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~~~*JUST LIKE HEAVEN*~~~


hey guys! wel i have started this ff after the episode of 25th February when prem meets rishab n we come to know that hes gaurav sharma n nt prem... this is my first fan fiction so forgive me if i make any mistakes😊 i wanted to keep it small buh exended itt as i got a gud response😊 i really hope tht u all will like it and all the silent readers do let me know wat u think😊 feel free to critisize as i wld love to correct ma misakes😊


chapter 1: pg 1

chapter 2: pg 4

chapter 3: pg 7

chapter 4: pg 11

chapter 5: pg 15

chapter 6: pg 18

chapter 7: pg 22

chapter 8: pg 28

chapter 9: pg 31
chapter 10: pg 34
chapter 11: pg 37
chapter 12: pg 39
chapter 13: pg 44
chapter 14: pg 47
chapter 15: pg 49
chapter 16: pg 52
chapter 17: pg 56
chapter 18: pg 61

chapter 19: pg 67
chapter 20: pg 76
chapter 21: pg 80
chapter 22: pg 90
chapter 23: pg 96

chapter 24 pg 105

chapter 25 pg 111
chapter 26 pg 119
chapter 27 pg 127
chapter 28 pg 136
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CHAPTER 1
She stood here as if she had been stung'she didn't noe for how long she stood dere'she racked her shocked mind trying to noe what she was doing here buh got no answer'. Da falling of sumfing from her numb hand brought her back to her senses and she looked at da nameplate beside the door and realized wat she was doing here..
RISHAB RAMPAL

She recalled running down da driveway to stop prem before he did anything stupid' I have to stop him'I cant lose him not again' what if rishab hurts him?? The thought of it had her stumbling as she quickly made her way to da big wooden door which marked da entrance the mansion' I won't let him do anything to ma husband she thought determined 2 stop da obvious'. I wont let fate destroy ma life again' Thinking that she stepped on he threshold of da house buh wat she saw n heard had her stopping dead on her tracks'

''''

she numbly looked at prem as he shaired a wine of glass with rishab'. her prem was laughing with rishab and shaking hand with him? Was that really her prem she was looking at? Her prem would never hug da person who hurt his love, who destroyed his family, who took away everything from them, da one who humiliated her, used her, made fun of her love ...her love for prem '' no dis cannot be my prem. she thought as she walked in daze down da very familiar path from which she had came'. A deep hole filled her chest as she walked not knowing where she was going'. She let fate take her to da very place where it all started'

Moving in a daze, her face a mirror of grief and loss she dropped on her knees in front of her idol'' I always thought that life only played a dirty trick on you once buh it seemed like a joke now'.. everything looked like a big comedy show in which da punches were just not that good.

First she lost her parents and thn the man she waited for 20 years got engaged to her cuzn and wen she finally got her love, life took him away form her too'' esa kyu hota hai ke jab bi mei kisi se pyar karti ho wo mujse chin jata hai ?

Mujhse kehti hai tere saath rahogi mein saath sada

bohat pyar karti hai mujhse udaasi meri

dukh aur gham se aik purana rishta hai mera' isi jaga jab hum muje miley they to esa laga ke aik naya rishta banao gi tumare saath'. Hamari aik alag duniya hogi jaha sirf mein hogi aur tum aur hamara pyar socha ta ke 20 saal baad tum jab aao ge tou muje apna banaoge ''likin zindagi ko ye manzoor na tha '' tum chale gae kisi aur ke saath aur mei chali gai kisi aur aik saath ..likin hum phir se aik hue' hum mile kabi na bicharne ke liye kabi ..na aik duje se alag honey ke liye "prem heer ka prateek hai aur prem sabse zyada heer mein samaya hai aik hai prem aur heer aik hai" is hi is hi chehre pe haath rak ke tum ne kaha tha ke mein sirf aur sirf tumhari ho, tum kabi bi mera saath nai choro ge koi bi muje kisi bi kisam ki cho nai poh cha sakta likin ajj dekho aj phir se tumhari heerko zindagi ne aik tamacha mara'..aj uss shakal ne jisse mein duniya mei sabse zyada pyar karti thi ajj usi ne muje zindagi ka sabse bara gham dedia''she wept deep sobs racking her body..

tum jab chale gae they tou mein mar gai ti'.mar gai ti prem'.sirf aik zinda lash ti'' sirf hamare parivaar ke lie ji rai thi unko khush rakna meri zindagi ka maqsad ban gaya tha'aur aik din mene apne aap ko bech diya'' sagai karli rr se sirf hamare ghar ko bachane ke lie'

sab dokha tha '' sab kuch'' she looked at her surroundings wid blurry eyes n thought that why was it tht fate always brought her here?? She knew the answer.. dis place was very special to her coz here she felt prem who lived her heart in her soul in every drop of her blood..

