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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Hai,

Just read the two parts of ur ff & take my word u have a new ardent reader for ur ff - me,myself.

After reading it the first word coming up in my mind is Amazing, simply amazing. A truly different concept,different atmosphere for the characters & a very impressive & detailed description of the story - every minute action,gaze of the eyes described very aptly that it just pulls the reader into it once he/she begins reading it.

I must say that u r a very good writer - loved ur piece of work.

Do continue & waiting to read more of this.

Bye.

Vrinda

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: purplestar22
awesome update!!!

thank youuu😃

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sugi77

exellent updt👏👏👏.i luvvvvvvvvvvvvved it soooo much.premeer's feelings u explained r lovely...😳.thank u sooo much for pm😊.

thankxzzz...glad u luveddd it!!!😛😛watch out 4 da nxt update!😳

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: bd670816
excellent update.
loved it very much.
thanks for the pm.

thnkz..glad u liked it😊

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey great update waz amzing so sweet and well beautifull well written i must say keep da gud wrk up n thnx for da pm

thnkzzzz...glad u liked ittt.....!!! watch out 4 da nxt updateeeeee😃😃

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
hey
awesum
very nice
tooo goood
thankz for pm

thankssss😃

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swathzie

@swathzie

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

amazing..so heer too has some feeling for prem...continue soon..thanks 4 d pm

niti

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sourpuss
Ooooooooh! This was nice! I like snazzy Heer (um, that probably isn't a real word, but it's the only word I can think of to describe her.....)! The hair salon scene was priceless, how they were both so enamoured with each other...And I have to say thanks for the background info on the characters, it helped!

Waiting eagerly for the next part!
Love,

Bhav (:

hey...thnkz again 4 convcin' me into continuin' dis ff!!! thnks for ur comments..glad u liked it...heer is a lil snazzy but *hint hint* she is gonna shock u even more in da nxt update, so watch out 4 titt!! 😳😳they r sooo into each otherrrr😳😳...iw as gonna release the BG info l8r..but deicded i shud now in order to understand the things they do and why they do it..wat had amde them like that..especially heer... !!! glad it helpeddd!!

watch out for the nxt parrrttt!!😊

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
hey this sounds very good!!! im loving the scenes ur giving us!! very nice..loving it alot!!!

Prem?Wet Hair?..Oh MY....☺️..nothin to say!! just express..☺️☺️..lol

update soon...and take care..

~nikki

hey glad u liked ittt!!! well, there r more good scenes coming ur wayyy😛 ncie to kno u luv itt!!😃

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Shika

@-Shika-

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Hi! I first want to start off by saying this story is really amazing! I can't believe Prem waited so long just to see Heer. That was very sweet of him to do. Though I really want to know what happened between them that they're not together. I'm excited for your next update already

Luv,

Shika

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