||Dhadke Jiya|| (SS) Epilogue Pg. 14 (April 3rd) - Page 9

Nowadays I seem to reserve a lot but not unreserve... and I am really sorry for that... well.. then let me comment on the last three parts together... Heer though has a memory loss still believes in Prem and calls him to get his side of story... I just liked this part coz though her heart reognizes him though her barin does not...
so Prem came and Heer gave her side of story too... but He left in anger??? I really felt sorry for Heer and Prem at that point... but both had reasons behind it na.....

This manmeet I tell you... He is puri ki puri kaali daal.. so at last he spilled the beans and let the truth out... yaha bhi Veera ka deemag😡... so is this Manmeet's end of character or we'll see him on the next two parts too??? well... awesome SS and I love it a lot... and sorry again for not unreserving😳

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Mine! 😃

Unreserved!

So...you don't plan on making Manmeet come back with the papers? (By papers I'm assuming you mean divorce papers, right?) You can't do that! Heer and Prem have to be together! It's interesting how Heer kinda very readily accepts that Prem is her real husband and not Manmeet. In a way, I like it. It progresses the story a little faster...😆 And OOOOH two updates in a day? You're pretty eager to end the story, aren't ya? 😆

Love,

Bhav (:

Thanks a lot Bhav! 😳 Ahh he'll be back , I tried to make this a happy story mainly!😃 Awww yeah her heart has to connect to Prem right away!😉😳 Awww no....the next update will be now...and then tomorrow's might be a little late!😉

Originally posted by: purplestar22

I didnt even know that you updated i just read all the missing parts!!! anyways that manmeet better come back....Update soon

Thanks for liking it! 😃 He'll be back!😉😆

@Radz: It might be three parts, since I'm going to udpdate soon!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

Wow, Meera, you really want to throw this away no? =] I'm not throwing it away!😆

Loved it, loved it, loved it! I don't care IF MM forgave him that was still a horriable thing to do, I feel not so bad as for Prem but for Heer who is like going to go through an identity crisis. 😆 Awww I'm glad you liked it! 😃 As for Prem, he's trying to be as sweet as he can with Heer there!😃😳 awww yeah Heer's kinda distraught now!😆

Loved how you wrote it and now it looks like some alllllllonnnne time! *angel waala smile* You're right!😉😆😆

--shabz

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

mine! will be back later!

Here iam, here i am!!!! OMG, YAY!!!!!!! Heer didn't believe Manmeet and Prem never left!!!! Oh wow, sooo much happened in this episode!!! I guess i should have realized that Prem wouldn't just leave like that!!!! Prem couldn't leave like that!😆 I'm so glad you liked that Heer didn't believe Manmeet!😳

Aur Heer ko uspe pura vishwas hain!!!! I really happy, she looked Manmeet dead in the eye and she's like this doesn't make sense!!! Go Heer!!!! And seeing Premmer interact he couldn't help himself and he blurted out the truth!!!! Yup! 😃 My Heer\s good! 😛 Yup, and I had to make the story end pretty quickly!😆😆

Awww, even though Heer doesn't remember anything she trusts Prem so much!!!! I guess Manmeet is kinda redemmed in my eyes seeing as he didn't take advantage of her and geniunly cared for her!!!! I'm glad at least someone still likes MM!😆😆😆 But yes, Heer totally trusts her Prem!😃😳

Ugh, this Veera again!!!!! She should go die in a hole!!!!! 😡 But i'm so glad Premeer united!!!!! I hope Heer remembers everything soon!!!!! *fingers crossed* She's already in jail if that helps?😆😆😆 Hopefully!😃

Great update, can't wait till the next one. I'll try to check in four hours but i think i won't be able to so i'll check it tomorrow first thing!!! Awww no problems Maddy!! 😃

@Sweta: will update soon!😃

Originally posted by: munam_13

Nowadays I seem to reserve a lot but not unreserve... and I am really sorry for that... well.. then let me comment on the last three parts together... Heer though has a memory loss still believes in Prem and calls him to get his side of story... I just liked this part coz though her heart reognizes him though her barin does not...
so Prem came and Heer gave her side of story too... but He left in anger??? I really felt sorry for Heer and Prem at that point... but both had reasons behind it na.....

This manmeet I tell you... He is puri ki puri kaali daal.. so at last he spilled the beans and let the truth out... yaha bhi Veera ka deemag😡... so is this Manmeet's end of character or we'll see him on the next two parts too??? well... awesome SS and I love it a lot... and sorry again for not unreserving😳

Awww it's okay Priyo! 😃 I'm glad you like it...and yeah I love that about Heer and Prem, they're so connected nothing can seperate them!😳 You'll see what happens! 😃 Awww yeah, Manmeet? He's still here!😆 But don't say sorry about not unreserving!😳😳😳

Part 7

"Prem, tell me something about our life together." Heer says.

"Kya jaan na chathi ho?" Prem says putting his arm around her.

"Everything. How'd we get married?" She asks.

"Well, our parents had decided when we were both young that we were meant to be together, but look at this picture it might help your memory." Prem says. "Here's a picture." He goes into his wallet, and shows her a picture.

"Our wedding? That looks really nice," Heer comments.

"It really was a nice wedding, but we did have to face a lot of difficulties with your Daljeet chachi, kuch yaad hain?" Prem asks.

Heer shakes her head. "Nahin, lekin ek minute—was there ever a time that we were kicked out of the house?"

Prem nods frantically. "YES! Tumhe sab kuch yaad aagaya?"

Heer nods slowly. "Sab kuch to nahin, lekin kuch kuch yaad aaraha hain."

"But then do you remember what happened after we left the house? With the soap?" Prem says coming closer to her.

"Uhh—Prem, mujhe yaad hain, but can I be honest with you?" She asks.

"You don't have to even ask, bolo?" Prem says.

"I uhh—don't feel totally comfortable about letting this get ahead of ourselves. I do believe I am Heer, but I just need some time adjusting to our life, Is that okay?" She asks, avoiding his eyes.

"You're actually asking? Heer, in our relationship there is no need for this pretence. If you need time, I'm fine with that. Just having you with me, means more than anything to me."

"I knew there was a reason I loved you." Heer says to him.

"No other reason??" He teases her.

"Ho sakhti hain, lekin mujhe reason abhi yaad nahin aa raha!" She smiles.

"What am I going to do with you?" He says touching his forehead against her's.

"Knock—knock." Manmeet says coming into their room holding a file.

"Are those the papers?" Heer asks.

"Yes, our divorce papers." Manmeet tells her.

"Thank-you Manmeet." Prem says.

"You're thanking me? Tumhare jaga koi aur hota, then he'd send me to jail or something." Manmeet admits.

"Isiliye to mera Prem itna aacha hain." Heer says touching Prem's cheek, then she bites her lip.

"Kya hua?" Manmeet asks.

Prem just smirks. "Heer said something she did before."

All the thoughts on the KDMHMD storyline are some fact and some fictional ideas. Please do leave comments if you like it. Will do one more long part, where Premeer go back home, and maybe she'll be okay with the whole situation again! 😉

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

mine!

Awwwwwwwwwww! It's a happy ending! Next to open endings and sad endings, happy endings are the best kinda endings! Awww...that's all I have to say...Just...awwwwwww, awwwww and more awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

MEERU! *glares at screen in hopes that at the other side Meera is cowering in fear* Three parts? Three parts to comment on??

Thanks guys! 😳

@radzie: Sorry! 😳

Oh wow, last part already? Can't wait for the epilogue! =]

I loved it, you defined Prem and Heer's relationship really well with the Heer asking Prem all nervousaly and Prem showing her he can wait forever...so sweet...and I loved that part where their foreheads touched. ☺️

YEAAAAAA! Party at my house, Prem/Heer shared a look!!!! =]

Can't wait for the epilouge! I LOVED THIS!

--shabz

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

mine!

Ok, i must say.... my hands are so freaking tired of commenting!!!! But i'll do it all the same just for you!!! 😆 Awww but you can do short comments Maddy, I don't mind at all! 😛

YAY, the divorce papers are here!!! Sooo glad Heer is starting to remember things!!! Oooooh, she remembered the soup scene eh??? Does she also remember how hot he looked shirtless!!!! 😉😆 *totally wiggling my eyebrows here*!!!!! Yup...course she remembers it!😉😳 who wouldn't? *sigh*😳😳😳

Of course Prem would wait as long as it takes till Heer gets better!!! I'm hoping getting back to Jzoo will be a lot of help though!!!! Jzoo, def will help! 😃

Great update and can't wait till the last part!!!! Please have some phigoli!!!! 😉😳😆 *fingers crossed* Explain!😆😆😆 And then I'll see before I update!😆

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Awwwwwwwwwww! It's a happy ending! Next to open endings and sad endings, happy endings are the best kinda endings! Awww...that's all I have to say...Just...awwwwwww, awwwww and more awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

I'm hoping the epilogue's gonna show the family's reaction to Heer!

Love,

Bhav (:

Awwww thank you! 😃😳 I'm glad you liked this! 😛 Yeah...sad endings are better, but I don't like it all the time!😆😆😆 Your wish is my command!😃

Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose

gr8 job .. plz cont soon

Thanks Tina! 😃

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

MEERU! *glares at screen in hopes that at the other side Meera is cowering in fear* Three parts? Three parts to comment on??

You know what, forget it, you know I love this anyways, and if you don't I'll hit you over the head. I'll comment in detail for the epilogue alone, though I love this happy bit!

Love,

Radz

I'm scared!😳😳😳 I'm glad you like it! 😛 And don't worry...I'll wait for those long comments! 😃😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

Oh wow, last part already? Can't wait for the epilogue! =]

I loved it, you defined Prem and Heer's relationship really well with the Heer asking Prem all nervousaly and Prem showing her he can wait forever...so sweet...and I loved that part where their foreheads touched. ☺️

YEAAAAAA! Party at my house, Prem/Heer shared a look!!!! =]

Can't wait for the epilouge! I LOVED THIS!

--shabz

Awwww yeah, already the last one! 😃 And awww I'm glad you liked it! 😛 Teehee, I love the foreheads part all the time! 😃😳 And oohhh what times' the party? 😛

okay i'm having a memory lapse here...is this the same as the bmtd one...the whole veera/manmeet part...for some reason i dont remember that!

but great part yaar! UPDATE SOON 😃