" kia chate hai aap!!" she screamed at her god' why did you le me marry tht bas***d when he was nt my prem??? why???????why did you send him to me when he was not ma prem???? Why did you do this to me??? Itna bara mazak?? Itna bara??kyun mere pyar ka mazak uraya apne'. Kyun khelne dia us insan ko mere jazbat se??? kyun di muje aik nai moot??ji rai ti na mei ji rai ti na tou phr kyu umeed di muje? kyun bheja us insan ko meri zindagi mei jab wo mera prem tha hi nai? KYUN?? She cried in agony.. every word of gaurav rang in her mind'it felt like as if she had been whipped '' the days which were like a dream cum true for her felt like a slap to her face'. She looked at her bangle clad wrists'no I belng to prem only and nt to that man!! She brought down her hands hard against the rough floor n da voice of shattering glass filled da air.. the broken pieces had cut deep in her wounds n fresh blood oozed out'.. mein sirf aur sirf prem ki ho!! She thought wildly as she wipped her mang clean of sindoor. She tugged hard on her mangulsutra and broke it ' da black beads spread all over the floor... as she cried her heart out leaning against her idol..

that night the skies wept with her as if dey couldn't see her misery and couldn't hold her sorrow'.. da cold drops of rain did nothing to calm her to console her or remove her grief which seemed to have becum a part of her very own existence''she didn't knw for how long she stayed in da cold rain.. the blood from her wrists coloured da floor ...a dark red'' she didn't know why she felt dizzy'' no part of her body seemed to respond to her'' she felt a numbing sensation as a wave of darkness spread over her and she fell unconscious in her own blood''

precap: " here"! he woke up'' beads of sweat caressed his forehead as he looked at da dark room frantically trying to come out of da nightmare he just had'.

pls do comment n ill post anoder chap very soon😊

thanks for reading
love,
hiba
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG what a sad part.I can feel the heer's pain.I don't know what will happen to her.Good part.Keep it up.
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LOVED IT EVEN I WAS THINKING TO DO IT BUT U HAVE ALREADY BROUGHT MY THOUGHTS AS TRUTH SHAYAD ISSI LIYE MAA KEHTI HAI KUHLLI ANKHO SI SAPNI MAT DEKHO CHORRI HOJAYENGI bUT I LIKED UR CHAPTER
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wow it was truly amazing..👍🏼 i could feel wat heer had gone through and i wonder wat will she go through in the show when she knows the truth..
but u wrote it beautifully....👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow amazing.I so luved the way u wrote abt heer's sadness.Plz do update it.
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u r amazinggggggggg writer.😍 Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.

Edited by sugi77 - 16 years ago
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great part hpe somfin lyk dis hpns
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Intellienough

OMG what a sad part.I can feel the heer's pain.I don't know what will happen to her.Good part.Keep it up.

hey thnx alot dear em glad tht u liked it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: NNOOO

LOVED IT EVEN I WAS THINKING TO DO IT BUT U HAVE ALREADY BROUGHT MY THOUGHTS AS TRUTH SHAYAD ISSI LIYE MAA KEHTI HAI KUHLLI ANKHO SI SAPNI MAT DEKHO CHORRI HOJAYENGI bUT I LIKED UR CHAPTER

lolx awww em sori 😊 i jus felt like writing for da first time so thought y nt giv it a try....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

wow it was truly amazing..👍🏼 i could feel wat heer had gone through and i wonder wat will she go through in the show when she knows the truth..

but u wrote it beautifully....👏

awwwww!!thts very sweet of u!!! thanx alot!! i was so scared ttht ppl wont like it as its ma first ff buh ur appreciation means alot! hanx a bunch!!😊ill update another chap soon😊 do read it😊

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