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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

wow!!! amazing part..totally different... Prem's doing all this for Preet???? and Preet has got only two months to live??? can totally understand the turmoil through which Prem is going through... life through the narrow gate is pretty tuff and situations like this compel people to leave the narrow path and follow the easy one... will be waiting for the next part... post soon😃

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Shabzie, you write suspense as well as you write tragedy! T

hat was absolutely brilliant! Prem's desperation to save Preet, and in a way his mother as well, could be felt so palpably! I'm wondering how exactly he expects to kidnap Heer, and how he'll handle falling in love with her. (And I cannot wait to see what you do with that!)

Love,

Radz

and am praying, everyday. Everything will be fine. Love you!

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Hello hello hello.

I come on IF and I get your PM saying you updated and I was like YAY!😃

Wow...staring at her for a week? He's like a stalker. Normally I'd find that creepy but since Prem's being the stalker this time, I think it's cool.

Omg I feel so bad for him...Poor thing had to go through a lot and now Preet's dying... No!! I can't believe he's resorting to this to get money but I guess theres nothing else he can do....I'm guessing the girl is Heer? I wonder how Prem's gonna kidnap her....Can't wait to read the next update

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar
me first..

*reserved*...

*unreserved*

OMG...luved it..

it was simple yet soo much emotion attached 2 it..

at on epoint while reading..i was likegettin tears in my eyes..

luved de way u showed prems emotion attached 2 his family...
aha wow tears??? :O:O

n omg...1 crore..

i wonder wat is he gonna do...? ? 😉
lmao any perdictions? :P

ooh well...cant wait 4 next week...

2 read more..2 dis one..

till den thanq 4 such an awesum part b4 my exams...
aha npp didi...and GOOD LUCK!😃

take care..

sonal.

ps. i GOT ur pm dis time...yayyy!!😆😳
Thank god..i wanted to talk to VB...

Originally posted by: hip-hop
.hmm ...shaboo jaan ..new one ..wow ..lemme read ..

JANNU! long time yar....aha can't wait too see what you think :P

Originally posted by: munam_13
wow!!! amazing part..totally different... Prem's doing all this for Preet???? and Preet has got only two months to live??? can totally understand the turmoil through which Prem is going through... life through the narrow gate is pretty tuff and situations like this compel people to leave the narrow path and follow the easy one... will be waiting for the next part... post soon😃

Basiaclly yea...it's all for Preet who has 2 months unless somethign is done =[ hmmm wonder what "path" in your words Prem will take?? thank you so much!😉

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
Shabzie, you write suspense as well as you write tragedy! Aww thank you di!

That was absolutely brilliant! Prem's desperation to save Preet, and in a way his mother as well, could be felt so palpably! I'm wondering how exactly he expects to kidnap Heer, and how he'll handle falling in love with her. (And I cannot wait to see what you do with that!)aha glad you liked it so much! :$ Hmm yea I got a lil something up my sleeve :P

Love,

Radz

and am praying, everyday. Everything will be fine. Love you!
muah! Love you didi!🤗

Originally posted by: ravioli_11
Hello hello hello.Yellow Yellow Yellow..
I come on IF and I get your PM saying you updated and I was like YAY!😃See how I bright up your day??

Wow...staring at her for a week? He's like a stalker. Normally I'd find that creepy but since Prem's being the stalker this time, I think it's cool.hot guy = prem = stalking = megahot...😃😛

Omg I feel so bad for him...Poor thing had to go through a lot and now Preet's dying... No!! I can't believe he's resorting to this to get money but I guess theres nothing else he can do....I'm guessing the girl is Heer? I wonder how Prem's gonna kidnap her....Can't wait to read the next updatehmmhmm yup thats te final straw..he has got to do soemthing naa? for his chota bhai?? glad you liked it ravy...will update soon!😃

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Deizy

@Deizy

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

hi....thanks for the pm

wonderfuull part!!!!!!!!

prem as stalker ,thats new but great

am sure am going to love this prem

update soon

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

mine! 😛

*unreserved*

Wow for Prem!😲 staring at his target for one week?😳

Awwww Preet's doomed to die?😭😭😭 you had to start it on such a sad note didn't you?😭 But aww that provides a better basis for why he's all set to hold her hostage!!😳

Shabo, I know the comments aren't that long, but seriously...this was fantastic, you showed that he had a valid motive to do what he has to....I'm just hoping that it is the same person that I hope it is!!😳😃 And it can be a better continuation of "kidnap"😉😳😳 This name's better though...for some reason, it seems to have more of an impact!😉😃

Love you,

Meera😳

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: blue_girl
hi....thanks for the pm
wonderfuull part!!!!!!!!

prem as stalker ,thats new but great

am sure am going to love this prem

update soon