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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Hey guys.. i have updated part 2...i am lukin' 4ward to da comments!!

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

oooooohhh!!!! Looking good!!!! *thumbs up*

I'm so excited to see where this is going!!! The promo wasn't part of this update!!! *pouts*

Foreshadowing is making me wary, but i'm hoping at the end of the story our Premeer will unite!!! *fingers crossed*

Hope you update soon, can't wait!!!! Great story so far!!!

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

exellent updt👏👏👏.i luvvvvvvvvvvvvved it soooo much.premeer's feelings u explained r lovely...😳.thank u sooo much for pm😊.

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

excellent update.
loved it very much.
thanks for the pm.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

hey great update waz amzing so sweet and well beautifull well written i must say keep da gud wrk up n thnx for da pm

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

hey
awesum
very nice
tooo goood
thankz for pm

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

oooooohhh!!!! Looking good!!!! *thumbs up* Thanxzzzz!!!😃 glad u liiked itttt!!!

I'm so excited to see where this is going!!! The promo wasn't part of this update!!! *pouts* Itz gonna get interstin'!!! i promise the promo part will be in the nxt update!!!!

Foreshadowing is making me wary, ??????but i'm hoping at the end of the story our Premeer will unite!!! *fingers crossed* well u will have to wait and watch wat happens..it'll be a very short ff...not gonna drag itttt...

Hope you update soon, can't wait!!!! Great story so far!!! will try and update soon....thankxz again..!😛

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Ooooooooh! This was nice! I like snazzy Heer (um, that probably isn't a real word, but it's the only word I can think of to describe her.....)! The hair salon scene was priceless, how they were both so enamoured with each other...And I have to say thanks for the background info on the characters, it helped!

Waiting eagerly for the next part!
Love,

Bhav (: