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Posted: 16 years ago
*panting* im heree!!!! aaahhh....hai! what an amazing updateee!!!👏 it was out of this world....seriously!😆😳😳
tsk tsk...*shakes head* bechara prem...heer kicking him and all....heer's bothering him alot na?!😆 ooohhh prem picking up heer and feeling so attracted to her was just......beauitfully written!😍☺️👏 their chemistry is out of this worlddd!!!!☺️☺️ (even if heer's sleeping!😆)
haila! preet's on life-support?!😲 *nodding head* shabz...this isnt fair!😆 really really hope he gets better soon!
haii....*drooling* simply adore ranvir...(kinshuk) eeeh im so happy that its him! he's such a cutie pie....but sorry ranvir....heer's already taken!😆😉
overall, superb updateee!!!!!⭐️ will be waiting for the next update!😛
~sonali😊😊😊
Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i totally loved this part.Its so different from other FF.Mind blowing> i wish apna prem bhi pane show mein kuch aisa hi kare .Kitna maaza ayega.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update!!!!...soo prem is falling for heer!!!...can't wait for the next update...plz continue soon...only when you are free!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey good one...
prem will fall for heer...
this is a different ff..
loved it..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
mine! If I come back to it..
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi shabo.wow another super update..
prem is great brother!! kidnnaping a girl for his brother..............cool
update soon
Edited by blue_girl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

shabooooooo!!😆😆 first of all my apologies for getting here soo lateeee😆

and ure bf grandfather gt discharged thats great!😃

well i jus read all 3 parts of ure ff annd my mouth is still😆 it was amazingggggggggggggg!!☺️😆 seriously i love ure writing style its sooo additcing i wanted to read more n more!😲😆😆

hmmmm premm haiii chooooo chweeeet hes doing so much for his brother😭😳😆 heer seems like a sweet girl😆😆 and the 3rd part ufff prem fell for heeer staright awayy haiii!☺️☺️ and u described the scene with so much passion😃😆😆 i almost could jus visualise the scenee prem and heer heer sleeping and prem just staring at herrrr☺️😍 i like the way u write it in different POV it kinda shows us what each character is thinking😳😆😆 and the character ranvir as much as i dont like him i like himmm😆😆( if that makes sense😆) hes quite a humorous character😆

great FF! ill try to read ure updates on time now ( im sure u knw wat i mean)😳😆😆

do update soon cant wait to read moree!!😃😆😆

do add me to the pm list i need reminding😆😆

Love Asma🤗

Edited by ashmii - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu

I was quick this time, so shush it! -- And hey! I know I hate mondays, seriously my friends had to remind me twice that it was monday, and not friday. 🤣 We started sem2 last week, but heyy... our schools have almost the same timings! Dont' worry, I hate school too. *sigh* I didn't get to much hw though.
I am SO proud of you kimmi...so proud!😆lucky duck...i just wrote a test today...am positive i flunked!
YAY! H's g-f (grandfather, not girlfriend *shakes head*) Got discharged!! Woohoo... Psh, you'll prolly be constant on updating. I mean you're the most constant outta me and rinkz. 😆 Uh yea, I totally understand... I don't pm you for updates, so no need to ignore me. But hey, even if I did pm you, would you ignore me? *bats eyelashes*
Yups I know, good news eh??? Hmm yea I probably will, but my updates are also shorter then both of urs specailly rinkis!😆Yea I know you don't and yes I would. They are annoying😉

Lets comment on the part now, yesh I know, I don't deserve you. 😛😆
Totally. *winks*

