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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey, thanks for the PM! awwwwwwwwwwwww preet is going to die.. in two months!!!😲😲

and is this rich girl.. Heer??? hmmmm and so wat is prem planning todo??? i really like this FF.. keep it up
!!! cant wait for the next!
~nikki



No problem Nikz...yesh sadly..unless of course...I do something =] Hmm can't give anything away can I? *winks* Glad you are hooked!

--luv shabz

Originally posted by: sadizzle

hey! i haven't gotten a change to read ch.1 yet but before i do so..i would like to thank you for starting a new ff!aww hun YOU ARE WELCOME!😆🤗

HSSH was an amazing ff..and i luv ur writing..aww thanks so much!
i so can't wait to read this..im sooooo excited!! 😛
PLZzzzzzz add me to ur PM list
Thanx
-Sadi*
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wow! amazing storyline..and i can't believe preet's dying!thanks you...and yes...he is...
hopefully in the end prem will save him..with or without heer's father's money!aha but without...there would be no story!!
i have to say this storyline is way different from HSSH..and im so looking forward to see where you take the story..Im hooked! Thanks jaan!!
plz update soon!
thanx (once again)😳

will do so soon!

--luv shabz


Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: srklover93

shabzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow what an awesome start!! loved part!!! awww...Prem is doing all this for Preet!! sho shweet!!! I loved the whole concept....like how he got the whole idea from the newspapar...very creative shabz!!!!!!! and lemme take a guess....the girl is non other than HEER!!!!!!!!!!!! *duh* LOL...well update soon!! ttyl!!!

Garima =D



garmizzzzzzzzzzzzz! thanks sooooooooo much!! yea hes the older bhai..he has to do this for his jaanu prret naa =] thanks so much garima!! hmmm is it that obvious...i thought i was being subtle...ahh ohh well! thanks i will!

-- luv shabz

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesum part 1
tooo goood
prem is doing for preet
thanks for pm



Thank you and you are welcome!😆
Yups, all for Preet!

--luv shabz

Originally posted by: Ghia

awesome update 👏...cant wait to know what is prem planning to do your ff has a lot of mystery to it 😆 so update soon



Thanks Ghia...that's the point😉😆Will do so soon!

--luv shabz
Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

haii, prem is shoo stalkish! hehe, so i am rite so far...*grins*aha so smart Rinki! *cookie?*

....WHAT?? preet....is....in the hospital?...😲🥺...tht sums up my thoughts on tht...grrraww I know this would be a shock to you...chooly jaanu!

i hope prem's plan wrks and he gets what he needs for preet...2 months? yea two months....too short?
heer seems to be having the happy perfect life...lets see wht it rlly is like...hmmahh wait till the next part...it really IS perfect...her best friend....*sigh*
i loved this prt, setting up the mystery and all
cnt wait for the next one...
thanks a ton!!
<Rinki>
-- luv shabz
*btw, love your avi*😉



Originally posted by: sonali09

im here!!!!! hope im not tooo late!😃 Heya sonali...nopes not at all!😛

*mouth open with shock*shabz yaar! what do i say?! seriously....you left me speechless! well actually i can say one thing and that is stalker!😆 lmao..glad you can still think :Phehehe prem staring at heer for a week?!😲 hehehe if i was heer...i wouldnt mind!😳--🤣I expected this comment....jsut not from you!😆😆 luved the part immensly!im seriouslyyy attached to your FF now! awww prem doing it for preet?! thats so sweet of him....luved how you described everything! i dunno why....but this kinda reminds me of kidnap!aha it should...thats where the idea took root from..still not sure what im going ot do with this though!😃 hehehe the 1st part was just AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! their are no words to praise it shabz! will be waiting for next part! :D hope your bf's grandfather gets better soon! will pray for him!aww thanks so much sonali! for the compliments and the wishes!!

--luv shabz


Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

wow this is so intresting!!!update soon



Aww glad you think so!😊

Originally posted by: Iqra238

HI Shabo!!! thanx for the pm!!!... awesome beggenning .... its very interesting and preethas only 2 months to live😭😭...... but wait that rich girl is heer......right??? can't wait for your next update!!!



hayea Igra,
No problem-o!😉
thanks and yes...and only 2 months! =[
umm weill i think its obvious who it is naa? ')
will post it soon!

--luv shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
*goes into thinking process* --- so I didn't reserve? *raises brow at self* OH... which reminds me. GUESS WHAT! I'm crushing on this guy in my bio class, just noticed him. Tehehe... most gorgeous eyes ever. ☺️

Alright lets get to my comment, and just to prove you wrong, I'm going to make it long. Hailaa... My Premu's a stalker? And woaa, he's been staring at he that much that he's getting tired of it, another shocker. I never thought Prem would get tired of staring at Heer. 🤔 I know I wouldn't get tired of staring into Ahmed's eyes. ☺️ Umm... action. Have I mentioned before how 'yum' this fic will be?

