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Sadia87

@Sadia87

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

hey! i haven't gotten a change to read ch.1 yet but before i do so..i would like to thank you for starting a new ff!

HSSH was an amazing ff..and i luv ur writing..

i so can't wait to read this..im sooooo excited!! 😛

PLZzzzzzz add me to ur PM list

Thanx

-Sadi*

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wow! amazing storyline..and i can't believe preet's dying!

hopefully in the end prem will save him..with or without heer's father's money!

i have to say this storyline is way different from HSSH..and im so looking forward to see where you take the story..Im hooked!

plz update soon!

thanx (once again)😳

Edited by sadizzle - 16 years ago

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

shabzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow what an awesome start!! loved part!!! awww...Prem is doing all this for Preet!! sho shweet!!! I loved the whole concept....like how he got the whole idea from the newspapar...very creative shabz!!!!!!! and lemme take a guess....the girl is non other than HEER!!!!!!!!!!!! *duh* LOL...well update soon!! ttyl!!!

Garima =D

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

awesum part 1
tooo goood
prem is doing for preet
thanks for pm

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

awesome update 👏...cant wait to know what is prem planning to do your ff has a lot of mystery to it 😆 so update soon

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

haii, prem is shoo stalkish! hehe, so i am rite so far...*grins*

....WHAT?? preet....is....in the hospital?...😲🥺...tht sums up my thoughts on tht...grrr

i hope prem's plan wrks and he gets what he needs for preet...2 months?

heer seems to be having the happy perfect life...lets see wht it rlly is like...hmm

i loved this prt, setting up the mystery and all

cnt wait for the next one...

<Rinki>

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Sonali

@sonali09

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

im here!!!!! hope im not tooo late!😃

*mouth open with shock*shabz yaar! what do i say?! seriously....you left me speechless! well actually i can say one thing and that is stalker!😆 hehehe prem staring at heer for a week?!😲 hehehe if i was heer...i wouldnt mind!😳 luved the part immensly!im seriouslyyy attached to your FF now! awww prem doing it for preet?! thats so sweet of him....luved how you described everything! i dunno why....but this kinda reminds me of kidnap! hehehe the 1st part was just AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! their are no words to praise it shabz! will be waiting for next part! :D hope your bf's grandfather gets better soon! will pray for him!

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

wow this is so intresting!!!update soon

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Thanks all for the comments!🤗Will comment back soon =]

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iqra

@Snoopy-

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

HI Shabo!!! thanx for the pm!!!... awesome beggenning .... its very interesting and preethas only 2 months to live😭😭...... but wait that rich girl is heer......right??? can't wait for your next update!!!

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
mine! 😛

*unreserved*

Wow for Prem!😲 staring at his target for one week?😳You know you wish you were Heer😃

Awwww Preet's doomed to die?😭😭😭 you had to start it on such a sad note didn't you?😭 But aww that provides a better basis for why he's all set to hold her hostage!!😳HEY! I love tragedy, you know me...I had to start like this...not sure how it will end though....

Shabo, I know the comments aren't that long, but seriously...this was fantastic, you showed that he had a valid motive to do what he has to....I'm just hoping that it is the same person that I hope it is!!😳😃 And it can be a better continuation of "kidnap"😉😳😳 This name's better though...for some reason, it seems to have more of an impact!😉😃 Meera, shut up, like I have told Rinkz and Kiran a THOUSAND times, I don't care about length! Aha glad you liked it!

Love you,

Meera😳
--luv shabz

Originally posted by: happybrar
awesome

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: .xganga.x
Hey!
That was an awesome update!thanks!! =]

He only has 2 months to live??? *makes sad face* yups....

and he's after this rich girl....Heer?? you shall see!!!!!!!😆😃

Can't wait till the next update!

xXx

Sunayna

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thanks sunayna...glad you enjoed it!

--luv shabz