm still try'n'na pretend that I'm fully awake: who's Vikram? I probably missed something, but yeah...😳 Prem pagal hai aapni Heer ke liye!😆😆😆 you didn't miss anything!😳😳 Meri bhool thi!😆

Love,

Bhav (:

@Priyo: will wait!😃

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

YAY, another update. Have I mentioned how I love the way you write this? There's some suspense as to what happened to H/A, but also this assurance that because she can sense the connection with him, in the end, everything is going to be okay.

Waiting for more. *hums 'Yeh Tumhari Meri Baatein'*

Love,

Radz

Thanks so much Radz, aww really? 😳 I wrote it too long ago, it was my first try at suspense!😆😆😆 I'm glad you're humming that song!😆

Part 5

"I'm so glad you could come," Aditi says sitting up as Prem walks into her room.

Prem nods. "Me too. You look much better than yesterday. Are you feeling better?" He asks grabbing a stool from the side.

"I feel more restless to be honest." She tells him.

"Oh, why is that?" Prem asks.

"Your story of losing your wife kept me up all night. I was tossing and turning." Aditi admits.

"Did you find any similarities?" Prem asks. "And also, you do need to tell me your story now."

"That's why I called you." Aditi takes a deep breath. "Manmeet did tell me he found me around Neela point, in Ludhiana two years ago, then, he brought me to here to Mumbai, to help my let problem--and--"

Prem interrupts. "Leg problem?"

"Yeah, after he found me at Neela point he said that we were college friends. And I couldn't walk for over two months and so he brought me here to Mumbai."

"Okay, continue." Prem says, putting his chin in his right palm.

"Well, we came to Mumbai and he enrolled me in a week long meditation/healthiness program. And so I went and it healed me, and we got closer and so when he asked to marry me, I said yes." She says.

Prem just keeps staring at her. "Tumne ek baar nahin socha? That you could have a life with someone else? Somewhere else?"

"Aap--don't blame me please? I had no idea, and Manmeet led me to believe that he knew me from school. Main kya karti?" Aditi asks.

"That's not a valid reason." Prem says getting up.

"Nahin, please don't leave?" Aditi asks, trying to get up.

Prem just leaves without turning back.

"What just happened? I didn't want this meeting to end this way." Aditi puts her head in her hands.

Don't hate Prem yet! Please? I promise it'll get better! Do leave comments! Because this was the shortest part ever....I'll update again in like 8 hours!😆

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

its awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

awesomeeeee

Yea, more Heer-Prem scenes!! I loved it, finally, we get to see more interaction, and I'm guessing the leg problem was her falling of the cliff or something, and then that's what MM meant...

HEER?!?!?! Ullu! How can you just say YES??!!! Psht.. please...he must have done wudu on her.

Prem didn't leave. He wouldn't leave. He is going to get a memoryyyyy! I think....aha...let's see shall we?

--shabz

reserved!!! i get back as soon as i can!!