Psychic connections: Pyar ki Dastaan; Chp 3, Page4

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Reserving this post for a short FF which shows captures the inner feelings (psychic feelings ) of Prem Juneja. This will start from where Preet goes to meet Gaurav.

Preet is driving back home with Heer Bhabhi, his thoughts still on what he just saw. Tears swelling up in his eyes, as he cant believe his Prem Bhaiya was there in front of his eyes. Prem Bhaiya Alive , his thoughts go back to the hospital when he saw the dead body. He knew that the body was very badly charred and they could barely see the face. They recognised the body from the clothes that Prem was wearing, from his watch and chain.
He looks at Heer, who has a dignified silence. Both Preet & Heer were awefully quiet on their way back home. Back home, Preet wished he could say something to the family, as they were taunting her. Seeing Heer quiet, he knew the emotions that would have been running in her mind. After all, he knew how much Heer loved Prem and Prem loved Heer.
Preet decides to go and meet Heer in her room,when he hears her talking and then what he has always believed in - that heer was doing all this for the family comes true. He is upset at her for not confiding in him and finding him worthy of her trust. Half Mad at her, Half Proud of her, he goes in and talks to her. After speaking to her and seeing how determined she was to marry RR to get Prem back in the house, he decides to go and see Prem once again.
When Preet goes to meet Prem, he realizes that this is Prem but with slight amnesia. He sees a knowing look that Prem used to give him, yet there is a distance, this guy seems to be keeping. He thinks that Prem has lost his memory and hence does not recognise him. He sees Prem tying his show laces and in one of his attempts to get prems memory back , ties his shoe laces for him, hoping it would remind him of an earlier time in childhood, when prem fell down durung a football match and preet tied his shoes laces in the field and helped him get up. Prem does have flashes, ends up getting a headache, after which preet tells him about Heer.
Prem wonders what is about Heer that he feel drawn to her, whenever he sees her and why on seeing her, he just wants to look into her eyes forever and not leave. Perhaps it was this feeling, that was scaring him and forcing him to go.
Prem leaves for the airport and upon reaching the airport, Jugni and Simrans words haunt him. He is boarding the flight and keeps having flashbacks of his encounter with Heer, GY3 and then Preet and he wonders on the connection he feels each time he sees them. He is about to board the flight when his eyes catch hold of the newspaper article on RR & Heers Wedding. His thought go back, to his meeting with Heer and the sadness in her eyes and the yearning in them. He is about to board the flight, when his heart tells him to go for the wedding.
Against his own will, he goes for the wedding, only to have a car crash and then land up at ther Juneja House. As he is being taken into the Juneja House, he has a familiar sense of deja vu at seeing the place again. As his destiny would have it, he is put in a room where he feels that he is been there before. His headache become stronger and unable to bear it, he realizes that he has missed his flight!
Chapter 2 of 15: Tomorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oooh I'm excited [:D/] Misty! Its always good fun 😉 to read something new. Do continue soon!
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Cant wait Misty...know it will be Gr8😃
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waiting for update😍

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waiting do update soubds great
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part will be waitingggggggggg for next.
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wow!prem's unknown feeling for his family. grt start yaar😊.expecting ur next part tomm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 1 was amazing. continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugi77

wow!prem's unknown feeling for his family. grt start yaar😊.expecting ur next part tomm

Thank You... It could have been better I know but its the best I could manage, specially when I am convinced that he was faking memory loss.😆😆 Have you read my other FF - Kuch Khaas Pal. Read that one too, I am sure you will love that too.
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Originally posted by: Ghia

part 1 was amazing. continue soon. 😊

Thanks. Will do tom.

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