FF: Hostage [NOTE- page 34] *discontinued*

Posted: 16 years ago
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> Hostage <

> Prolouge <

I had no options. None at all. Being such a successful man he couldn't even help the apple of his eye. Couldn't help the life of their small knit family. There was no money he could use for personal reasons. The company would sympathize but would not be able to help me out financially. I sunk my head in to my arms, exhausted from racking my brains for days, just hoping in desperation there would be someway I could just find a way out dammit! Something, anything, at this point I was desperate. Seeing my mother walking around like she had somehow let down our late father, or seeing him in a hospital bed, needles coming out every which way. A feeling rose deep within me, chipping away all the softness that was left, hardening me to the core, frustration. As I rubbed my eyes, I caught the attention of the morning paper left on the hospital table. "India's Richest Man's Daughter Graduates" read the headline followed by a picture of a young woman, smiling openly for the camera. My eyes scanned the paper, words jumping out to me...rich...charity...daughter...loved by father deeply...India's Sweetheart...I crumpled the paper in my fist, my heart pounding. I had found a way out.


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--shabz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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MINE! *edited*
That's short *sulks* but I'll take it!
oohh, intriguing.. And considering I know the premise, that says a lot! 😆 Loved that one paragraph, and you've already proved you have a way with words with HSSH, so I cannot wait to see what you give us with this!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@radz: wasnt that an old FF? Mine 😆
hi shabo,
glad u started ur new ff so quickly, will look forward to updates, definately different concept lets see how you bring it together
tc
fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow shabz you started your hostage???? was waiting for it...lovely start and the thng's totally diff..cant wait to read the next updates and pls add me in ur pm list...
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@ Fatima Di: Oh, so funny! *sticks out tongue* It was the only thing I could type that fast!

Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Eeee Shabo! New ff! 😛😛


I'm very excited, and really intrigued after reading the first prologue! 😳

Obviously I want to be added to the pm list as well! 😳


Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

MINE! *edited*

That's short *sulks* but I'll take it!HEY! I should have been studying but I wrote this lil paragraph and the first part, so be happy!😆
oohh, intriguing.. And considering I know the premise, that says a lot! 😆 Loved that one paragraph, and you've already proved you have a way with words with HSSH, so I cannot wait to see what you give us with this!aha glad you think so!😃Awww you are too sweet!
Love,
Radz
muah!😆



Originally posted by: fj08

@radz: wasnt that an old FF? Mine 😆yup yup yup, Rinki's first ff!

hi shabo,hello!😃
glad u started ur new ff so quickly, will look forward to updates, definately different concept lets see how you bring it together hmm glad you are interested, hopefully I'll be able to do justice, I myself don't really know how I will shape up this story...
tc
fatima
thanks di!


Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: munam_13

wow shabz you started your hostage???? was waiting for it...lovely start and the thng's totally diff..cant wait to read the next updates and pls add me in ur pm list...



Yup I already started it...hmm "my hostage" I like the sound of that!! Thanks so much and yups added you!

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Eeee Shabo! New ff! 😛😛Eeee Meera! Yes, thanks for noticing.😆

I'm very excited, and really intrigued after reading the first prologue! 😳alalala....awsome!😃

Obviously I want to be added to the pm list as well! 😳*duh* Should have guessed! Added!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
loved the prologue
loooooking forward to read. plz add me to ur pm list
Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_girl

hi

loved the prologue
loooooking forward to read. plz add me to ur pm list



Hey! Don't think we ever talked before? I'm Shabo....you??
Glad you liked it...and yesh I added!😃

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