Okay i'm kinda confused here. "
The doctor stared back into Prem's shocked ones, after having dropped the bomb." Err is that supposed to be eyes. Becuase if its jaw then I wouldn't really blame the doctor. Teheheehe... *stops laughing blushingly* -- Umm.. who... whoo... who's that on that bed? Don't tell me. *stares at shabz in shockingly horror as she laughs away evilly*

Oh but before all that misery, i have to laugh at something. Gayatri, wearing simple clothes. 😲🤣

*coughs* Okay lets get back to my misery. Aww.... Prem loves P -- that man so much! Lets make him Lalit. 😈 Please, pretty please? Wait, that wouldn't work. Lalit's not 20 years old. *sigh* And apparantly their father's already dead. *double sigh* Eww... they ate from the dump. Err.. not that that makes a difference in how much I love the two. 😍 But I mean the girls better remember that before kissing him. Please tell me they never ate bugs *shivers*

Awww poor Prem and ... that man. They've been through so much, and you described it very well. Amazing job, really! Ok, is Prem really that cruel hearted for his brothers health? I mean he could go rob a bank couldn't he? Get a loan? Sell things!! Why go after the girl? I know why! Becuase he l-o-o-o-o-o-ves Heer. I'll bet he saw a pic of Heer thats why it motivated him further to kidnap her. Mauahahaha... eviil!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! ITS PREET!!! I hate you. How could you do this to Prat? Rinki's Prat? I'm surprised she didn't kill you yet. 🤣 But I guess you needed a motive for Prem's actions. You couldn't put Lalit on that bed too! And then in the end make him die, and I wouldn't really care. WHY PREET!?? -- *crosses arms and pouts*

Continue soon. *mutters something about Preet getting better or else.... * No its not a threat. 😆😆

kimz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
^^ HAH! *sticks tounge out at Shabz* That was long. I dare you to do something about it. See when I'm stubborn, I'm stubborn. *proud muh*
Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kimmu

*goes into thinking process* --- so I didn't reserve? *raises brow at self* OH... which reminds me. GUESS WHAT! I'm crushing on this guy in my bio class, just noticed him. Tehehe... most gorgeous eyes ever. ☺️ Aha I am so jealous, hot brown guy with sexy eyes......lala land here I come....😃

Alright lets get to my comment, and just to prove you wrong, I'm going to make it long. You lil....*insert curseword here* Hailaa... My Premu's a stalker? And woaa, he's been staring at he that much that he's getting tired of it, another shocker. I never thought Prem would get tired of staring at Heer. 🤔 I know I wouldn't get tired of staring into Ahmed's eyes. ☺️ Umm... action. Have I mentioned before how 'yum' this fic will be? LMAO....hopefully I'll be able to make this ff "yum" but hey Kiru, do me a favor, don't tell Usi about Ahmed😆

Okay i'm kinda confused here. "
The doctor stared back into Prem's shocked ones, after having dropped the bomb." Err is that supposed to be eyes. Becuase if its jaw then I wouldn't really blame the doctor. *stares, dumbfounded* You can not be kidding me! It's EYES...why would a doctor stare at a jaw....unless he went the Sumer Singh way...Teheheehe... *stops laughing blushingly* -- Umm.. who... whoo... who's that on that bed? Don't tell me. *stares at shabz in shockingly horror as she laughs away evilly*MUHAHAHAHAHA....you are taking this worse then Rinki...😆

Oh but before all that misery, i have to laugh at something. Gayatri, wearing simple clothes. 😲🤣
ily Kimzie!! *hug* You always catch the things everyone else seems to miss or not comment on, but yea...can you imagaine!😃

*coughs* Okay lets get back to my misery. Aww.... Prem loves P -- that man so much! *roll on floor laughing*Lets make him Lalit. 😈 Please, pretty please? Wait, that wouldn't work. Lalit's not 20 years old. *sigh* And also....getting money for Lalit's sake is not a good enough reason for Prem to do whatever he plans to do!And apparantly their father's already dead. *double sigh*Why the hell are you sighing??? HE IS DEAD! Eww... they ate from the dump. Err.. not that that makes a difference in how much I love the two. 😍 But I mean the girls better remember that before kissing him. Please tell me they never ate bugs *shivers*They used too, I was inspired from Slumdog Millionaire....but don't worry they will remember, IF their relationship even gets that far...muhahaha...and ew no.😲

Awww poor Prem and ... that man. They've been through so much, and you described it very well. Amazing job, really! Ok, is Prem really that cruel hearted for his brothers health? I mean he could go rob a bank couldn't he? Get a loan? Sell things!! Why go after the girl? I know why! Becuase he l-o-o-o-o-o-ves Heer. I'll bet he saw a pic of Heer thats why it motivated him further to kidnap her. Mauahahaha... eviil! Aww thanks Kimzie!! omgg😳You are such a god send kabab mein haddi, honestly....but yesh if he never went after Heer, there would never be a love story..but I hoep to shoe more....intesisty through this ff...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! ITS PREET!!! I hate you. YESSSSSSSSSSSS! ITS PREET!!! I love you. 😃How could you do this to Prat? Rinki's Prat? I'm surprised she didn't kill you yet. 🤣 So am I actually...But I guess you needed a motive for Prem's actions. You couldn't put Lalit on that bed too! And then in the end make him die, and I wouldn't really care. WHY PREET!?? -- *crosses arms and pouts* BECASUE, Lalit is not a good enough reason for Prem to kidnap Heer...Preet on the other hand is more then enough good reason!😃

Continue soon. *mutters something about Preet getting better or else.... * No its not a threat. 😆😆
Don't worry, even if it was....I don't care.😆

kimz
-- luv shabz



Originally posted by: kimmu

^^ HAH! *sticks tounge out at Shabz* That was long. I dare you to do something about it. See when I'm stubborn, I'm stubborn. *proud muh*



*plugs ears and singls loudle* LALALALALA! I can't heeaar you!! And no I've seen longer! *sticks tounge out* But thanks for such a Kirru comment!😉Now how about getting to that PM?😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
Shabo knows everything....*dramatic music while shabz peers widely at everyone around her*

muhahaha....😈....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*meera nods nervously* right! 😛

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