And ooh! You're don't first person's too know? It seems to be all the rage in FF's these days. 🤣 But I love how you use it, telling us exactly what he's thinking too. Wowii, I feel bad for Prem though. Getting kicked for one whole hour? Ouch. Even you wouldn't be that harsh.
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I KNOW NA?Fist Meera, then I think Garmz, then you too now me...missing anyone??😉Hey I would so be that harsh, in my mind in this ff, Heer is sorta based on me...only because she is opposite Prem
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Prem in denial of being attracted to Heer was SO cutee... I loved how you described them. And then Heer tries to beat him up even in her dreams, I think? Or she just saw Prem the hottie and is chance maaring.
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I actually don't know what she was dreaming about! She just had to attract his attenin and she DID! in her sleep nonetheless! =] But yesh whatever u wanna think!
PHANDOOH! *eeekkk* ☺️ That was so hot, every word you used made it even more hotter. I could totally see it too, the phoam-scene expression on Prem's face, Heer sleeping but.. kinda awake. I totally loved it! But darn-it, Prem managed to get over the mood. I wonder how though. 😆
I really hate you for putting Preet through this. Why coudln't you have used Ranvir or something, and put Ranvir in Preets spot. *crosses arms and pouts* I dont even know who Ranvir is, but I think he's cute... the on in Bidaii right? Yea, he's really cute. BUT Preets much cuter and deserves a better place.
Oohhh! Ranvir's findin out that Heer's ghayabed? For some very odd reason I do not like Ranvir in here. Maybe cuz I like Preet, but I don't know how that associates to all... err... anyway. I loved the part...
YUP! I posted in the thread as welland now E is cursing me =] Aww no he didn't trust me, major sparks or er--pillows fluing in the next update! Aww I know and I like Preet MUCH better then Ranvir but why the hell would Prem be doing htis all for Preet? Unless he leans the other way if u get my drift *giggles*
continue soon.
YUPS!
*salutes* << dunno, just felt like doing it.
*no comment

kimz
--shabz

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛

Omg yay! His grandfather''s discharged?? That's awesome!🤗🤗Yea I know!!😃


OUCH!😆😆 "No wonder she was tired, she spent a whole hour kicking me in spot's I would have rather she didn't." 😳😆😆 Poor Prem!😳😆😆Wow you guys are all suckers! You gotto teach guys their place man!😉

I totally love this part!!!
Leaning over, I went to grab a hold of her and let go just as quickly. Shocked I stared at her. I don't know what it was, but there was a spark, it just burned desperately. What an awesome phhandooh!!!😍😍😍😍 If only this stupid HHPrem realized it as welll!😆o-m-g-! HHPrem? Really?? Wow that is so true..but this one doesn't dance as much!😉

Prem's already kinda liking her? That is so adorable!😆 That doctor does sound kinda annoying!😕😆😆Pyar kiya toh darna kya...ok random.😆But yesh the docotor brings an important twist later.

Life support?? 😔😔 you cant do that to Preet!😭Acctually I can. I'm writing it.😆

Hmm Ranvir....is Ranvir ranvir?? I don't like him much in the show either!😆 He's all sweet, but at times I feel diabetic around him!😳 Weird no?😆😆😆--aha I don't see that but to each his own!!!!!😉

Anyways mindblowing update!👏Thank oo!

Love you loads,

Meera😳

me too =]
--shabz

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Lalala. I gave up on writing in green. I don't like it anymore Aww! Tell the trusth naa? you got lazy.😆

*Edit*
He's been discharaged? See I told you everything would be ok.And I listened. 😉
Oh that reminds me of my art teacher. She was so dull. She said art wasn't supposed to be fun...WHy is your life so RANDOM?😉
And sorry to break it to you Prem, but you will get in a lot of trouble. Of course since Heer's supposed to fall in love with him, everything will work out. Aww he's attracted to her already. Love how he said stupid conscience🤣Exactly naa...poor guy is reassuring himself! LMAO, I lvoed it to! *wink*
Omg a phhandooh!!!! That nearly killed me☺️ Wait lemme go read it again. And he got shocked again? Love is in the air. He knows he's starting to fall for her so he's trying to keep his distance but we all know it won't work out.Ohh do we all know that??? I got a major twist from a "mediacl" view but it won't come in for a while!😃
Idiot doctor?🤣🤣 I agree😳 Prem needs to control himself though. First kidnap and now thought on murder? He's trying to become a full fledged criminal isn't he?Ohh cares? bad guys are hot☺️
Ooh Ranvir's gonna discover she's gone? Wonder how he'll react and what he'll do...What if Prem calls and Ranvir picks up and Prem gets all jealous hearing Ranvir😲 Don't mind me. I have no clue what I'm saying. Went to sleep at like 4 in the morning and woke up at 7 and I'm really hyper right now😆And how, may I ask, does that sceadule letyou go to school on TIME?😆
ANYWAY...loved the update. Can't wait to read the next one and see Heer's reaction. And for some reason I can here SRK in my head saying kuch kuch hota hain Anjali....Aww thanks Meeru!!
--kya karoon hayyee *hums*

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