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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

OMG!! wht an updt...its fantastic👏👏👏.iam😲 at last scene,didn't expected yaar.its vry vry interesting😛can't wait plzzzzzz continue asap....

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

Hey guys..I have updated part3!!! am luking 4ward to every1's views!!

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

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Originally posted by: sugi77

OMG!! wht an updt...its fantastic👏👏👏.iam😲 at last scene,didn't expected yaar.its vry vry interesting😛can't wait plzzzzzz continue asap....

yaya~~~ur da 1st one!!! wht a shocker rite!!!😆😆..glad u liked it!! i meant to shock u guyssss!!!😲..no1 prolly expected it!!!😃😆interesin rite???😲😲...😛

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Nikita

@HCDeewani

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

wow!!! i agree with sugi77, i did not expect her conditions to be this. this is really very very very intersting... i wanna noe wat happens next.. man ur a good writer, alot of different emotions, and aspects.. superb... update soon, and thanx for the PM!!

take care till then..

~nikki😳

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

hey great update cant w8 to see wt happens

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

balle balle!!! Mine!!!

Oh, i meant like you know bhangda............ anyways, moving on!!!!!! 😆

YAY, glad Prem's speech went wel!!!!! HeHe, he broke his glass first trying to bring attention!!!!! 😆

Wohoo, there first date!!!!!! Prem and Heer were both blown over by how the other looked!!!!! They look good no matter what they wear though!!!!

WOW, Heer only wants lust............ 😕 kinda confused here!!!! It seems the girl and guy have switched roles momentarily!!!!!!! 😆 The efect Prem has on Heer, poor guy he is in soooo deep already!!!!! I guess Heer doesn't want ANY commitements what so ever............

Well, great update and can't wait till the next!!!!! Hope it comes up soon!!!!!

(note to self: 5 done, 4 more comments to go)

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
wow!!! i agree with sugi77, i did not expect her conditions to be this. this is really very very very intersting... i wanna noe wat happens next.. man ur a good writer, alot of different emotions, and aspects.. superb... update soon, and thanx for the PM!!
take care till then..

~nikki😳

lol...quite interetsing huh?😆..hehe...thank u!! glad u liked ittt!!!😛😃