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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
loved it. 👏 it really intense but awesome. continue soon. 😊

aww thanx alot dear em glad u liked it!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayushikdmhmd

Loved it.

So beautifully written.Very nice.Could feel Heer's pain.
Pls continue.

thnk u sooooo much!! i am so pleased that u guys r liking it!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow ur a gr8 writer yaar.................
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hey guys da next chapter is here!! i hope that u like it! i hope i'll be able to meet ur expectations! have fun😊
CHAPTER 2

" Heer"! He woke up. Beads of sweat caressed his forehead, as he looked frantically at the dark room trying to come out of the nightmare he just had'

His heer lying dead on the floor of shiv mandir, her blood surrounding her'

"No this was just a nightmare ", he told himself. Everything will be okay. Thinking that he stumbled out of his bed only to find himself on the floor as if his body had become immobile, no sense of feeling registered'

He felt like as if someone had taken out his heart and crushed it beyond repair leaving a gaping hole in its place. He felt suffocated' Groping in the dark he managed to walk towards the door clutching the place where his heart used to be but was not there anymore.. He made his way to her room stumbling now n than, as the pain was too much to let him walk straight with sure feet. Opening her closed door he wished from every core of his heart that she would be there sleeping peacefully but what he saw had him on his knees before he even knew it' the bed was empty' nobody had slept in it'

"Where did she go????" he thought frantically as fresh tears made there way down his already dampened face. His nightmare was coming true' he knew where she was' he got up not knowing what he was doing and grabbing the car keys, he ran out of the house praying that he wouldn't be too late'''

Stopping the car he ran out yelling her name, wishing her to reply''' but no response came, he ran down the uneven stairs' n in his hurry he missed his footing and fell hard against the floor which was covered with brambles grazing his arms as braced himself for the fall' blood started to come out from the deep gashes on his arms, but he didn't care, he ran with every ounce of his energy and than he saw her in a pool of blood.

" HEER"!!!!! He yelled as he ran towards her unconscious frame'" please heer utho utho heer', he shouted at her shaking her lifeless form...tum mujhe chor ke nai jasakti, nai jasakti tum!!" he cried out in agony. He removed her wet hair from her face as he looked at her sweet face, his eyes a deep red, unnoticed to him the blood from his hands filled her mang a deep red color''' " Please don't do this to me", he moaned hiding his face in her cold body. " I cant live without you, u cant leave me like this", he cried. Gathering himself up, He quickly checked her pulse and was relieved to find it there. It was very weak but he didn't care, she was alive and that's all that he cared for right now. Picking her up in his arms he made his way to his car not noticing the way his hands bled. He gently laid her in the back seat of the car and took the front seat. He put the key in the ignition and the car roared to life. He slammed his foot on the accelerator and the car shot forward like a bullet. Reaching the hospital, he picked her up and rushed inside shouting like a mad man to the attendants to take her in the emergency room. Thankfully the attendants quickly took control of things and took her in the emergency room. They insisted to him to get his wounds stitched but he declined fervently as remembered the way her wrists had bled.. The way she was covered in her own blood. His heer, his heer had tried to kill herself? Where did I go wrong he thought with a broken heart. What had happened which had forced her to take her life? But the doctor on duty didn't let him think more as they got him forcefully into an emergency room and stitched up his wounded hands and arms'

After an hour the doctors told him that they had saved her and he got her here just in time else' he shuddered at the afterthought. The doctors told him that she wont regain consciousness until 10 hours or so since a lot of blood had been lost and she was very weak. He agreed and signed the papers. She was to be discharged after 2 days. It was 7 in the morning when she was shifted to their room. And he didn't want to worry the family members because he knew that if he will than they will get worried and ma's treatment would get affected since she was making a remarkable recovery. So after having a cup of coffee at 11 in the morning, he phoned preet on his cell and told him that he and heer had gone to spend some time at their farmhouse since he hadn't spend any quality time with her after he had came back. After listening to preets teasful comments about him taking off with heer without informing them, he switched off his mobile.

He looked at her with a tortuous expression on his face.. All the machines attached to her body made him cringe with despair. He took his place beside her bed and gently held her soft hand in his and kissed it softly. He remembered the time when they had gone to the durga and he had almost lost her in the storm. But his heart was still beating assuring him that wherever she was, she was alive and that was all he needed at that time to keep going. " You know heer when I had that nightmare about you'" he couldn't say the words " I felt like as if I had lost you again but my heart was still beating and I knew that you were alive.. prem, heer ke bina udhara hai.. Hum do insan nai aik jisam ka hissa hai jiska dil tum ho aur dhakhan mein, agar dil nahi rehta tou dharkan bhi nai rehti", he said looking lovingly at her. " prem heer ka prateek hai aur prem sabse zyada heer mein samaya hai, aik hi hai prem aur heer tou tumne kese sochlia ke hum alag hosakte hai?" he asked her as silent ears ran down his face.

" Jab moot hamey alag nai karpai tou tumhe kisne haq dedia ke tum dil ko uski dharkan se alag kardo? Wapas aajao heer wapas ajao.. mein nai jee sakta tumhare baghair, nai jisakta" he pleaded, caressing her hand in his. " I need you sweetheart, I love you", he murmured brokenly as he leaned down to kiss her forehead not letting of her hand. Seeing something amiss he quickly got up and walked over to a table nearby and picked up a small bag containing a small box of Vermillion and mangulsutra which he had brought from home when he had seen the mark of his love his bond to her for seven lives missing. He remembered the way he had sneaked into their house at six in the morning when everyone was fast asleep to bring the spare mangulsutar of his mother and Vermillion' he didn't know what made him do it.. Maybe when ever he looked at her with sindoor and mangulsutar and red bangles, the marks on her of being his wife, he always felt immense pleasure that she was his, no matter what games fate played with them she was his forever.

He took out a pinch of sindoor and filled her mang with it, taking the mangalsutra, he lifted her head carefully so as not to disturb her sleep and placed it around her neck. Finished, he looked at her with a sense of pride and smiling softly at her, he kissed her forehead, her throat where the black beads adorned her neck and finally her lips'

" I love you Mrs Heer Prem Juneja", he murmured and taking her hand in his once again he closed his eyes, laid his head on the soft mattress and fell in deep slumber content that no matter what happened life cant her away from him.

Whew! There, all done!!!! A really long chapter I must say!😊 I hope I was able to please u guys n I hope that you'l like it. Will update the next chapter very soon till then ciao. Please do leave your comments and feel free to criticize. 😊

love
hiba

Edited by premeerrock - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: heeroshni

oh wow ur a gr8 writer yaar.................

aww thnx!! i have updated nex chap do telme whether u like it or nt😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey 'its really very nice and emotional.plzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon😊 .i can't bear😭 the current track of KDMHMD.updt asap yaar

-sugi

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Posted: 16 years ago
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excellent yaar.plz continue we cant wait plzzzzzzzzz update it soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg that was awesome!!! so prem wa sjust faking i hope the sam ething happens in the hsow!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugi77

hey 'its really very nice and emotional.plzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon😊 .i can't bear😭 the current track of KDMHMD.updt asap yaar

-sugi

hey sugi!awww thats sooo sweet of u!!thanks! i'll surely update soon dunt worry as em also hating da current track!!😡😡 wont disapoint u😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

excellent yaar.plz continue we cant wait plzzzzzzzzz update it soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hey awwww tthnks dear for ur compliment!!it really means alot to me!!i have finished writing the third chapter jus have to type it out😃 will surely update it soon n wnt disapoint u.... till thn enjoy da weekend😊
ciao.

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