||Dhadke Jiya|| (SS) Epilogue Pg. 14 (April 3rd) - Page 6

hey
part 3 yay super nice
heer feels uncomfortable with mm yipeeee
hope mm tell the truth soon...
tooo gooood

Originally posted by: sourpuss

😃 Aww thanks! I LOVED the characters' thoughts! (Considering that's mostly what this part was! 😆) Boy you really are updating it every day! I'm gonna have to be careful about not missing it...😆 Anyway, don't have much to say today, for some reason, but AWWWW Prem left and Heer couldn't stop him! Gah Manmeet had better tell her (and us, actually!) the truth!

Till tomorrow!

Love,

Bhav (:

Thanks so much Bhav! 😳 Not that I'm reading this over, I'm tempted to discontinue it...😆 Awww yeah, I kinda wanna get it over with now! 😛 And yes you'll find out the truth soon enough!😃😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

You didn't wait for me to unreserve. 😆 You gave me no time. *sigh* If you are updating everyday, I'm only gonna write short-short comments. 😆 Awww sorry!😆😆😆 Short comments are fine though!😛😳

I love the story angle, it's so interesting. A/H feels such a connection already to Prem. And MM needs to tell her the truth. Why do I get the feeling he's working for Veera? I don't know, I just do. Teehee...I'm glad you like it....I can't stand it anymore though...I don't know if the story works!😆😆😆 Hmmm Manmeet for Veera? we'll see!😆

Cannot wait for the next part! Sometime tonight!😃

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great update i hope additi or heer figurs out who she relly is do continue

Thanks a lot!😃😳

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

reserved!

Not reserved anymore!!! 😆

Good update and speedy too!!! *cheering* I'm glad you're happy about it!😆😛😳

Heer seems to be already taken over by Prem!!! Love that because it is so natural!!! Hope Heer finds out the truth soon and fast!!!! Maybe?😆😆 I'm hope that happens too!😉😆

Premmer ko juda dhekna kiso ko bhi pasand nahi!!! I suppose this will only increase their love and strngthen their bonds in the future!!! I'm glad you think so!😆

Only Prem would wait so long and truly believe that nothing happened to his Heer these couple of years!!!! True!😳 That's why he never admitted that she died, even in the show!😃

Hope you update soon again!!! Can't wait with where this story is heading!!! I'll update tonight!😃😳

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesome

Thanks!😛

Originally posted by: shabo24

Yea, me and Bhav di ROCK! 🥳 I'm thinkiong about it!😆😆😆

ok, a basic filler-y type part but it really keeps you hooked! I loved how Heer tried to keep Prem back with telepathy but he didn't stay! Boo hoo! WHY NOT??!?!? Stupid Prem...he better beat MM up in the end....I love how you think he'll beat up MM....*shakes head* Violence is not the answer!😆😆😆

EWEWEWEWEWEEW!!! He kissed her! Becharrii Heer! Now I am in dire need of a MM punching bag. Oohhh send one to me too!😆🤬

--shabz

Originally posted by: --Pooja--

Great update Meera....
Wat is dis Manmeet trying to do????? I hav a feeling he's basically taking advantage of Heer's helplessness......😡
Heer feels a connection wid Prem.....Yay..

Thanks Pooja! 😃 Let's see if your feeling's come true or not!😳

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
part 3 yay super nice
heer feels uncomfortable with mm yipeeee
hope mm tell the truth soon...
tooo gooood

Thanks a lot!😃😳

Part 4

"If she had another accident, why doesn't she remember our life together? What should I do now? I can't live without her, but I can't go back to Delhi without her either." Prem sighs as he opens the door to his car. "Lekin main Mumbai mein kitne dun rahoon uske bigar?" His phone rings stopping his thoughts. "Private number? Who could it be? Shayad ghar se hoga. I can't talk to any of them right now though." Prem declines the phone call so it goes to voice mail. "Why was his life so mismatched? He loved Heer and she had loved him back, then what was it with Veera? Just for the sake of some property she had tried kill us? I just hope Heer can feel our love in her heart. That love was what kept me alive for two years."

At his Hotel

Prem enters his room and just gets the lonely feeling that he's experienced for two years. He had her; he nearly had his wife back. And then just like the accident he lost her, but at least this time, he knew she was alive and well. He notices his hotel phone flashing, and so he goes and checks both of them. The 1st one is from Preet.

"PB, aapki business conference to do din phele khatam hogayi hain. Aab abhi tak ghar wapas nahin aaye? Please call us back. Ma kabse aapke liye chinta kar rahi hain."

"Preet's right. I better call Ma." Prem picks up his cell phone, but drops it as he hears the second message.

"Hi, uh this is Aditi. The girl from the hospital. Mujhe aapse milna hain. I need some answers, that I think you'll be the only one to help me. And I'm sure you're wondering how I got your phone number? I got it from the hospital the nurse gave it to me after Manmeet left. Please call me back, I'll still be at the hospital for a week, so if you'd be able to either come by or call, I'd really appreciate it. Thank-you."

"Heer ne mujhe phone kiya? I better call her back right away." He picks up his phone from the floor, and calls the hospital and asks for her room.

"Hello?" her sweet voice greets him.

"It sounds just the same as it did." He smiles. "Hi Heer? You called?"

"Aditi. And yeah I did. I want to meet you again." Aditi answers.

"You don't know how happy you've made me by saying it." Prem admits.

Aditi can't help but smile at him saying that. "Will you come tomorrow? In the afternoon? Manmeet tab nahin hoga."

"Perfect, I'll be able to make her remember our amazing life together." He opens his wallet with one hand and sees their cute picture from one of the various puja's. "I'll be there tomorrow Heer."

"Bye then." She says.

"You won't say my name?" He teases.

"I don't feel like saying it yet," She explains.

"But you can say Manmeet's name?" He asks.

"I--uh--" she trails off.

"Don't say anything, I know what the truth is anyway, and I don't want you to have to lie." Prem says to her.

"Aacha to we'll meet each other tomorrow?"

"Definitely." He hangs up and smiles.

Aditi groans as she puts the phone back on the receiver. "Why does my heart want to keep talking to him? Aisa kyun lagta hai jaise main usse hamesha se janti hoon?"

I hope it's okay! I really hope it's not that bad, because to be honest, I don't think it's that good. Please do leave comments, if you think it's okay. 😊

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

OMG Meera *hands on hips* I go for a couple of days, and you updated 3 parts!!!!! 😲 xx

I told everyone Zahroo, I'm doing it every day! 😛

Oh well you didn't tell me!! *crosses arms* hehe!! Anyway, won't be able to comment though, only online for another hour, then I'm off I-F for another couple of days as I have loadssss of work to do, today I'm doing an all-nighter, so no sleep, only work, lol!! Will comment once you complete it though!! xx

Awww poor you! 😔 But yes that's fine with me! 😃😳

hey another great update luved it so heers using her brain yep cant w8 to read more

Mine!!

hey
awesum part 4
aww loved premeer convo
loved it every bit of it