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Ooh, Thanks or the PM!! Sorry I couldn't reply to the first part but loved it. I loved how you portrayed Prem's despair at not being able to save his brother, the pain at seeing his mother's condition, and his reflection on himself and his life. I absolutely adored it, great way to start- I totally understand why he has to resort to kidnapping! Obviously his 'victim' is Heer right?? I'm sure he will take good care of her 😉 But I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!!
Part two was just too good!! This girl seems very pampered, but isn't coming across as a spoilt rich kid yet. Oooh Ranvir- I would like to think that this is Ranvir from Bidaai (Kinshuk Mahajan)- I love him to bits at the moment and I will have that image in my head, no matter what anyone else thinks, lol!! But yeah, a great friendship you have shown between the two. Does Ranvir see himself as her 'Prince Charming'??- I guess you will show us that sooner or later!! But I loved the ending, especially Heer being lost in Prem's chocolate brown eyes- sounds so dreamy!! Can totally imagine his smirk, would have been so cute!! And the one line that he spoke was just so funny and cute- 'Relax' LOL!!!! Anyway, can't wait until the next part, I'm sure it will be great!! Love Zahra xx
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